Please continue this story, this was too good!!
thanks so much for the love! the continuation of this story is here: http://valentchamber.com/viewstory.php?sid=1791&chapter=1. i haven't updated in some time, but plan to go back to it soon. thanks again!Reviewer: MONTEY7877 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/14 04:20 am
Yes Yes Yes! I definitely want to read the continuation of this fic. I am loving James and Cipri. Marta is the bomb to. Did we ever meet Jaiver father cause his peeps are the bomb diggity
I wish James could have found out what Jaiver really thought of her and why he wanted to marry her,
Thank you more please.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 04:28 am
Loving it! Javier needs and ass whipping he so far up his momma ass he can't breath nor think right. No James you don't need to marry his ass.
The stranger in the resturant I wasn't clear on what he looks like so will have to go back and re-read his discription.
Thank you for sharing.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 02:35 am
This is a truly great strory. I have to say that I understand why James did whaht she did, and if it where me in the same situation I would probably do the same thing. I would also love to read a continuation on this story as well if you are planning to write one.Reviewer: onyxfaerie57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 10:36 pm
Girl this story is great would B a shame & crime 2 not continue so we can C how not smart J is & the continuation of C &J + her friends Sophie/Maxine.Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 07:42 pm
You know good and well we want to read the rest of this story.. We need to fluff that is James and cipranio. I love know to know how Javier and his mother took Javier being jilted at the alter.Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 06:17 pm
Javier got what he deserved. I like,more pleaseReviewer: Jaye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 03:53 pm
I literally laughed out loud when I read about Herman muching on some fruit and as relaxed as can be while Javier's world was falling apart!
Cipriano and James, definitely would love to read more about them, both as individuals and as a couple.
Really enjoyed it I.T. cannot wait for more!Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 03:39 pm
oooh yeah.. please continue... what a shit that Javier & his mother are... go Cipri & James... and with great friends and his family too lolReviewer: Mary P Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 03:10 pm
please continue with this story your storys are so well thought out i am loving anthing that you are writing that you have writen please keep on going you are well worth the wait as all ways thank you for sharing
sinerly yours leahcar.Reviewer: always a pleasure Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 10:22 am