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Title: Without a Hitch

Loved their vows, especially Deidra’s. She isn’t the typical warm-fuzzy, starry-eyed leading lady – actually she comes off kind of cold yet there’s a vulnerability about her that makes the female she is likable. She’s definitely guarded; a wall surrounded her heart for some time now but Scott certainly broke through that barrier didn’t he.  One thing that’s really telling about her persona is the fact that children love her…and she loves them; she’s just scared about becoming a mother – not exactly sure why that is – maybe it’s because she career-driven, I don’t know but perhaps there’s more to the story as yet to be revealed.


Their wedding song was so a Scott-thing-to-do and very appropriate. Loved it.


Looking forward to seeing what Scott thinks about all that he’s learned, what he thinks of the wife he just met compared to the woman he ‘knows’.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/11/11 09:36 pm

Title: Without a Hitch

Beautiful!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/11/11 11:59 pm

Title: Without a Hitch

Diedre really annoys me and with each chapter the annoyance grows.  But Scott, Emi and the rest of rest of girls I love.  Sam makes my teeth itch, but everyone else is cool. I am so glad that they got married but I just want know why they still don't have a child.  When his accident occurred they had been for five years right?  Why was Deidre denying him his dream of being a father?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/11/11 07:13 pm

Title: Without a Hitch

Great...just Great.

sweet wedding and simple .

Love it.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/11/11 02:05 pm

Title: Without a Hitch

Carolina heart,

you had me at Pachelbel's Canon and sealed the deal with Elvis Presley's “Can’t Help Falling in Love.”. This chapter was really lovely, very funny & real!

Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/11/11 11:50 am

Title: Without a Hitch

What a great wedding! It sounded perfect! More please!!!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/11/11 10:15 am

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