Wow! This is a really good start. I never read your other story, so nothing is familiar to me. And I am VERY interested with this beginning. Hope you update soon.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/09/11 10:49 pm
Hmmm, I really like the central character actors you chose.
I can hardly wait to start reading.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 10:48 pm
Interesting start. Augustus seems too good to be believable. I mean, he gives her this internship and a great job at his firm, studies with her during her bar preparations (which is hell--I've been through it), gives her a fly apartment for cheap, gives foot massages, and is her personal trainer and fashion advisor. It makes me wonder what Sydney is brining to the table. Not that she is a slacker--but as a Harvard grad, I wonder why she needs this super wonderful man to swoop in and save her. Why does she need so much saving?
Looking forward to Chapter 2. I wonder if there is more behind Augustus that will be revealed?
Reviewer: Candace Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 10:26 pm
i'm excited to see where this story goes!
Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 10:24 pm
wow if that is a taste of what is 2 come can't wait 4 the next ch.
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 10:19 pm
Ohhhh! Loving it! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: ms dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 09:39 pm
was she dreaming, CYN? hmmmmmmm
Reviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 09:20 pm
THIS IS INTERESTING!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 09:06 pm
Thats it come young lady, it was getting good:) update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 08:52 pm
UMMM...chica, u need to hurry up with the next update! Me like. Me like!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 08:48 pm
It is a good start. I love the characters. Please update another couple if chapters. I want to know what he needs to discuss!!!
Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 08:42 pm
I want to know what he wants to discuss. It seems like he's been sort of into her for the past seven years. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 08:15 pm
I like this alot. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 08:11 pm
That was a very interesting start. I had a feeling Augustus had feelings for Sydney, just from everything he's done for her, but now I want to see what he wants to discuss.
Off topic, but that part about Thai food on Tremont Ave. made me think of an old show I used to watch. LOL
Please post the next part soon.
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 08:10 pm
I love any story that cast J Hud as the female lead. I am loving Augustus and Sydney, they are so in love with each other. So what them so long to acknowledge there feelings. Who is the crazy ho Jessica, were she and Augustus married? Me likey, please continue!!
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much for the review and yes lol Jessica is a ho ...working on chapter 2 right now it's going to be from Augustus's point of view, hopefully i will have the answers to your questions in that chapter i hope to have it out tonight if not first thing in the morning thank you and keep an eye out for chapter 2
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 07:19 pm