I really enjoy this story and would like for you continue to see how you think it should go. I thought Christian is a fine match for her, even in the show. So it would be nice after their night together, the adventure can begin, especially how they didn't use any protection (hint, hint). Oh what a tale to tell. I mean 3 teens children, an unforgetable night of fulfil passion and a husband who she love but don't satisfy, so please continue.
Reviewer: skriver Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/11/11 09:08 am
This was too hot!!!! Girl, you put your foot in this.. You need to come back with another story... I want Jenn and Chris together..
If her husband didn't know what he had that's his problem..Christian, help her experience all the things she should have experienced with her husband.. What husband would tell his wife that giving her oral sex turns him off but would lay there and let her suck the skin off is dick??? Yes, she loves and her familu and husband but she loves Christian too and he brings out the her sexy and passion that has been laying dormiant since its oblivious Eddie isn't doing the job.
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/11/10 09:00 pm
OOOOOOOOOO....UNH-UH...UNH-UH...you GOT TO FINISH THIS!!!!! OMGAWD!!! OMGAWD!!! I don't even watch Lincoln Heights but....OMGAWD!!!!
No words...no words...this story blew my mind and I sincerely hope you extend it...
The ratings need to be up to 20...it was that GOOD!!!
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 12/07/10 07:42 am
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! MANNN, SHE CHEATED!!! But it was GOOD, though!
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 12/07/10 07:21 am
Ooooo, don't do it Mama Sutton!!! Don't do IT!!!! LOL
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 12/07/10 06:41 am
There was so much fire coming off my computer screen I thought it was going to crash:). So hot sex. Mind blowing for both of them and me. Feels like i was there watch for real . TOO D*** HOTTTTT. Great writing. There is more right. Thank You fr the great work. I am not a fan of affair, but i just want them to get together.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/06/10 01:44 am
damn that was hot sexy did i say sexy if you have not already written another one you really should great writing
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/03/10 07:18 pm
They didn't use protection. I loved it. Will you possibly continue with it?
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 19/11/09 07:08 pm
Wow I wasn't expecting them to go through with it, but I have to say I enjoyed it.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 19/11/09 04:04 pm
I enjoyed the first chapter. Mom is playing a dangerous game being married and all.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 19/11/09 05:48 am
Is it wrong of me to want them to get together again!! That was sexy and hot and exciting!! Hr husband is a jerk to take her for granted for so long and mot think his wife would not long for more!!
I donot agree with her being unfiathful but Ican definitely understand it!! I kinda want them to get on again and see what it goes...sorry I know that is so wrong!!
Great story sweetie..it really makes you think !!
Reviewer: neneburge Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/02/09 05:58 am
My gosh...that was sexy and heartbreaking at the same time. I'm not a fan of infidelity under any circumstances, but I'll be damned if I wasn't cheering her on. Sex like that should be experienced (by everyone)! You should definitely write an epilouge. That was great...you are a talented writer.
Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/09 09:24 am
Hmmmm, that was great. It kind of reminded my of unfaithful (minus the unfortunate killing in the end). It seemed like you really captured the emotional roller coaster of infidelity. This was an awesome story RP thanks for posting!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks hun, that means a lot considering I love like, all of your work! LOL. I actually did think of Unfaithful a bit when I wrote this; I always thought that that movie did an amazing job of capturing what it was really like for most women when they decide to cheat.
[Report This]Date: 05/12/08 07:26 pm
Wow there really aren't many words. That was smutty nastiness. . .I loved it hahahaha. Dr. Mario is hot, pretty brazen of Jenn getting down at the wedding especially when people there knew she was married! Great update.
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed [Report This]Date: 05/12/08 07:16 pm
Okay so first of all, love seeing your work over in this neck of the woods. Secondly adore Lincoln Heights and was yelling at the tv when Jenn turned down Dr. Hottie - yeah she's a married woman but he is *sigh* she might be a stronger woman than me. . .at least on the show! This is a great start I love that you nailed all the characters, Sage was still a skank, Eddie was still oblivious. I can't wait to read the next chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks girl! I like Lincoln Heights too; I love seeing a professional AA family being portrayed positively and not stereotypically for once. And yes! I wrote this cuz I was like - hell to the no would I turn down Dr. Sexy if he told my ass that he wanted me. I'da been like when, where, and how many condoms should I bring HAHA. I'm a terrible person...
[Report This]Date: 05/12/08 06:24 pm
I dreamed about this chapter right here, and you made it so much better than I could have ever pictured. Great work!!!
Reviewer: Elle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/11/08 01:45 pm
Great story...thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/08 06:06 pm
DAmn, I tnin I am going to need a drink...fanning self with hand...
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/08 05:57 pm
Oh, oh trouble is brewing...I think Jenn was just set up by the good Dr. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/08 05:33 pm
OK....THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/11/08 05:53 pm
That was...woooow! *fans face and shifts in seat* I hope you decide to do the epilogue, just to see how things played afterwards but if you dont do one - thank you for the story!
Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/11/08 11:51 am
OKAY I AM RESORTING TO BEGGING FOR JUST ONE MORE CHAPTER, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE WRITE ONE MORE I LOVE THIS STOR SOOOOOOOOO MUCH IT IS HIGHLY ADDICTIVE AND I NEED MORE SOOO PLEASE, PLEASE ONE MORE!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 22/11/08 05:27 am
I think you ended it in the right spot. This was hella good RP! In my imagination when the kids are grown, she'll eventually leave Eddie and go find Christian where they'll work side-by-side and love each other.
RP, that was some sexing that I can only hope I'm the recipient of one day. You wrote the hell out of this story and I thank you.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 22/11/08 03:07 am
Fantastic!!!
I love his convinction that this is not over or goodbye.
These two were fabulous and sexy together.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/11/08 12:05 am
Wow, good night, that was all kinds of HOT...LOL...think I need to jump into a tub of ice cubes to cool off...can't wait for the finale...
I'm a big Lincoln Heights fan...and I love the Sutton family and their portrayal on TV (very into positive portrayals of AAs in the media)...I, like Jenn, have had my Christian fantasies...damn...the man is SCRUMPTIOUS...always wondered what would happen if they ever "went there"...but not really because I also love Jenn and Eddie's relationship...but now, I have a wonderful kaleidoscope of images to go along with those forbidden fantasies...thanks...you are very gifted in your use of imagery...keep up the good work...
Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/11/08 01:13 am