I thought this was off to a great start. I am interested in learning more about Valarie since she comes off a bit vapid and insecure. I di d have a couple of laugh momemnts which were definitly good. I am interesed in seeing where this could go and I like not knowing fo rnow.Reviewer: Fatal Mars Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/11/14 06:33 am
Curious to know... How is this story completed?Reviewer: Emerald Taurus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/06/12 05:21 pm
This is a one-shot story which ends in this chapter #3; however, it does not convey the posted summary: the addiction that is supposed to happen to Valerie from calling the escort agency did not happen, actually she never called.
The get together of friends in this chapter was nice and i liked Valerie's attraction to Caleb, they could possibly make a good couple!
Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/12 05:09 pm
Who is the very cute and lovely chocolate girl in the banner. In the cast photos I see Valerie, whom i presume to be the leading lady in this story, from the photos she is a very light skinned girl, really could pass for any race, but certainly is not the Black girl in the banner, who grabs my attention!
Date: 01/02/12 04:37 pm
You need to write more. I loved your one shot and wish it was longer so I'm happy that your redoing it but since I kinda know how its gonna end i want to know how you will progress with the story. So I will be waiting for what you have next, I;m sure it will be great.Reviewer: ann Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/11/11 12:00 am
i like this new story plot now there is so much more to look forward to and see instetad of just a one shot omg keep it comingReviewer: underrestrains Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 11:38 pm