Hi, No offense Carolina heart but the story has stalled and badly. The last couple ( several) chapters have been as predictable as Martha Stewart Living. There should be some momentum building up to this wedding but there is NONE!
I would prefer that you take more time between the chapters and really create this story. Right now the spark between Diedre and Scott has puttered out.
Sorry, but that's the way I see it - you are killing your own story.
BarbReviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/11/11 04:46 am
I can't wait for the wedding. the last chap. was short, but, I am happy for anything.
Thanks.Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/11/11 04:18 am