I just finished reading your story and I must say that your story is amazing....I have never read a story like this and I must say that I have read a lot of vampire stories.......this was just wow!!!. I really don't know what to say....I mean it was a spin off of twighlight...but it was way diffrent....like it was just great!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this one.
[Report This]Date: 19/04/09 02:20 am
I FORGOT TO MENTION IN THE LAST CHAPTER THAT IT'S NICE TO HAVE THE POINT OF VIEW COMING FROM THE VAMPIRE IT'S A NICE CHANGE FROM THE TWILIGHT SERIES.
Reviewer: shiree022000 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/12/08 04:58 am
I LOVE ALL THE TWILIGHT BOOKS. THIS WAS A GREAT START.
Reviewer: shiree022000 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/12/08 04:40 am
LOL!! This was a definately a insterest story. Good job.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 08:54 am
Whew!!! I didn't think that Stephen could imprint Ibis without her knowing. Know I see why Ibis was in some form was connected to Stephen. He imprinted her in her dream. I wonder what happens know. I wonder did Syliva know.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 08:50 am
I think I may have made a mistake in my first thought of Stephen. I think Stepen is already in love with Ibis. Ibis has this attraction to Stepen so we can't say that Stepen is using his powers to get Ibis to see his way. IA with Ibis about Will. He is living/thinking reckless and that is not good.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 08:06 am
Whew!!! I didn' see that coming. I hope Will is able to stay a human like his sister. He has a family that loves him.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 07:53 am
I am on the fence now LOL. Who should Ibis be with? Stephen which is her own kind. I know Stephen can be a jack@ss but like Syliva he is doing the wrong thing and it is because he doesn't like being alone. There is a side of Stephen that made Syliva choose to make Stephen who he is now. So mabe there is something about Stephen that is good and you just have to find it. Syliva also said if I am not mistaking that Stephen could be in love with Ibis. Or Will a human.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 07:27 am
Good job. This Stephen wants Ibis because she is a virgin. I am not sure if it is beause she hasn't taken human blood or hasn't been sexually touched.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 06:36 am
Whaa!!! This is getting interesting by the minute. I wonder why does one of the vistors keep looking at Ibis.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 06:23 am
I am happy that Ibis and Tess told them. Ibis needs to tell Will why she doesn't want to be near him soon. I say sooner then later.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 06:07 am
Keep it coming. Loving it more and more. Poor Lawrence. I wonder who killed him. Ibis better get ready because I got a feeling that Will will wear her down soon LMAO.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 05:53 am
Great chapter Ibis better be more careful when it comes to Will. I am wondering what is in Will's blood that makes Ibis want it so bad.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 05:20 am
Oh my goodness what a story...I am glad that it had a happy ending. Will you do an epilogue on how they get on with their baby and did the others die, Holt and Sylvia...Also what ahppened to Alice's husband? DIdn;'t he survive? thanks
Author's Response:
Yes. Alice's husband survives.
I began work on the sequel, but then life intervened.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 07:27 pm
Oh my goodness, I can't stand that Stephen the dirty dog abd for them to kill Clara...bring her back, this is so not fair, damn it.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 07:20 pm
Oh I can't wait for the confrontation, now onder their mother wanted them turned so quickly. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 07:13 pm
Oh man, what did Stephen do...the clan elders...he summoned them the dirty dig, didn't I say that they couldn't be trusted...damn that Stephen the jealous idiot.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 07:05 pm
Wow, their mother wants them to be immortal, that was a shocker. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 06:55 pm
What is the mother? Their folks are very interesting...I can see the mother being ok with her son turnign into a vampire. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 06:39 pm
Oh, oh, trouble. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 06:33 pm
Oh no, not Will and poor Clara. I am glad that they killed the killer. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 06:25 pm
Oh my goodness he is going to kill Tess and then what will become of Ibis....thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 06:18 pm
WOW, Will is very daring and charming and Ibis is a brave person to fight her natural instinct to consume him. As for the others I still don;'t trust them. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 06:10 pm