Thanks again for letting me beta for you Realstone. I really loved the story.
Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you Pashmina. Sorry for the delay in replying, no working internet at home. Reviewer: Pashmina Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/12/08 08:39 pm
Wow, this is excellent. You have such a great grasp of the characters voices, especially Teyla. I hope you write more with these characters.
Author's Response: Thank you. One day perhaps.
Date: 18/12/08 05:18 pm
Wow that was really, really good. I missed this show when it first came out. However the writers on this site have made me realize what I was missing out on when you write for this pairing - Thanks for sharing.. Awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 18/12/08 03:31 pm
This was so well done and beautifully written. The scenes were so powerful and I really loved how the last line pulled everything together. And told you so much about Teyla and the strength of her resolve.
Excellent job, thanks so much for sharing. :)
Author's Response:
Sometimes it is so hard to find the right voice and continuity a story needs. Thank you for letting me know I got close.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/08 06:25 am