Girl you dont even have to finish the rest of the story you got me hooked with the cast alone.lol. damn. first chapter got me wanting more thoughl
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/08/11 02:12 am
holy hell, that cast is hot. and the beginning is very intriguing. well-played with the voices and confusion with no real resolution to what is actually happening. curious to see where this goes.
p.s. it's really easy to change the size of your pics. when you go to insert, just go to Appearance and put in the 420, the specs will automatically accomodate.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 23/08/11 01:02 am
Holy Crackatoa! What IS THIS STORY!?!?!?
Translation? I'm HOOKED. Great looking cast. Can't wait to read more :-)
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 23/08/11 12:56 am
this looks interesting :D
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/11 06:30 am
I am curious, please update soon.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/11 06:13 am
Well, damn... I can't believe there are that many fine men in one family... well, damn.
Oh, and the opening was good too. :)
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/11 05:11 am
OK....Those men are FINE...HOT...Ummm...as of right now I can't think of any more adjectives but as soon as some come...I'll let you know...Now on to the story. You got me intrigued...it seems like this group (I wouldn't say family) have been thru this kind of thing before...What happen to the little boy? You must update soon...KUDOS to your first story!!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/11 05:07 am