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Title: Unexpected

Oooohhhh loved getting a 3 chapter update! Thoroughly love this story!

So sad Jessica had to die. So cool that Deidre and Scott adopted Rachel and ended up with twins!

Cannot wait for more chapters of this story and regretting that it may end soon!

Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: Kayden Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/11 04:48 pm

Title: Unexpected

Deidre you still make my teeth itch, you are still remarkably selfish.  I feel so bad for Scott he thinks that she would have an abortion.  I would put that past that heifer, but I know from a previous chapter that she had the babies.  I love this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/11 08:20 am

Title: Family Christmas

Aww, give Scott the chance to father a biological child and Rachel to be a big sister.  I still hate Sam!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/11 08:12 am

Title: Rachel

Wow, that was awesome!!  I didn't expect for Jessica to die I really liked her, but I am glad that Deidre and Scott adopted her.  I am so happy that Deidre realized how good Scott is with children.  I love it they had twins, will Scott get a boy?  I love this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/11 08:03 am

Title: Unexpected

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/11 05:07 am

Title: Unexpected

I knew that heffa was pregnant~ yeah! And baby makes....4 I mean 5. I always say, if you are going to do it....do it up in big fashion....Having twins is what I mean by that!  Yeah

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/11 04:35 am

Title: Rachel

Not hating just a little sad, that a character had to die. I understand why you did it....but?  Now Deidre has no choice but to become the mom she was trying not to become.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/11/11 04:05 am

Title: Unexpected

great update.  That was a surprise but I think Diedre would come around she is a great mommy to Rachel..

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/11 03:28 am

Title: Family Christmas

Great update

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Date: 28/11/11 03:10 am

Title: Rachel

Great update.  Didnt see that one coming.  They would be great parents. 

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/11 01:52 am

Title: Unexpected

The title of this chapter is perfect because i was not expecting them to have kids or twins! Loved it, keep the chapters coming!!!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/11/11 11:16 pm

Title: Characters

Can we see the little girls??!!!! They sound so adorable!

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/11 11:07 pm

Title: Unexpected

ahh i feel for deidre but if she could handle 'getting' rachel at the drop of a hat, she can handle this. at least she has 6 months to figure it out.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/11 11:02 pm

Title: Family Christmas

i'm glad that rachel, deidre,and scott were able to adjust so well.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/11 09:56 pm

Title: Rachel

well dang, i liked jessica. wasn't expecting that one.

Reviewer: grumpriah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/11 09:44 pm

Title: Without a Hitch

Loved their vows, especially Deidra’s. She isn’t the typical warm-fuzzy, starry-eyed leading lady – actually she comes off kind of cold yet there’s a vulnerability about her that makes the female she is likable. She’s definitely guarded; a wall surrounded her heart for some time now but Scott certainly broke through that barrier didn’t he.  One thing that’s really telling about her persona is the fact that children love her…and she loves them; she’s just scared about becoming a mother – not exactly sure why that is – maybe it’s because she career-driven, I don’t know but perhaps there’s more to the story as yet to be revealed.


Their wedding song was so a Scott-thing-to-do and very appropriate. Loved it.


Looking forward to seeing what Scott thinks about all that he’s learned, what he thinks of the wife he just met compared to the woman he ‘knows’.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/11/11 09:36 pm

Title: Without a Hitch

Beautiful!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/11/11 11:59 pm

Title: Without a Hitch

Diedre really annoys me and with each chapter the annoyance grows.  But Scott, Emi and the rest of rest of girls I love.  Sam makes my teeth itch, but everyone else is cool. I am so glad that they got married but I just want know why they still don't have a child.  When his accident occurred they had been for five years right?  Why was Deidre denying him his dream of being a father?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/11/11 07:13 pm

Title: Without a Hitch

Great...just Great.

sweet wedding and simple .

Love it.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/11/11 02:05 pm

Title: Without a Hitch

Carolina heart,

you had me at Pachelbel's Canon and sealed the deal with Elvis Presley's “Can’t Help Falling in Love.”. This chapter was really lovely, very funny & real!

Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/11/11 11:50 am

Title: Without a Hitch

What a great wedding! It sounded perfect! More please!!!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/11/11 10:15 am

Title: Sunday Morning

The wedding....yes!!! Cannot wait for the rest of this story, I am glad there is more!

I am so addicted to this romance. I love your story!

Cannot wait for now!

I am in love with Scott...

Reviewer: Kayden Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/11/11 01:54 am

Title: Sunday Morning

slowing down? ah man, i was enjoying these frequent updates. i like getting my fix. great updates!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/11 09:04 am

Title: Sunday Morning

Hi, No offense Carolina heart but the story has stalled and badly. The last couple ( several)  chapters have been as predictable as Martha Stewart Living. There should be some momentum building up to this wedding but there is NONE!

I would prefer that you take more time between the chapters and really create this story. Right now the spark between Diedre and Scott has puttered out.

Sorry, but that's the way I see it - you are killing your own story.

Barb

Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/11/11 04:46 am

Title: Sunday Morning

The wedding......this is going to be SWEET!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/11/11 04:26 am

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