ahhhhhhhhhh! breath aaaahhhhhhh! wow a wolf i didn't see this coming! please update i am a stalker now. i love it!!111
Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]Date: 01/10/11 09:00 pm
This was so awesome!! I had not ideal that this was going to be a shifter story. I just thought that beast was the name for his slong!! I love it!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 01/10/11 06:30 pm
this is great. u have some typos though. i can't wait to see the progression of their relationship
Reviewer: tamshipper Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/10/11 06:13 am
Nice start......Sydney's character was refreshingly funny. Although it was somewhat confusing at times, it still managed to draw me in and keep my attention.
Reviewer: Chokltkizz Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 05:51 pm
Chapter 3 was sexing as hell!!! I had to fan myself!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 05:37 pm
Wow! Looks like the both got what they wanted in a very spicy way!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 05:32 pm
This story is really good so far...Yes, you could use an editor but thats the one of the best thing about this site (you have a great support system that is willing to give you constructive criticism)...
Keep up the good work :)
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 03:50 pm
Woo that was hot and heavy. I wonder how Syd is going to respond to the wholness of Augustus now that the first round has gotten out of the way and he has gotten some of the pent up tension released.
More please. Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 09:24 am
Our Syd is an eager little beaver aint she. She didn't even let him get everything out his mouth before she was asking for the check.LOL...
Thank you for the update more more please.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 09:06 am
DAYAM!!!!! That was hottttt!!! DAYAM!!!
nuff said.......10!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you thank you thank you ..if you think that was hawt wait til i get this next chappie i'm working on out not on;y will there be HEAT but before it's over our lovers have a much needed talk and we all find out what deep dark secrets our golden boy is holding, if u noticed he is well over 300 years of age soooo..dun dun dun...:P ty for reading and taking the time to review that make my muse and i write that much faster ...cyn~
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 08:50 am
Nice start and I wonder what stalker bitch Jessica wants as many times she called the office.
Thank you for sharing it appears to be a story I am going to enjoy very much.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 08:43 am
Yeah What the Freak was that? That chapter started out a little slow, but informative....but I see the heat is on it's way! Kiss on the palm of her hand, a nuzzle and whisper in her ear.....and finally a soft but enticing kiss to her lips! Whew, hell my coochie just gave a shout out! Give me More! Great start. I have never read the other story you prefaced this one with...so I don't have anything to judge it against....but that is sooo very alright with me! I will give you a 9 out of ten. Don't want to give you the big head yet!
Reviewer: KittyOh49 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 08:23 am
That was HOT! Thanks for the update. I'm loking forward to what happens next with Sydney and Augustus.
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 06:15 am
*APPLAUSE* this is awesome, i'm definitely hooked!
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 05:16 am
You cannot leave the end their. I am so going to need another chapter. I am ready to find out what he really is. Please update again. I love it
Author's Response:
smiles wide there ya go... a new chappie just went up. more to come just not tonight ...ty for your review til tomorrow cyn~
Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 02:54 am
love it i want more more more
Reviewer: ladynaik Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 02:46 am
I LOVE your character development and the extra care you place into the small details. The plot is a GREAT one and I really think you're off to an amazing start! Only complaint: Find an editor. I'm sure your busy and proofreading a biziillion times probably isn't on your list of things to do but I think it could improve the story ten fold if you could eliminate the few grammar problems and sentence structure issues you're having. I love it though! PLEASE PLEASE continue. I must have more (:
Reviewer: Janey Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 02:43 am
Wow he got it bad for Syd. Ever Chapter is keeping me intrigued.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 02:41 am
A cliffhanger?!? uh uh you need to submit a chapter real soon!!
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 02:28 am
Thank God he was on using the ho for sex, to bad that she doesn't know the difference!! I love Augustus, so he has had feelings for Sydney for 7 years and she has been feeling him as well. Alright then, bring on the smoking hot sex!!! Such a wonderful story!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 01:43 am
Well Ok, great update.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 12:51 am
Thanks for the fast update.
Augustus's daydream was HOT and his feelings for Sydney were sweet. Can't wait for the next part and hope Sydney can cope with his "beast".
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 12:38 am
Oh I m hooked. Me likey .heheh
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/11 12:29 am
You got my attention! Waiting to see what happens next!
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 11:56 pm
Wow I like the way syndey describe things it is funny. I am all ears to hear what August got up his sleeves I kinda got a clue but will wait.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 11:19 pm