i love both of your stories and i must say you have me hooked on this one. I can't wait to read what happens when father and sons start talking to each other.
Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 11:03 pm
Omg so that why her and sean end he thought she cheated on him but that bitch drug her and lied. Glad she knows the truth and will she tells sean sister or sean that he the father of her twins boys. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 10:10 pm
Wow I can't belive that jerk sleep with her roomate. eliza had a rough life your mom takes her life because the man didn't wanted her and then you fall in love and the jerk sleeps with your roomate. Liking this story thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 10:06 pm
Wow those boys are so cute wanted a daddy for christmas. So why did her and the father of her boys end things? I like this story and can't wait to see where it goes thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 10:01 pm
wow! I cant wait for the next update! :D
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 09:40 pm
wow that's some serious shiznick that went down.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 08:53 pm
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 08:50 pm
Nice Start MH... Christmas is all about being around family and forgiveness. I like that she reached out for the ex.
Can't wait to read more, the boys sound so cute :)
Reviewer: Jmee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 06:08 pm
This is so good girl. I should be studying for my finals but here I am reading this. :)
Update soon.
Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 06:02 pm
OH HELL NAW THAT BITCH SEAN WOULD HAVE GOT F*CKED UP THE FIRST RACIAL SLUR THAT WOULD HAVE CAME OUT OF HIS MOUTH WOULD HAD GOT MY FIST IN IT. I NOW SEE WHY SHE LEFT WITHOUT TELLING ANYBODY BECAUSE THAT BASTARD SEAN CROSSED THE LINE WITH THE RACIAL SLURS I JUST DONT SEE NO APOLOGY FOR SAYING THAT BECAUSE WHAT YOU SAY IN ANGER ALWAYS HOLD SOME TRUTH. WHOO NOW THAT I GOT THAT OFF MY MIND I LOVE THIS STORY.. GOT GO ITS LIGHTING OUTSIDE.
Author's Response:
Hershey... People say alot of things in when they are angry especially if they are hurt and want the person that hurt them to feel the same way.
Sean was in love with Eliza and to catch someone you love in bed with another is too much for some people. He said things that he wouldn't have on a normal basis because he was hurt and his pride was hit.
You are right that what he said was uncalled for but people don't think before they speak when they are in a fit of rage.
Poor Sean...
Thanks for the feed back though!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 04:53 pm
OMG. ELIZA GIRL THIS IS GOING TO BE A XMAS TO REMEMBER..
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 04:44 pm
WOW THOSE LITTLE BOYS ARE SOOO CUTE ASKING FOR A FATHER FOR XMAS. I LOVE IT ALREADY!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 04:41 pm
Great story...I thought that Sean cheated on her but she thought that she cheated on him and her best friend set her up? WOW that is so wrong...so then couldn't the guy that she had thought she slept with have been the twins father? Also, is she and Thomas having an affair? who hanged up the phone, Thomas? Thanks Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Division
She and her roommates were enemies not best friends. She was close friends with Sharon Sloan Sean's twin sister.
She didn't have intercourse with the guy. he was paid by her roommate to put her in a compromising position and to make her think that she slept with him. he is not the father of her sons because they weren't intimate.
No she and Thomas are not having an affair they are just really close friends.
Thank you for reading and asking questions!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 12:34 pm
The mother in me says focus on your finals. The fan fic addict in me says don't neglect this story; you can do both. LOL
I like the premise so far. Anxious to find out why she lost Sean and why he's not apart of his children's lives.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 12:32 pm
Very nice start MH. Love the boys already. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 07:27 am
Good start. I am wondering why and where Sean Sloan is not with his kids in the first place. past always comes back on you. Keep it coming.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 06:52 am
Great Start. Good luck on your finals.
Reviewer: Aahauna77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 03:45 am
Great start, update soon
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 01:53 am
Nice start. But focus on your finals. We can wait. Just want you to do well in school. Oh, btw, I like this story.
Reviewer: cjaysmom Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 01:41 am
oh my i love christmas romance stories. I can't wait for your next update.
Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 12:36 am
Yeah! I like your stories, it's ok. Don't worry it's a great start, and I'm sure you are going to do fine on your finals! Good Luck! I've been there and done that!
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: 08/12/08 11:09 pm
I'm hooked. I can't wit to read more.
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/12/08 11:07 pm
"I know i'm suppose to be focusing on my finals"
You and I both. Ugh, I hate that I'm in my last year of college. At any rate, great start.
Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]Date: 08/12/08 10:39 pm