Nykia and Tony have both had those closest to them betray them. They definitely have that in common. I love how Nykia handled her ex-fiance and ex-friend. A woman after my own heart.
Why do I feel that Michelle isn't going away so easily? Me thinks she'll be back.
Great start on this story. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/08 05:31 am
Great start update soon
Reviewer: Jmee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/08 01:46 am
Michelle is a piece of work... how can she look herself in a mirror..but maybe this is a blessing, b/c Michelle is very shallow and now Antonio sees it.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/08 12:23 am
Clearly he shouldn't have been with her in the first place. All that crying she was doing is an act. She's more concerned about the merger and her social status.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/11/08 11:56 pm
Hmm.... Michelle's a bitch. It makes you wonder if it was really Tony's? After all she was more concern about what Daddy thinks then her own man.
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/11/08 10:44 pm
I love the beginning of this story. If I had been her they both would have been in the hospital. Great job. It is just like a no good man to try to state that she did not see what see saw. Great Job.
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Reviewer: Safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/11/08 10:38 pm
Oh NO you did not!!! You need to finish this story and fast!!! I am sooo caught up right now! PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!!
Reviewer: Sho aka sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/11/08 07:06 am
This is a good beginning. I'm liking this story. Can't wait for the update
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/11/08 03:32 am
Whoa! This started out intense. How often do you plan on adding chapters? I am ready for more, Now. LOL
Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/11/08 02:57 am
Nykia handled that with more class than I thought. Though I loved the hot water threat...hehehe. It does not lessen the pain but better to find out now than after the wedding.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/11/08 01:09 am
Yes you have my attention. It is time to forget that loser. Need an update pronto!
Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/11/08 12:34 am
Good start.
Robert's audacity doesn't surprise me any, that how all men act once their asses get busted. He actually thinks in the back of his head he still has a shot.
Nykia rocks and I wish she would have poured that water on Clarrisa's unworthy ass. I wonder whose idea it was to fuck in Nykia's bed? Can't wait for the next chapter. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Reviewer: pru Signed [Report This]Date: 17/11/08 05:46 pm
Oooo snap me likey......me likey alot....dayum shoulda poured that shit on his and her...um well...never mind...just promise to like update really fuc.king soon....i got to know more....
Reviewer: CMA Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/11/08 05:23 pm
Great start.....please update soon.
Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed [Report This]Date: 17/11/08 04:55 pm
I'm loving this story. I hope Nykia burn the shit out of "Roadrunner" Clarissa. After the workout she pratice on Nykia's mattress, she got off lightly. As for Robert, I'm sure he'll get his due.
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/11/08 03:28 pm
Nice start to your story. You def have my attention. I enjoyed the pace. Story is filled with a lot of good raw, real emotions.
Was glad Nykia didn't let them two see her crying. I understand how hurt she is, but no way did they deserve her tears.
Robert, what an asshole. Two months before his wedding and in Nykia home, in her bed. He should be happy that all she did was toss him out.
Clarissa, I just have no words for her. How could she do this to a friend, that help her when she had nothing. I need an Soon!
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/11/08 02:00 pm
Yep she sure should have. WHat I don't get *besides the lying* is why in her bed? Did they get off on that?
Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/11/08 09:53 am
Good start so far... I'm LMAO at Robert trying to explain himself, I know he will come up with stupid excuses.
As for Clarissa, that excuse she gave is a week as warm beer, her and Robert have been screwing around for a while, they just got caught.
I actually thought she was going to throw that hot water on them, b/c if it was me, they both would need 911.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/11/08 09:05 am