What else can I say about this story but it's great!
Author's Response: Y'ALL ARE MY BEST SUPPORT!
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 11:38 pm
EEP...I don't have a good feeling about this meeting either.
REALLY REALLY don't like Lloyd and can't wait to see how Chris takes care of him (if he survives his meeting).
I loved that he still let Rihana know she was getting NADA!!! The trick doesn't deserve anything!
Author's Response: I LOVE RIHANNA BUT IN THIS STORY I MADE HER A REAL BITCH AND SHE LIVES UP TO THE TITTLE. Reviewer: Redbird Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 11:29 pm
The part in the car was really good. That had to be my favorite scene. You have to admit Chris sure knows what he wants.
Wow lil chris is his. I knew it since Tina was so sure of it. I'm glad she could be there for Chris.
The part at the office was so cute. I hope nothing goes down at that meeting with the 5 families. I have a feeling drama is up ahead.
Author's Response: THE CAR SCENE IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES. Reviewer: kim Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 10:05 pm
okay girl you had me going at the beginning. I really thought they had gotten back together and she was about to pop out a baby. You are so wrong for doing that to me! I loved the dream sequence it was really smart of you to show us how it could be. I like the new characters you introduced. Of course my favorite is Ms. Peaches. He's so funny.
Come on back and add us another chapter.
Author's Response: Yay! I had you really? My favorite is Peaches also. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 07:49 pm
Lloyd never learns. I think he really wants to die! I say kill him because he's getting on my nerves. You delivered another great chapter.
Author's Response: lol I'll think about killing him.
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 07:44 pm
Ugghhh...I knew Lloyd was no good...I can't believe she is dating him!!
The begining shocked me, I was like surely she held out more than a few weeks!!! LOL
This update was amazing like all the rest!!! Can't wait for the next update!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Reviewer: Redbird Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 03:14 pm
OMG, I love it! You really bring the drama. I'm glad that Tina is taking a break from Chris. She is so wrapped up in his life at this point that she needs to find out where he ends and where she begins. She needs to take care of herself right now.
...Is Shad still in love with Tina? I hope not. If he is then I fear a beat down from Chris or Shalay is in his future. LOL.
It will be intereting to see if Chris takes this just friends moment and concentrates on trying to hold it down for Tina just this once. I'm so glad that you update regularly. I know that next chapter will be just as drama filled as this one.
Author's Response: Thanks girl...I'll try to live up to my name. Reviewer: anouk Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 06:50 am
Ohh I loved it!!!! I think startinover is gonna be great from them. They work towards getting back to where they were.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you!
Date: 18/01/09 05:57 am
Your story is so great I had to drop you another line!
Update! Update! Update! Update!
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/09 03:52 am
I loved it. This right here is my new drug! The scene with Tina's mother was so funny. I can't believe she was trying to get some from her daughters man. How nasty is that? I'm glad Tina the the baby is okay. That was a big relief. keep the chapters coming girl.
Author's Response: Your new drug! That's cute!lol
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 03:41 am
Wow... that was a lot! Very emotional and very well done!!!
I don't think Chris stands a snowballs chance in hell of remaining her friend, but we do have to give him an "A" for effort!
There are still so many explosive emotions waiting to come out...Shalay and Shad, Shad and Chris, Chris and Mama Joyce...girl I can't wait to read it!!!
Thank you so much for updating so often!!! It helps to take the ege off my addiction! LOL!
Author's Response: I wouldn't want you to start detox on my account. lol Reviewer: Redbird Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 03:06 am
Chris is a sneaky lil' thing and i love him anyway! I see why Tina loves him the way she does even though he's definitely no angel. I loved this chapter.
add soon.
Author's Response: Chris is alot of things...and sneaky is one of them! lol Reviewer: kim Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 03:03 am
You have to hurry up and add! I have to know whats gonna happen next! This story is addicting!
Author's Response: I think I'm gonna add another chapter tonight. So stick around! lol
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 12:22 am
Ohhhh snaaaap....if Tina loses that baby Chris is DEFINITELY going off the deep end...
This story is becoming addictive!!!
Can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: Thank you, Thank you! I'm adding again tonight. Reviewer: Redbird Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 12:20 am
This story just keeps getting better and better. You are the queen of the ciff hanger. I hope that Tina does not lose the baby, I think that would send her over the edge. I think that if Shad does not tell Chris about Tina's precarious position that he will kill him. Tina leaving in the middle of the night like a bat out of hell shoudl let Chris knwo that he has really messed up this time. He has destroyed what they have built up together. I can't wait to heatr the convo that will occur between Chris and Mrs. Jones. Great chapter as usual.
Author's Response: Thank so much! Y'all keep responding well so I'm gonna add again to night.
[Report This]Date: 17/01/09 10:15 pm
This story is the reason I visit this board! Chris is full of surprises. I wonder what Tina's mother will bring to the story?
I hope she and the baby's okay!
add soon!
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/01/09 09:12 pm
Shad seems to be a good man. I'm sure Chris and his temper won't like this to much. Please add soon.
Author's Response: Thank you 4 reading!
[Report This]Date: 17/01/09 05:59 pm
I've just caught up with this story. OMG. Did Chris grab her trying to prevent her from leaving him? I'm glad that she is leaving. That is absolutely unacceptable. She is to wrapped up in Chris right now. She needs to find out who she is and her concerns, but without Llyod. He is to creepy. LOL. Great chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks chica...good to see you back.
[Report This]Date: 17/01/09 05:47 pm
I am sooooo relieved that it was Shad that picked her up and not Lloyd! There is just something slimmy about him!
This was an awesoem chapter that did fill in some gaps and helped to figure out what was going through Tina's mind!!
This is my new favorite story on this board! I hope you update again soon!!
Author's Response: awwww. it's your favorite really? Thank you. That means so much to me. I was a little scared nobody would like it because the lead female is hispanic. Thank you, thank you so much! Reviewer: Redbird Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/01/09 04:35 pm
You had be fooled! I like how you went back so we could see what happened. add soon
Author's Response: Glad I had you fooled. I did my job then.
[Report This]Date: 17/01/09 08:30 am
You added again! I'm getting ready to read now! You're on a roll girl!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/01/09 07:57 am
I hate she left him but it needed to be done. I think lloyd was in the car. add soon.
Author's Response: thank you
[Report This]Date: 17/01/09 06:38 am
girl that was a straight up hit! hit! hit! You had me crying at the end for real. I've said it before and I'll say it again you are a great writter please keep it coming. As much as I hate to say it I think she's in the car with Lloyd. If she is she just went from one bad situation to a worse one.
I love this story!
Author's Response: thank you Reviewer: kim Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 17/01/09 06:34 am
Amazing. I loved that she is trying to be strong enough to be on her own and try to go it witout him.
Author's Response: thank you. I agree.
Date: 17/01/09 06:04 am