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Title: The Visitor

OMG first sean comes back in her life and now her dad wow. Good thing thomas was there or sean and elzia been doing the dirty lol. I can't wait to see what happens when the kids meet their grand parents thanks for the updated love this story.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/09 03:36 pm

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

I still think he needs to do some more graveling before she gives him another chance. What he 'thought' she did still doesn't excuse the extreme actions he took against her.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/09 06:48 pm

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

Wow. Sean is wasting no time huh?

Reviewer: flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/01/09 02:32 am

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

Great update

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/09 01:40 am

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

Wow. Eliza is such a nice person. She is breaking down her barriers in the name of love. She shows that true love lasts forever, and it is all about forgiving too. I can't wait to raed when the twins begin to get to know their father. I know alot of emotions will come into play.

Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/01/09 12:35 am

Title: A Man in Tears on His Knees.

I feel for Sean too, but Eliza I feel for the most. She has been through a lot . And her sons has lost out on a lot of years without a father because of lies. I hope they can learn to love and forgive and get back togeher and be a family.

Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/01/09 12:19 am

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

loves it

Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 10:16 pm

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

I'm so happy to see this story updated it one of my fav. Sean right she is  a strong and wise person to forgive him and telling the boys no matter what happen btween them he is still their father. I wonder what going to happen next more kissing or will she stop it? thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 05:02 pm

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

Sean an Eliza are meant to be. After so many years the feelings still run deep. I hope the meeting withhis family draw them together.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 03:49 pm

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

loved the update i guess sean has some redeeming qualities...

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 09:09 am

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

Yeah you updated as promise and what an update.  at least he had the opportunity to let her know where he stands and he apologized for being an ass.  I can'wait to read what she has to say and her children and especially Thomas.  Thanks for a great read.  I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 05:05 am

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

Realizing sometimes we treat the ones we live horribly because we believe they violated our trust. Sean now sees the error in that but is it too late for Eliza? Even though she loves him can she trust hin with her heart?

Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 05:03 am

Title: Breaking Down Eliza

Awww...this a great update! Thanks!

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 05:00 am

Title: "Mommy, can we have a Father for Christmas?"

OK great I am so glad that you will be updating soon.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 03:40 am

Title: A Lesson in Forgiveness

I'll be updating this story as soon as I'm finished with Unexpected Love. I only have two chapters left in that story so an update will be in order by next weekend. please bare with me. 

Thank you for reading the story! 

Reviewer: MHLoveless Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 12:32 am

Title: A Lesson in Forgiveness

oh my goodness, oh my goodness, I luv those twins they are so smart and I hope that they give their dad a chance and I think that they will now after they have spoken to their mother about their concerns about dear old dad..it takes a very strong woman to ensure that she doesn't turn her children away from their father...so much has been said since he has turned up at ger door, the kids over hearing their conversation and I like the fact that she has so much support from  Alexander and Thomas...thanks for a great read and please update soon.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/12/08 11:55 am

Title: A Lesson in Forgiveness

WOW THOSE LITTLE MOMMY PROTECTORS WERE SOOO CUTE... I LOVE IT; PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/08 09:40 am

Title: The Longest Night Ever

DAMN ELIZA IS SUCH A SWEET PERSON AND SHE IS DOING THE RIGHT THING BY GIVING THAT SEAN A CHANCE TO GET TO KNOW HIS SONS.  THOMAS IS RIGHT SHE DO NEED TO BE CAREFUL THOUGH.. LOVE IT....

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/08 09:37 am

Title: A Man in Tears on His Knees.

I JUST DONT KNOW WHAT I FEEL FOR SEAN; BUT I LOVE THIS STORY

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/08 09:31 am

Title: A Lesson in Forgiveness

Awwww - that was so sweet, how they are so protective of their mommy.

Reviewer: chio1895 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/12/08 02:10 am

Title: A Lesson in Forgiveness

Awwwww that was to cute

Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 08:47 pm

Title: A Glance at the Past

The backstory was a nice touch and very enjoyable..

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 05:28 am

Title: "Mommy, can we have a Father for Christmas?"

Nice start... I really like what you are doing so far. I look forward to reading more

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 05:20 am

Title: A Lesson in Forgiveness

Love the updates

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 04:07 am

Title: A Lesson in Forgiveness

That great that she finaly talked  to the boys and that they going to give their father a change.  Loving this story and thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 03:58 am

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