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Title: Chapter 20 Wedding Day

Yes please continue,after reading this story I went and I watched the movie Corrina,Corrina again and a lots of things that was left unanswers was answer through your story. You are doing a fantasic job picking up where the movie left off,can't wait for the next update.Great good as always.



Author's Response:

thanks!  I loved the movie too.  The honeymoon will be coming up in a few days...

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Wedding Day

OhPlease,Please, give us some hot married sex from these two. It just doesn't seem complete without it after all that foreplay...

Author's Response:

OK, it's coming after I update my other two stories.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 02:47 am

Title: Chapter 20 Wedding Day

yes, please continue the story. You have done A WONDERFUL job thus far in telling the story.

Reviewer: Caligirl65 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 11:05 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Wedding Day

The wedding was beautiful. I hope the reporter's story doesn't cause them much grief. I'm sure some people with have negative opinions of the marriage no matter how the writer spins it. Molly is adorable. I almost wanted them to take her to Hawaii too. Lol at Manny calling Harold's wife to come out. I love this story.



Author's Response:

Now now...if Molly goes to Hawaii how are we going to have that hot hot sex and relieve all those pent up frustrations.  No Molly needs to stay with her new cousins and maybe a baby bro or sis will come back to her in the oven.  LOL

Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 07:57 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Wedding Day

I give this two thumbs up!!  Please continue with honeymoon!!



Author's Response:

Oh it's coming....

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 07:39 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Wedding Day

yes yes yes

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 04:26 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Wedding Day

Yeah!! Hot Honeymoon and then some. ( LOL)  I loved the movie and this story, you did it good by filling in the blanks.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I loved this movie too.  I thought Ray and Whoopi were hot together and wished that they had gone into their relationship a little further.  I think I'm going to continue this story after my other updates.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 03:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Manny's Decision

YESSSS!!! You've captured the movie perfectly!!! GREAT JOB!!!

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 07:08 am

Title: Chapter 18 Corrina's Fear

A great update,I wonder what what Jenny is planning with Manny cousin Harold.Whatever it is I hope it backfirer.I'm loving how Sid and his wife are being so supported,and what a sweetheart Mrs.Singleton is.I know Jenny will freak out when she find out what her auntie did for Corrina.Thanks for another awesome update.



Author's Response:

LOL  Jenny is going to be livid when she finds out what her aunt has done!  Harold's wife needs to come and grab him by his collar and take him back to SC.  More is coming...

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 18 Corrina's Fear

You are doing an excellent job with this story!  Love the balance between Manny and Corrina.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  More is on the way....

Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 12:33 am

Title: Chapter 18 Corrina's Fear

Harold is going to allow himself to be used by Jenny.  I love that he lied to her about being divorced.  I really want Jenny to sleep with Harold and then find out that he is still married.  I want her humiliated and gossiped about by her so called friends.  Harold I just want be beaten with an inch of his life by Manny.  I love the Mrs. Singleton is on Corrina's side.  I can't wait for Jenny to find out, it will be explosive!!  Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

LOL   I only have two more chapters written, but I may continue this after I update my other stories.  LOL  the thought of Jenny being humiliate is very tempting...

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 11:21 pm

Title: Chapter 17 Manny's Cousin Harold

I don't like Manny's cousin Harold!!!!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 11:03 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Corrina's Fear

Harold is so stupid. He sees a pretty face and doesn't realizes he's being used.  Jenny will stop at nothing to get what she wants. Glad Sid and Shirl are at least trying to accept Corrina and Manny's relationship. Like chapters 17 & 18 alot. :-)



Author's Response:

Yes Harold is going to see anoher side of Jenny real soon.  LOL .  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 08:58 pm

Title: Chapter 16 Corrina's Confrontation

I love the idea of picking up a story where the movie left off. Unfortunately, Hollywood's treatment of attraction between interracial characters doesn't portray the tenderness and physical intimacy demonstrated by a couple to the same extent as it is portrayed when the couple is white. I'm not saying that was the case with the Corrina movie because I know it was a family friendly movie and only contained appropriate content. That said, I'm really excited to see Manny and Corrina's love and desire continue to grow  and I'm enjoying the erotic details (: You are doing a beautiful job and I'm sure you will create a more fulfilling ending than the screenplay.



Author's Response:

You are right on point, Neighbor Lady. I went to the movie and I really enjoyed it because Whoopi was very popular, but Hollywood didn't consider her worthy of any love.  When Corrina came out, (1994) I felt that progress was made, but I was blown away when it was revealed that Ray didn't get to kiss her on the lips and that they just made it look that way.  My mind went back to the 60's and Star Trek.  Thirty years and still no progress? SMH.  However I read that Ray Liotta really looked up to Whoopi and felt like they both were given a raw deal so he grabbed her and kissed her point blank on The View because he never got to do it in the movie.  Corrina, Corrina was family friendly, but come on....a kiss on the lips with a black woman would make it less family friendly?  LOL.  Thanks for your wonderful review!

Reviewer: Neighbor Lady Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 08:29 am

Title: Chapter 16 Corrina's Confrontation

It's don't surprise me that you have another hit on your hands. Loving everything about this story thank you for posting it,looking forward for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks Meko.  I wrote this in 2009 and stopped at the weddig due to lack of interest. I may continue it and do the wedding night after chapter 20.  We'll see. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 04:51 am

Title: Chapter 16 Corrina's Confrontation

Manny is turning chick out! I love it! Brenda, you know good girls don't give BJs.. :-)

Author's Response:

LOL.  The rules were:  Good girls don't give BJ's.  Good girls turn out the lights. Man on top only!  Good girls don't act like they really want sex...  I could go on and on.  (Hee hee) 

Manny is going to turn poor Corrina out!   LOL 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 11:15 pm

Title: Chapter 16 Corrina's Confrontation

That racist heifer Jenny is on crazy B!!!    Why is it any of her business who Corrina is marrying or who Manny is involved with?  I don't believe that Corrina ever had good sex, Manny is about to blow her mind and her back out!!!



Author's Response:

Jenny is a woman scorned.  She can't accept the fact that Corrina won out over her.  She should move on, but she is a troublemaker.

No,Corrina never had good sex, but she's about to fnd out and yes, Manny will blow her mind.  When I wrote this in 2009, I stopped at the wedding due to lack of interest.  I didn't write the wedding night, but now I'm having second thoughts.  LOL

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 10:45 pm

Title: Chapter 16 Corrina's Confrontation

I wish a bus would hit Jenny, that chick is annoying! I love Manny because he really wants to get Corrina, so he can show her how to get him. Another awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Manny is making progress with his woman.  It's hard sometimes to change what has been ingrained into your mind, but Corrina is about to get her mind blown!  LOL  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 08:20 pm

Title: Chapter 16 Corrina's Confrontation

Damn that Jenny. Corrina is right she is pathetic. Manny isn't the only man in the world. Jenny is going about it all wrong. No one likes to be threaten. Yeah for Corrina starting to rethink her views on sex. Girl if you want your man you needed to let go of the old ways!Both chapters were so fun to read!



Author's Response:

The old ways die hard. The prim and proper Corrina is about to come out of that shell. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 06:06 pm

Title: Chapter 14 Corrina's Concern

Great update.

Glad it is going slow w/these two.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 12:42 am

Title: Chapter 13 Manny's Determination

Excellent

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/11 10:31 pm

Title: Chapter 14 Corrina's Concern

Corrina looks like your man wants to open you up to new experiences. All I can say is enjoy the ride! No one likes a selfish man in bed or out. Nice chapters!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I read several interesting articles that talked about black sexuality (one was in Ebony several years ago).

Because of the stereotypes in the 40's and 50'sabout black men (being sexually deviants) and black women (being loose) blacks were very conservative sexually.  While there has always been an element that wasn't conservative, for the most part blacks portrayed themselves as such to others and among themselves.    Oral sex was a big taboo and black men didn't admit to giving it because it made them feel like less of a man.  I was really surprised.  Things started to loosen up in the 60's and blacks became more open minded.  Thanks for the review.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/11/11 05:32 pm

Title: Chapter 14 Corrina's Concern

Great update.  I love that they are talking about everything! 



Author's Response:

Yes, surprisingly enough the attitudes about sex in the 50's were a lot different than they are today, especially in the black community.  I've read several eye opening articles and it will be reflectedin this story.  thanks for your review.

Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/11 04:33 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Corrina's Proposition

Loved the update!  Very nice.

Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/11 01:48 am

Title: Chapter 12 Corrina's Proposition

I love your story. There is always a fly in the ointment! Jenny just can't accept that Manny doesn't want her.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/11/11 01:41 am

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