Oh my god who caught her? Was it the sister the finace or father? Updated soon i have to know. Drake and eliza are so good together. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hey wwe,
I'm wondering who caught them myself...LOL!!! just kidding... Thanks for the great review as always!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/12/08 04:09 am
DAMN ELIZA SURE DIDNT PLAY HARD TO GET. I LOVED HOW DRAKE PUT THAT BITCH GLORIA IN HER PLACE. I BET IT WAS THAT WITCH THAT SAW ELIZA LEAVING DRAKE ROOM. I LOVE THIS STORY,PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 11/12/08 05:27 am
Oh yes!! Chocolate, you have done it again. This chapter was on fire. I just love the whole set-up for Drake and Eliza making love to each other for the first time. They are so their real selves when they are together aren't they? I didn't even see it coming, but I'm so glad that is did happen though. LOL But now what?! Who saw Eliza leaving Drake's room and are they are going to cause trouble? I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job Chocolate and keep it coming.
Author's Response:
Hey M...,
Thanks for the review! I knew that it would surprise some people but I figured....Drake has restricted himself because of Emilie and Eliza because her man is away. Matilda helped to open her eyes on that part...LOL! I also wanted to show readers that they have always been comfortable with each other regardless of their status.
Answers will be revealed in the next update!!!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 04:38 am
Oh I can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review JC...,
Well hope to have that update ready soon...I hope...LOL!!
Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 03:07 am
Okay....first off: Thank you for the GREAT UPDATE!!
I love that Drake and Eliza got to had that moment together because it's all going to hit the fan. I can not wait to find out who saw them.
Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks Superstar,
It usually ends up hitting the fan in my fanfic...LOL! Maybe one day I will write a story that doesn't hit the fan...nahhhhhh....
Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: Superstar2577 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 01:40 am
Alright, tongues just don't come out by accident Drake! Your fiance is in the same house. You know you and Emilie aren't meant for each other--why you playing with that girl's emotions? Kissing her on the forehead and then liplocking with Eliza. You wrong for that! LOL
Author's Response:
Love you know how it goes...LOL!
It's the times...it's the way things are back in those days...Drake will lead himself to the water to take a huge drink...;) you know what I mean...Once you go...nuff said!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 06/12/08 01:16 am
Just caught up with this one Choc. Love what you're doing with this historical piece. And your leads are perfect. :-) Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much Black,
I think C will disagree with one of the leads lol!:) She hopes I write some original stuff soon...I promised her I will do it. Well for me going historical is not very easy but I'm trying and thats why I refer to it as a work in progress. Maybe I should also put up a disclaimer. Could you believe that I haven't even figured out the next chapter as yet and I've changed the ending once or probably twice...LOL! I told you guys I write by inspiration ;)
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/08 08:06 am
WOOHOO!! Keep the updates coming.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review JC! I'm glad you like it so far :)
[Report This]Date: 04/12/08 01:30 am
I say it agian that sister is a bitch lol. She proably don't know how to run a dishwasher let alone a bussiness lol. that so sad what happen to eliza mom and drake couldn't be there to say good bye. Eliza and darke are so cute together holding each other and being themselfs when it the two of them. I can't wait to see what happen next. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Well WWE,
Sara is made to be that way...LOL! Thanks for pointing out that dishwashers werent in those days...LMAO! As you can see Drake and Ms. Edith were very close first out of necessity but then it came to be a genuine son and mother relationship and it hurt to hear about her death. Of course Drake has a charming way about him that allows Eliza to come out of her shell...
Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 03/12/08 05:50 pm
Wow i am extremely impressed I loved this update....no more making sad tho ok....
but someone over there has been holding on out on us cuz those kisses have been popping...now keep taking that up a notch and i am gonna start blushing over....
GO CHAOS!!!!! GO CHAOS!!!!!!!
IM GONNA PARTY WITH CHOCOLATECHAOS....hehehe
(my plan is working muaahhh) *rubs hands 2gether wit wikked evil grin*
Author's Response:
C...you are impressed!
Eventhough though my other star is clear...humph...which you pointed out by the way...:)
What plan are you talking about C????
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: C Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/12/08 05:21 pm
Wow, great update Chocolate. I was heartbroken as Eliza and Drake were when Eliza told Drake about her mother's death. Yet both of the kisses they shared was hot indeed. It looks like these two are heading to a very strong connection that I believe nobody is going to break. I just see them falling in love with each other before either one of them knew it coming. As Emile said, it a distance between Drake and her and it just going to be bigger by the minute. Sara needs to get a life. She is a terrible sister indeed. Gloria got hers in this chapter with the dirty water. Excellent. Oh I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Hey Meg,
I had to write how both of them felt about Ms. Edith dying. Even with everything else Ms. Edith is one of the most important factors in their virgining relationship. Women always sense when something is going on with their man even if sometimes we don't want to admit it. Sara is Sara...she sure wasn't going to champion Drake coming home. She was too happy when he was far away and building another life.
That part about Gloria really wasn't in my first read but I decided that something needed to happen to her because her snotty behavior and so I thought Matilda would be the perfect person to do it ;)
Thanks for the awesome!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/12/08 04:50 pm
OH MY I AM ABSOLUTLY IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY PLEASE,PLEASE KEEP IT COMING... FOREVER A FAN!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hershey,
Thank you very much. I always look forward to your awesome reviews!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 01:05 pm
Choc, you brought me another Tangie tale! I know they have different names but they'll always be Tangie to me.
I'm intrigued by this storyline and look forward to reading more.
Gloria is a mess and Eliza should punch her in her mouth. Go head, let her do it! LOL
Author's Response:
Love...hahahaha...It is not a Tangie tale...shhhh
In later updates I will show why Gloria thinks she is the bees knees....:)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 03:19 am
Okay choc, i confess, you got my attention, great story, got to take a short break then come back and read the next chap.
Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 03:18 am
okay, so i just got back and i'm glad to be back. did you miss me choc? well i missed you, alot so i have quite a lot of great stories to catch up with.
Author's Response:
I missed you too Dye,
Did you tell me that you weren't going to write anymore Tangie stories for good or just right now? I need to know...please!!!
Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 03:00 am
I swear I would had slap that dam aunt ok she would got a face full ok knuckles lol. It good that darke has a friend who there for him. Sara needs to get over it and act like an adult. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Congratulations WWE for winning reader of the month!
I thought about it :) but I knew a gentleman was suppose to behave like a gentleman back then...maybe I should plot a little revenge don't you think ;)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 02:13 am
wow that one hell of a welcome home for drake. I see the sister is a capitol BITCH lol. So they were friends but something happen for him to leave. I like the story so far can't wait to read more. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 02:01 am
I never knew these facts about slaves. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 01:51 am
You couldnt do it.....could you....but i am loving it all the same just blocking out Drake's face....so there :P
now update soon will ya...
Author's Response:
Hey C...
You told me not to call them Todd and Evangeline so I followed that advice...:) You can block out Toddikins as long as you like but he is still calling and reaching out to you..;)
Reviewer: C Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 12:11 am
Finally, I am able to read this new story of your Chocolate. It's great btw. I just love the setting and how everything is set up. Great choices of the cast too, especially Drake and Eliza *wink* I can't wait to see what happens next because is seems that there are going to be major conflicts are coming to play mainly with the matters of the heart.
Author's Response:
Hey Megumi,
I am so happy to hear you like it...I've had some troubles with the images but Z helped me out a great deal. Like I said this is a work in progress..I believe I figured out the middle and the end but lies in between those two is anyone's guest...Besides things are always subject to change :) In a way this story is leading me...
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/08 06:28 pm
Loking forward to more!!!
Author's Response:
Hey JC,
Well I'm looking forward to providing you with great updates!
Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/08 05:54 pm
I love how you've started this. I can't wait for your next update.
Reviewer: Superstar2577 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/08 01:52 am
Poor Eliza is going to be dealing with jealousy coming from both sides!
Author's Response:
Hi Cali,
Back in those days once you get a little bit of attention you have a lot of angst coming your way. I'm sure I'll make Eliza take it as it comes but we'll see...Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/11/08 10:11 am
Oh I love historic interracial romances! This one has me hooked already, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Hey Sylvia,
Thanks for the review and I promise to give you more as my mind leads :)
Reviewer: Sylvia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/11/08 09:14 am
I cannot see the pics! O dear.
Reviewer: irish_sunset Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/11/08 11:17 pm