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I would like a revised version of Metempsychosis!! Sil te plait! When I first read it I read it over again et again! Hehe, It was intense! Very intense! XD!. LIke what would have happened if she proved him with a Mental Disorder going on up there and he got out and they got jiggy with it after the conviction. How he would react to their love or something. That story was the bomb. Lol. Write more please! Bye!

Reviewer: LunarAngel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/10/09 05:29 am

Title: Character Pics

I love this storyy!!!I wonder..could you make a sequel story without him dying and her proving he was crazy??

if so I would love to see how their love story would turn out...XD!!



Author's Response: THANK YOU!  Hmmm, hadn't given much thought to a part II but it might be cool having some sort of alternative universe story, we'll see thanks for the inspiration.

Reviewer: Mikkii!! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/03/09 12:27 am

Title: Story

freakin A. That was intense. I really really liked it. You did a great job

Author's Response: Thanks again!

Reviewer: bree Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/08 03:41 am

Title: Story

freakin A. That was intense. I really really liked it. You did a great job

Author's Response: Thank Bree, I'm glad you liked it and it was intense, that was definitely what I was going for!  Thanks for reading and the review.

Reviewer: bree Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/08 03:35 am

Title: Character Pics

Love, Love, Love the cast.. Off to read.

Author's Response: Thanks Zeta, I'm glad you like!  The guys all seem to be getting a good reaction hahaha.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/11/08 09:56 pm

Title: Character Pics

Also, just wanted to say again the cast...perfect fits, particularly with Seth and maybe it's just my love for Sam/Jared, I don't know... And funny how they never saw each other...could it be that Rachel was a shut-in when she wasn't at work? And had been since meeting up with Nathan? Her behaviors probably began to change after her encounter with this particular patient. God, this was really just so good and I'll probably have something else to say about it LOL Just awesome. Again, you ladies are wearing Grindhouse down and it's nothing but lovely LOL

Author's Response:

Yeah Jared is my hot boy crush of the moment!  This cast was so much fun for me, I have to give credit to BlackMa for Billy Crudup and Noah Wylie those were great calls for what I wanted to do.  For me in my head I saw Rachel as being a recluse and unable to see anything beyond being obsessed with Nathan and these either real or imagined notes she was literally trapped in this world and I didn't want the reader to be 100% sure which part was real and which part was imagined.  Anyways thanks again for reading and the stars and the review and the thoughts, I'm a total review whore hahaha.

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/08 05:15 pm

Title: Story

greatO,

Ummm....can I say this was fucking AWESOME! Seriously, you are a storyteller! I love the wrap-around; first Nathan then her, ALL these characters subject to Metempsychosis; all slave to it, even. This was such a good piece! You guys are killing it with the Grindhouse stories. And loved your mention of Man Ray...dude was weird, but had some interesting pieces. I'm recalling one with fur or something...Did he do the sculptural piece called "Seven Brides" or am I thinking of another artists. Man Ray...something with a sink....anyhoo, this was just so good. And the scene in the alley...HAWT! Poor Rachel was going crazy and had been it seemed since first 'meeting' Nathan. Maybe metempsychosis occurs through osmosis LOL She didn't seem to really begin flipping until they touched hands. All in all, great story, excellent storytelling. More please? Do it again, please? LOL ;)



Author's Response: Thank you Madame Z!  I enjoy Man Ray but actually I was inspired because I was watching a tv show about a famous unsolved hollywood murder (the black dahlia) and one of the theories was the killer was a fan of surrealist work and the way the body was left was an hommage to Man Ray.  So when I started writing the story I immediately thought about that and it continued from there.  I don't know as I was writing the story I wasn't really sure at what point Rachel lost it, if she ever lost it at all and whether this idea of Metempsychosis was real or imagined so it's really great hearing other people's thoughts about it.  I had a lot of fun writing this story on my list of to do pieces is a story based on the show Poltergiest the Legacy and I think there will be more of this kind of thing in it so I look forward to doing it.  Anyways thank you so much for reading and the great review and the pretty stars!

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/08 05:12 pm

Title: Story

that was sooo wicked

love it! very smart!



Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you loved it.

Reviewer: j_whispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/10/08 07:41 am

Title: Story

This was so, so good. Scary, sexy, sad....just...everything. I loved the interplay between Nathan and Rachel, and her slowly going insane, it was hauntingly creepy. And your writing was top notch, you always blow me away, but even more so with this, I loved it. Thanks so much for posting this Greatodin, loved every word!

Author's Response: Thanks TBG I'm so glad you liked it!  This just started coming to me and it felt really good writing it, better than anything I've done in a while so I'm pleased that it's gone over so well.  Seems we all have a certain weakspot for the literary psychopath and I had so much fun writing Nathan.  Thanks for reading, the stars and the review!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/10/08 12:13 am

Title: Story

Look at me, I was so excited I couldn't even spell speechless right.  Good grief!



Author's Response: Hahaha thanks JV!

Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 11:52 pm

Title: Story

SPEACHLESS!  SPELLBINDING! SUPERB! SPOOKY!

 

Excellent! I love works such as this: a blend of police drama, psychological, supernatural thriller type genre.  The opening scenes immediately reminded me of Silence of the Lambs but this was much more terrifying as Hannibal would say. (As the story progressed I also thought of Denzel’s Fallen.)  The prose, dialogue and most certainly the visual aids of Nathan’s victims were a winning combination.  The ending scene was fabulous!

Totally took me by surprise as I’d almost decidedly passed on reading it but the title and its definition repeatedly caught my attention.

Two thumbs up.



Author's Response: This is an awesome review, I can't tell you how cool it is the comparison to SOTL.  It wasn't in my head when I was writing it but definitely an influence on my darker writing.  Fallen on the other hand was definitely a direct influence that and an episode of Poltergiest: the Legacy so glad I was able to catch that feeling.  And I'm glad you liked the visuals, I liked using the Man Ray visuals to help imagine how the police photos would look.  The ending I changed and I'm happy that it has gone over so well.  So excited that you were going to give this a pass and decided to take a chance, love to hear that kind of stuff.  Thanks for the review and the stars!

Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 11:46 pm

Title: Story

Greato, that was AWESOME! Very disturbing and spine tingling.  Great response to the challenge.  I particularly like how you captured Nathan's crazy.  When he was calling her name in the courtroom, I got the chills.  The part where you described how much time she was spending with him in sessions and her actally kind of falling for him was hella creepy and what can I say about the ending.  It was super creepy and just not right! LOL! I believe his soul was inhabiting Adam but not so much Seth.  I think she was losing it by that point.  Anyway, great stuff! I give it two thumbs up! :)

Author's Response: Thanks idjunkie.  I have to say I loved writing Nathan, especially while envisioning him as Christian Bale I could literally see the dialogue flowing out of his mouth.  I always wonder with these psychiatrists that spend a lot with killers and how that impacts them so it was really interesting writing it all play out.  When I was writing this I wanted to be ambigious at which point Rachel loses it, if she loses it at all, if Metempsychosis was real or the thought of it drove her to insanity so I love hearing your thoughts about it.  Thanks for reading the review and stars and the thumbs up!

Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 04:57 pm

Title: Story

Welcome back and bravo! That was hella good and creepy!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad to be back!  Was aiming for creepy so glad mission was accomplished hahaha.  Thanks for the review and the stars!

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 04:29 pm

Title: Story

That was awesome, and oh so creepy, I love every twist and turn, and wondering if what she imagined was real....and perfect choices for the characters, Bale just grabs me every time, and Jared, beautiful Jared

Very scary, and creepy, and good story!



Author's Response: Thankyou Rocky13!  I'm glad you liked it, I wanted to leave it open as to what part of it was real and what part of it wasn't and it feels really good to have gotten that across.  Bale immediately jumped into my head for me there was no other choice for Nathan, and Jared I have a crush on him right now, the other guys I had help from valent forum on that but I'm pretty happen with how it turned out and I'm glad you liked it as well.  Thank you so so much for the review and the stars and for reading!

Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 08:58 am

Title: Story

*sits down* greatodinsraven.  This kicked SO MUCH ASS.  I loved it.  I was reading this story and my phone rang and it scared the hell out of me.  That's how good this was. 

I loved Nathan and his obsession with Rachel. (funny that you used Cristian Bale--Batman/Rachel--ha, you hate it I know).  The thing with the red dress was just creepy goodness.  Loved that moment in the courtroom, it was so intense. And her getting that letter but then it not being a letter? I knew something was up then.

The love scene with Adam was freaking hot.  Seriously, damn.  And then the lead pipe *shakes head* and her attacking Seth? Wow.  I love how you left it open whether the letters were real or not. And then her transformation into a Nathan like killer with the new psychiatrist becoming her target.  Excellent.  I cant' say it enough, I think this is my favorite thing you've done so far.

The pictures were a great addition. They added another layer of darkness that made it that much more creepy.  And I really liked how Rachel knew she'd crossed the line with Nathan, but was drawn to him in spite of all of the messed up shit he'd done.  She was a little shady to start with in a way, which made her character that much more fascinating.

Bravo chica.  Just an awesome piece of work. Take a bow.



Author's Response:

So I'm pretty sure this is the best review I've ever gotten, I'm a little giddy right now actually thank you so much for this.  I had felt a little bit off of my writing game lately and when I was writing this one it was so natural and felt so good I'm really proud of this story and so to get that affirmation from you means alot!

You know its crazy you mention that about Batman/Rachel because when I was writing it I could literally see Bale saying the name Rachel over again and it didn't occur to me that this is why hahaha.  I loved writing Nathan he was like a combination of Ted Bundy and Patrick Bateman and the downward spiral of Rachel was really fun I'm not even sure at which point she went crazy if she ever actually did or if she already was hahaha.

The love scene was great and thanks for the Billy Crudup visual cause I think that took it to another level.  This is probably my favorite self written story thus far as well so I'm glad you liked it as well!  Rachel was such a truly shady character I had so much fun playing with the different shades and the thin line between therapist and patient.

Anyways can't thank you enough for this review and stars and reading definitely inspiring!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 06:26 am

Title: Character Pics

Awesome, awesome cast.  Billy Crudup and Noah Wyle? With a pinch of Winchester hotness for flavor? *does the Snoopy dance*  Lovin' it already.  Off to read....

Author's Response: Thanks BlackMa!  You were instrumental in the casting of BC and NW so thanks for that and Sam has been in my head lately cause he just got super hot all the sudden so had to give a nod to that.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 04:44 am

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