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Title: INTERLUDE

Awwwww soooo cuuute!!!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/11 10:55 pm

Title: EPILOGUE

This was brilliant! Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewer: blackdove13 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 2

Supreb

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/04/11 09:07 am

Title: Chapter 1

What happpen to your story, did you take it down.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 07:37 am

Title: INTERLUDE

That was awesome, I would to see what  characters looked like.  I am so glad that Rhonda is dead, to bad Evageline didn't shot her.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 12:37 am

Title: INTERLUDE

AWwww!  That was some beautiful love making!   And glad Eva also made love orally to his dick, Harry deserves this extra treat!! They're a great couple and I love Harry, a perfect man!

Absolutely loved this story Raven, thanks so much!!

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 05:24 am

Title: EPILOGUE

ALRIGHT!  Love that Eva!  She's always got her man's back, Yeah! she sensed something was up, so glad she killed Harry's attacker!  She and Harry are really well matched, Harry had good instincts the first time he saw her!

I'm so glad they have been able to have a happy ever after life! 

 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 05:04 am

Title: Chapter 2

 

That was a very frightening shootout /ambush on Eva that racist/jealous Rhonda setup! 

DAMN!  Interracial love in America sure is dangerous but, at least now this couple is where they can live their love freely as God intended!  YAYY!

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 1

Love how this is written:  fast pace with a rhythm of its own and love the character of Harry, real earthy.  Love how Harry handled those wannabe rapists of Evangeline, also the fighting he did was believable, logical that a very experienced gangster such as himself, definitely could take them both down, as so wonderfully described.

This is some really good writing; descriptive, revealing REAL people and very interesting persons.  I've glimpsed several stories on this site and found very few that have this kind of creative, exciting and highly skilled writing.

LOL, Harry did a rush job on making his room look decent the way I sometimes have to do for unexpected company! Yeah!...,made me smile. 

The dress Harry bought Eva is beautiful and in good taste.  This story takes place in 1930's not too distant since Civil War ended.  Raven, I''m glad you have realistically included the racism for this very violent racist era instead of white washing it.

The sex is HOT!  but I'm real glad it doesn't happen between Harry and Eva during their initial getting acquainted, that would make it too much like "jungle fever"; by happening later it was two real individuals having a genuine interest in each other. 

  And Damn!  The sex is HOT throughout this chapter!  But Harry made love to Evangeline not just fucking; great lover and wonderful man-muscle he's got.  I also loved the Billy Holiday songs Eva sings and the gangster action.


 This is a long comment but, just love this chapter so much and there's so much life in it.  Really super great writing Raven! 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 04:28 am

Title: INTERLUDE

Wow!!  This story was amazing! You’re an awesome writer; I went for a trip back in time as I read this!

What can I say? Age is nothing but a number, for one. Harry and Eva make a gorgeous couple despite the huge age gap. I am so glad both got a better life together in the end (would love to be back in Paris around that time, so romantic).

Rhonda was an A grade bitch, a bit psychotic too but the sounds of things. So I didn’t feel much sympathy when she put the barrel of the gun against her head.

Again, great work and I look forward to reading more wonderful stories from you!

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/10/09 02:17 am

Title: INTERLUDE

Short but sweet. No one was going to disrupt her happy home after all of those years. I truly loved this story.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 03:51 pm

Title: EPILOGUE

Eva wasn't no joke. She protected her family at all costs. Great story.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 02:06 am

Title: INTERLUDE

Thanks for the extra nugget. You're a peach! :)

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 02:01 am

Title: Chapter 2

Awww...man, is this the end? Really? :(

I really loved this story, Raven. Kudos to you for being such an excellent writer. :)

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 01:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great start. You've already found a fan in me with this one. Thanks for sharing your talent here.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 01:35 am

Title: INTERLUDE

Wow TBG recommended this story to me and I am so glad she did..it was awesome!! The imaginery, the dialogue, the relationship and passion was beautiful!1

I adore how he loved her and was unafraid of the consequences and try as she might she had to give in to that love!! I love the May /December aspect. It was not a focus of the story but it was a fact that made his love for her even more special!!

Can I tell you how afraid I was that something bad would happen to them because of his lifestyle and her race but also because he just did not give a darn what anyone thought about their relationship!

How grateful and relieved I was that his boss let him go and that they made a wonderful life for themselves in France!!

Oh btw I love love love that the ultimate badsss was Eva..no one messes with her family...yeah baby!!

I loved ths sweetie..expertly written smart and darn sexy!! Great job!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/08/09 03:23 am

Title: EPILOGUE

Go Eva, you don't mess with anyone's kids.  Glad they lived to have a long and fruitful life.

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/12/08 09:05 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is hot and very original.

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/12/08 08:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1

What a wonderful story. Great dialogue, very descriptive( you felt like you were there in 1930) and SEXY as hell!!. This was a great appetizer, on to the meal.

Reviewer: PBE06 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/12/08 05:16 pm

Title: EPILOGUE

good story i wish there was more

Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/08 10:06 am

Title: Chapter 1

love stories with plots like this one great start

Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/08 10:03 am

Title: Chapter 1

This story is sexy bliss. :) Loves it, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/08 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 1

Raven so glad you posted this story. It's one of my favories (of many) by you and I've read it twice now.  The characters are fantasitc and you capture the time period so well. I hope to see more of your awesome stories on the archive. Thanks again.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/08 06:35 am

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