I don't like the fact that Landan didn't send the flowers. I like that their relationship is a friendship for now.Mizani doesn't need any drama right now.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/09/11 06:57 pm
absolutely interested - shux didn't even see that twist coming like duh me!
Author's Response:
Mary thanks for be interested and there are more twist to come. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/09/11 06:15 am
So Landon's problem has now become Mizani's problem. Maddox has some nerve, I do hope that she kicks him to the curb. I don't believe that Landon would ever take Mizani for granted. Great chapter!!
Author's Response:
Pmgayles glad you like the update and Maddox does have some nerve. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 14/09/11 05:56 am
I love it but need more
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and more is coming. Kids are finally back in school and on a schedule.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 14/09/11 05:13 am
They got it bad, me likey!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for you review and I finally got the next chapter updated.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/11 05:31 am
Good job. More please.
Reviewer: guest Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/08/11 05:12 am
Mizani was out getting her groove on Maddox!!! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I love your enthusiasm pmgayles.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/11 02:38 am
I like how your story is progressing. Mizani's girlfriends are fun. Maddox better plan something really special or Mizani won't be happy. Why doesn't Mizani tell Maddox she's unhappy?
Author's Response:
What did cindi lauper say girls just want to have fun.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/11 12:24 am
ooohh hurry hurry... the bubbles are startin to rise lol
Author's Response:
lol thanks for your comments
Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/11 11:35 pm
OH, HEll to the Naw you stopped right there!! That was more wrong than tits on a bull!!! Maddox needs to get his act together or Mizani will be marrying Landon. Frankly I want her to.
Author's Response:
lol Pmgayles you are too funny. I should have the next part up tonight. You are so good for my muse.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 24/08/11 09:47 pm
Awh, star crossed lovers. Wonder he Mizani is gonna end up with??
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. It will be an interesting ride.lol
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 24/08/11 02:25 am
Landon was hoping that he would run into Mizani, I was too! Maddox is taking Mizani for granted, I am wondering how much longer she will put up with it? I like your writing style, I like the detail with which you write. You are able to paint a picture with your words. Amazing!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and I m glad you like my writing style. Everyone's words have been so encouraging.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 24/08/11 02:11 am
nice update....more please
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and I m working on the next update right now. I just wanted to respond to the reviews.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 24/08/11 01:24 am
More please, I am enjoying the suspense
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 15/08/11 08:06 am
What did Landan get Mizani involved in? Who are these people trying to follow him? Great story, please keepthe chapter coming!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 15/08/11 05:31 am
Hmmm, wonder what Landon is involved in?? Who's watching him?? Oh oh, hope Mizani doesn't get pulled into the madness.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 15/08/11 04:42 am
what does landan do?
Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/08/11 12:35 am
nice story
Author's Response:
I m so glad you like it. It keeps me motivated.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 14/08/11 08:11 pm
WTH??? Who's taking pictures of them?? Interesting start.
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting and you ll have to wait and see.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 14/08/11 07:40 am
Now I want to know what homeboy Landan do for a living, and the incognito photographer snapping shots at these two can't be good. Ready for more now!
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with my story and I look forward to posting the next chapter soon.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 14/08/11 01:18 am
I like what I'm reading so far. The way you developed the pov's of the two main players had me thinking as if was me sitting the diner reading the newspaper or it was me coming in from the rain. Totally dig. Thanks for sharing!! Now I going to find your other work. Great start!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and giving me some feedback. I looking forward to developing these characters.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 14/08/11 01:14 am
Really like your story so far. Wondering who's taking the pictures and why?
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to respond and read. Its going to get interesting.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 13/08/11 07:52 pm
Hey, I really like this a lot. I like that it's in first person narrative (gotta get back into writing in the first person) and how it shifted from POVs. I think you made the transition very well and it flowed together. Looking forward for more
Author's Response:
Thanks Jleshay for the feed back. I m looking forward to developing this story. i just posted chapter 2.
Reviewer: JLeshay Signed [Report This]Date: 13/08/11 05:10 pm
I m looking forward to how this story develops. I loved your other story,
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments. This is a great website full of awesome stories. you should become a member.
Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/08/11 03:41 pm