How much as has this woman change, that he wouldn't recognize a childhood friend that he slept with?
I laughed at the fact that he's babysitting his own kid and doesn't know it.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/09 05:23 am
I love this story!!!! YOU HAVE TO KEEP UPDATING THIS ONE AS WELL AS THE OTHERS!!! I can't get enough of them! Wonderful characters! Great Plot! Excellent story!!!
Reviewer: aquaBLUEpetals Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/01/09 01:51 am
OH MY GOSH YOU FINALLY UPDATED THE FANTASTIC STORY. SOOO RICK AND KARMA MADE A BABY TOGETHER AND HER NAMES NICOLE, OH MY THIS IS GOING TO BE AN AWESOME, AWESOME WHIRLWIND. PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP THIS STORY COMING IT HAS BEEN SOO LONG AND NOW WITH A BIG BANG CLIFF HANGER I NEED MUCH, MUCH MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 18/01/09 01:11 pm
Please Please Please don't stop this story, it's really interesting and I love how you inserted Rick, Neil and Karma's past into the story. I wonder who will be the first to figure out just who Karma is Rick or Neil, it would be nice if it was Neil and he approach Karma with it, and agree to keep Karma's secret to teach Rick a lesson. Have fun with this story. Great job.
Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/09 09:36 am
Rick is a prick. I hope she has more torture in store for him than just humiliating him by having him dress in a school girl's uniform while raking her leaves. He completely blew her off when she was trying to tell him about the baby...It will be interesting to see if he forms a bond with his daughter while babysitting her. Good job. Glad ot see this story continue.
Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/09 06:21 am
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/01/09 06:15 am
Rick continues to be clueless. I wonder what would be the 'ah-ha' moment. LOL.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 05:05 am
yay you finally updated this, I've been waiting!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/09 04:33 am
Finally. I have been waiting months for this update. I love the twist. Update soon, dear.
Reviewer: C Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/09 04:18 am
i hope u do more chapters 4 this 1 karma b***h
Reviewer: neeenee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/12/08 05:31 pm
The first two chapters were great I can't wait to read the rest of this story.
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 03:39 pm
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/12/08 04:56 pm
I love this piece! I love the casting. Kids in high school can be so damn cruel. But I'm wandering if Karma was preggers after? She and her mom moved out of town....and she's so private now; has never given interviews. I cracked up when she told him she wanted him to be her bitch. LOL. And what a horndog Rick is! F*cking the help??? LOL Great start. More please :) Love the banner ;)
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 24/09/08 07:59 pm
Come on!!! You see us begging for the rest. This story is just to good to let go. OMGosh I just can't wait to see what Karma does to him and btw good job in the use of her name. And like another reader I 'm guessin a child was involved.I'm so excited. I've read a lot of your books and watched your great trailers on youtube. I finally figured out that the girl on youtube and here were the same person. I'm 18 myself and am glad to see a fellow teen writing so powerfully. Anyways you left me hanging some of your books esp. the ones involving Asians I can't wait to read the rest.
I talk to much, Nice job,
Tempress
Author's Response: I will try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible. My creative flow has evaporated and I'm waiting to get it back. I did manage to kick out a new chapter of Ki's fashions. I'm in the process of editing it though. Reviewer: Tempress Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/09/08 05:37 pm
Very entertaining so far. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Village Signed [Report This]Date: 24/09/08 06:38 am
Good lord, I can't wait for K. and Rick to go toe to toe, that's gonna be pretty damn entertaining. Once again, I love how you use flashbacks in this story, loving this story period really. :)
Author's Response: There meeting will be...interesting to say the least.
[Report This]Date: 21/09/08 11:50 pm
Oh, I know I said this on TST, but I'll say it again. This was such a great start and I'm very happy you posted this on the site two. You rock Quania, great job!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 21/09/08 11:43 pm
Ditto on all counts Robin!
Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed [Report This]Date: 20/09/08 02:51 am
I am pumped to see how this progresses. I do wonder if there is or was a child involved.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/08 09:37 pm
You just cant stop there.please update
Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/08 01:13 pm
i like the plot of this story very original great chapters please update soon
Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed [Report This]Date: 19/09/08 10:40 am
This is a really good story. Can't wait for more!!!!
Reviewer: kaci Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/08 05:46 am
"It was early Saturday morning, the first day of the month, the day that Rick would essentially become K. Jones’ slave. Neil vaguely wondered if the deal they struck with the supermodel was illegal. It had to violate the constitution in someway."
This story is hysterical! I really love it. I hope Karma really makes him pay for what he did to her.
Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/08 04:40 am