That was getting good, where by all that is holy is the rest?
Got my mind already for this and then u stop, I'm hurt.
Sorry to hurt you Kim. Hoping to have another update soon. Thanks for reading.Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/10/11 04:54 am
Monte, you fool! She should have saw this comig a mile away.Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/10/11 02:57 am
Well, I hope o girl is smart as her Princeton education is giving her credit for before she finds herself in the deep. Firstly, she used her physical assets to get her the position and she just let this Marcellous character be too much touchy feely without setting any boundaries from the beginning. She may be book smart but not street smart per say. She should have listened to Pauly.Reviewer: LoveDrama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/10/11 10:51 pm
She should've listened to Pauly instead of being stupid. I'm guessing at the last minute she gonna get marcello off her run crying to Pauly. Pauly is gonna come after marcello. Blah blah blah somewhere in all that Pauly's gonna hit it.
When it comes down to it, she should not have pretended to b interested in marcello when she wasn't. It's her own fault.
In your analysis you are giving both Pauly and Monte way too much credit.Reviewer: Jaye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/10/11 08:39 pm
I love your story so far!! I love Jersey Shore and Pauly D is definitely my favorite! He always seems so funny and nice and I like how to brought out the side we rarely see in the show in the first chapter.
Keep up the good work and can't wait to read more :)Reviewer: crazykeely429 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 05:49 pm
I loved it! I am glad they are starting to notice each other in a more positive light. I can't wait for things to heat up even more. I can tell Monte will have some problems with the owner of the club when he realizes she doesn't plan on returning his affections. Oh well, keep up the great work! Great start to my weekend.Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 10:38 pm
Loved it! Y do I smell trouble in the works with Marcello though? R is it my over active imagination?
Thank you for sharing.
Thanks for the feedback. Without spoiling the story, Marcello is nothing but trouble.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/10/11 11:16 pm
love itReviewer: babyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/10/11 08:35 pm
Sparks are already flying and they just met. I like who you have depicting Marcello can't see him as a hard nose business man or womanizer but it's working for him in this story.
Thank you for updating and sharing.
Until next time.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/10/11 12:01 am
Good start and I can't wait till things pick up. I really hope she has the skill to back her up or Pauly will really let her have it. Update, please!Reviewer: nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/10/11 10:51 pm
Original. I am already intrigued. Update soon, please!Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/10/11 01:51 am
cant wait to start reading this, i secretly love pauly dReviewer: underrestrains Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/10/11 01:06 pm