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Title: The Visitor

I miss this story so much! If you can, please update.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/16 04:06 pm
Title: The Visitor

Oh please, please come back and complete this story.

 Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/14 05:55 am
Title: The Visitor

I love it....

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/02/13 09:17 am
Title: The Visitor

I was really getting hooked on this story, I would love to know what happened to everyone.  It would seem that their lives are all interconnected.  Please complete this story so that I can be put out of my misery.

 Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 12:23 am
Title: The Visitor

Please come back to this story.  It is great!  I would love to see what happens To Eliza, Sean and how she deals with the arrival of her father. 

 Reviewer: Romance Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/10/10 08:39 pm
Title: The Visitor

Dam!! so much going on.

I would love to be able to read the rest of this story.

I don't know what has happen, but I wish that you would come back and finish this story, and Melissa and Nick story as well.

 Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/10 07:30 pm
Title: The Visitor

I really love this story and I hope you decide to finish it. 

 Reviewer: msthang4573 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/03/10 02:54 pm
Title: The Visitor

When are you going to finish this wonderful story?  I am dying to find out how Sean's mother reacts to seeing Eliza again and meeting her grandson's for the first time!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/02/10 03:08 pm
Title: The Visitor

I remember this story on the Sweetest Taboo, and you have never finished it there.  I hope that you do complete the story here.  It is a great story!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/01/10 07:18 pm
Title: The Visitor

really love this story. Please update.

 Reviewer: baha-malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/09 03:15 am
Title: The Visitor

PLease please please come back and finish this story.

I mean you let me fiending like a crack head. I miss this X-mas story. will you finish it for this christmas. 

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/09 10:30 pm
Title: The Visitor

awwwwww. that is so sweet. please hurry and write more.

 Reviewer: lis Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/09/09 04:56 am
Title: The Visitor

Its been forever since you've updated...

I hope you haven't forgotten about this story... I miss it and I am hoping you finish it so we can get to Mel and Nick's story...

PLEASE UPDATE!

 Reviewer: spanishfly69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 07:55 pm
Title: The Visitor

I love this story.  I hope the author decides to finish.

 Reviewer: msthang4573 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 06:26 pm
Title: The Visitor

OMG father and son. Mr Taylor is Eliza's grandfather who would have know. Ok please update this story. I am fiending now. I found and caught up with story today.

 Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 01:46 am
Title: "Mommy, can we have a Father for Christmas?"

Wil there be an update for this story? If so, please hurry

 Reviewer: LIL HELPER Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/03/09 06:10 pm
Title: "Mommy, can we have a Father for Christmas?"

Please update the story.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divisionred Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/02/09 03:06 am
Title: "Mommy, can we have a Father for Christmas?"

After reading the reviews i see a pattern of confusion.

Sorry that was not my intent.

Alexander had a relationship with Eliza's father's mother.

Thomas and Alexander are not related by blood Eliza found them at a Shelter.

 

 Reviewer: MhLoveless Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/01/09 04:14 am
Title: The Visitor

It has been to long, but we forgive you. Talk about six degrees of seperation.

I'm happy that Thomas talked to her about slowing things down up Sean. They'll be reunited, but there's no rush. Then again, it has been seven years. 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/09 02:51 am
Title: The Visitor

Wow , loved the update

 Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/09 02:43 am
Title: The Visitor

Great update...I can't believe that her father suffered so much, fist by his dad, then his wife and for her mother to kill herself....wow, that was shocking.  So her father is looking for his daughter and finds his mother's ex lover...is he his father?  Please update soon.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/09 01:32 am
Title: The Visitor

Girl...its some serious holes in this tragically endearing tale that you must fill such as: who’s Thomas to Alexander? They can’t be brothers, right? How did these two men become a part of Eliza’s life in the first place? Did Jasmine’s mother have any idea who Alexander was? Obviously Franklin’s ‘father’ knew truth but who was he? (God I hope it wasn’t Wilson. Elizabeth’s family moved away so it couldn’t have been him. Bastard!).

See what I mean? So many questions with this abrupt and surprising turn of events. And girlie hadn’t be laid in over seven years and Thomas had the nerve to interrupt?!!! LOL I know he was right but still....

 Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/01/09 10:15 pm
Title: The Visitor

Wonderful story.  The twins are so cute.  Enjoying the secondary story, too.

 Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/01/09 09:33 pm
Title: "Mommy, can we have a Father for Christmas?"

So, so, so, Alexander is Eliza's grandfather?!!!

 Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/01/09 09:31 pm
Title: The Visitor

What!! Alexander is Eliza's uncle?!!! My head is spinning!

 Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/09 09:28 pm
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