It a good thing that she has thomas to look out for her and be there for her no matter what. Sean better make sure he does right by her and the kids this time around. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/12/08 03:54 am
Wow glad he got on his needs and ask for forgivens for the things he put her thu. I hope she let the boys get to know their father. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 12/12/08 03:51 am
I missed this and went straight for the next chpt. good thing i found my mistake.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/12/08 03:13 am
I'm glad she took that approach with the boys especially since Sean is going to be involved now. And I'm also glad she's also capable of such forgiveness after the multiple slights Sean gave her. But I still think Sean as the good man I do believe him to be needs to go above and beyond to make it obvious that he should be forgiven and that he can be trusted.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/12/08 01:29 am
Thomas loves her but realizes she still loves Sean. Hard situation for the boys but she should sit down with them and explain without giving too many details that their dad and her broke up a long time ago and was trying to find them but wasn't able to until recently. Everybody makes mistakes even adults bt that their dad wants them in his life. Good updates
Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/12/08 12:38 am
The twins are so adorable.
Please update.
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 11:56 pm
Wonderful update...I so love this story...the boys are so sweet and I like the fact that Sean broke down and let his pride go and was open with Liza and asked for her forgiveness and that she forgave him and showed her sons how to forgive to. I can't wait til the next updated.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 11:16 pm
Oy vey you are killing me with this story! I love it though! :D
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 09:53 pm
My heart goes out to Eliza and Sean. Because of secrets and lack of faith, two boys were denied their father. Its time for this family to come together.
Reviewer: juno Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/12/08 06:26 pm
Great Update!
Reviewer: Kaci Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 05:40 pm
Good chapter
Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 04:35 pm
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 04:31 pm
Terrible remorse for how he treated a person who he loved. I like this story especially during this season.
Now I hope you are not going to forget your first story "Unexpected Love". I and many others have been anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Thanks for taking the time with your busy schedule.
Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 04:04 pm
I don't think she should forgive him just bc he said sorry. I believe that he is, but he needs to prove it a little more through his actions. In my opinion she suffered far more and he needs to make up for it. He and Sharon need to do some more work b4 all is forgiven.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 03:38 pm
I am not sure about him just yet...if he trated her as bad as he said then he does need to go on begging for her forgiveness even more. I can't wait to read what happens when her children find out that he is their father so at least they are gettng their Christmas wish for a dad. So what is her relationship with Thomas? Are they just great friends that console each other is their relationship platonic or more? What about the other huy that lives in the house that is older? Thanks for a great read.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 11:06 am
WOW what a powerful apology. I am already addicted to this story. So try to give me my fix as soon as you can. LOL
Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 10:46 am
I have a feeling Thomas helped out with Sean finding her. Yeah Eliza is a better woman than me cuz I would have been whupped their ass.
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 05:55 am
I'm really excited about this story, and I cannot wait for it to continue.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: 10/12/08 11:12 pm
As long as you're writing I'll be reading. :) Nix these stupid finals.
J/K I'll have a fit if I get anything other than an A.
Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]Date: 10/12/08 09:36 pm
Omg he back he found her but how? I glad that thomas was there for her when she need somebody the most. She is kind because i would have took thomas on the offer and kick some ass. Cant' wait to see twins reaction knowing their father there. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 10/12/08 06:08 am
AWESOME I LOVE IT. PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING...DAMN SEAN IS BOLD TO SHOW UP AFTER ALL THE YEARS THAT PAST!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 10/12/08 04:41 am
Great updates, can't wait until the next chapter
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/12/08 01:55 am
That is so wrong to stop there but I guess yiu didn't have a choice...so how did he find out where she lived? So she must live nearby for him just to show up on her door step like that. Great update. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 10/12/08 01:50 am
I'm addicted to this story. Let the drama begin.
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/12/08 12:28 am
I know Sean was lied to about Eliza but I think she should make him and Sharon work for her trust. They seriously humiliated her back in the day (most of the things done to her were unecessary) and I really think they need to work to earn her friendship and more back.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 11:21 pm