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Title: Chapter 1

This was excellent. Thanks for posting it.

Author's Response: Thanks bunches!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/08 06:25 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This was really lovely, especially the small moments when they touched each other. Those were so well written. Excellent story, thanks for posting!

Author's Response: You're welcome.  "Short Stops" is one of the few John/Teyla stories I've written that came out well so I'm glad people are responding to it.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/08 07:35 am

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