This just keeps getting better and better. I can tell you are really improving with each chapter. I can practically smell the drama boiling. Please! Please add soon. I'm addicted!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/12/08 06:48 am
Lord! Shalay looks like she's got Shad and Chris number. They better watch they're back. Okay now Chris is pissing me off. I know it's not all peaches and cream being locked up but damn he ain't gotta take it out on Tina. I could really tell he loves her by the way he was acting. All men act lick fools when they're inlove. I really love this story. Add soon girl.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 06:46 am
I really love this story! I don't know why Chris acts like such a dog. He loves Tina, but he always seems to push her away. If being in jail, spending all that time thinking about his past misdeeds, and worrying about another man getting closer to Tina while he is in the jail still does not cause him to get his shit together, then I don't know what will. If Tina is pregnant it will certainly seriously a new dimension to their relationship. I could easily see Rhianna bringing up her son if Tina is expecting. I love the lyrics and it made me soften towards Chris a bit. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SO MUCH I'M GLAD YOU REALLY LOVE IT. YEAH YOU'LL LEARN THAT CHRIS IS A REALLY COMPLICATED MAN AS THE STORY GOES ON. HE TENDS TO DO THINGS BACKWARDS. THANKS AGAIN CHICA!
Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 04:02 am
This was an excellent first chapter, I really loved the last line, with Chris wondering if he's good enough for Tina it made me smile, knowing that he cares about her that much.
Author's Response: YAY! THANK YOU SO MUCH. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/12/08 07:59 pm
I like this. I can tell this stories going to be drama filled. Great job.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 07:01 pm
the scene at the beginning with rihanna and chris was very interesting. that girl is ruthless. she need to check her self now before chris get up in that ass!
I liked the car sex scene. you got me all hot girl!
damn! he was arrested.
she's pregnant right? he must have that super sperm or something. now he got three chris! chris it's time to start wrapping it up.
add soon.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 07:00 pm
Very good start Sherry! I like the chemistry between Tina and Chris. Tina's a soldier because I know I wouldn't be able to just hang out until he decided to come home after hustlin'... but at least a dude is hustlin' I suppose! :)
Author's Response: thank you! thank you!
[Report This]Date: 23/12/08 06:14 am
I love this story! So he was stepping out with the skank Rhianna. I hope her child is not his. I truly could not see Tina getting past that and truthfully I wouldn't want her too. I think that Tina many be pregnant with Chris' child, but thats just a guess...IMO Lloyd has stalkerish tendencies
Author's Response: yeah, loyd's a little freaky to me as well.
Date: 23/12/08 02:33 am
yes! she's pregnant!
Author's Response: IS SHE PREGO?
[Report This]Date: 22/12/08 08:19 pm
wow i didn't think it would end this way0. I love this stories
Author's Response: THANK YOU. I'M REALLY GLAD YOU LIKE IT.
Date: 22/12/08 03:23 pm
Very nice chapter. Good that Chris Loves Tina. I'm thinking there's gonna be drama down the line with Rhianna. And 23 is not old. Marriage? Hmmmmm
Author's Response: thanx for taking the time to read.
[Report This]Date: 22/12/08 07:21 am
love the new banner.
update soon. i can feel the drama coming.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/12/08 05:57 am
I'm gonna take a guess but I think the girl he was taking to was Rihanna. She seems like the type that would do some sneaky shit behind Tina's back. Shad is a funny character. The chick fight was so funny. Megan sounds like she's really strungout. She need help.
I hope Chris can get it together because Tina seems like a pretty cool chick. Lloyd needs to back off.
Author's Response: STOP GUESSING GIRL STOP GUESSING. LOL Reviewer: Kim Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 21/12/08 10:28 pm
oh come on chris! pull your shit together! he needs to listen to shad.
Author's Response: MAYBE HE WILL.
[Report This]Date: 21/12/08 10:25 pm
This was a great update. I am really loving this story. So Chris has another child? Damn, he is too disrespectful to Tina. She has to drop him. I know Lloyd "loves" Tina, but he is coming on a little too strong. He better be careful b/c I could see Chris or someone in his organization doing something to him.
Author's Response: I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT.
Date: 21/12/08 07:46 pm
This a great story. I hope you update it soon. I like when Tina told Chris in Ch. 1 that she might not be around forever. Now, who is this girl who is calling Chris? I hope he is not stepping out on her again. Great Story.
Author's Response: thank you. I'll probably update tomorrow.
Date: 20/12/08 09:52 pm
I like the vibe of this story. Good work girl. If this is your first story I can't wait to see how your writting developes.
Good job!
Add soon pls.
Author's Response: I LIKE THAT YOU WENT BACK AND COMMENTED ON ALL THE CHAPTERS. THANX CHICA! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/12/08 04:58 am
I see you like cliffhangers missy! I wonder who's following her? Chris needs to tell Tina the deal. Now!
Who's the bitch on the phone?
Author's Response:
GUESS LOL
Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/12/08 04:55 am
Foreplay! Foreplay! That chapter was HOT! They got it own like a pot of neckbones girl. I think he made up for the night before don't you?
Tina and Mya together are so damn cute. The shop owner Michelle seems mad cool but I'm not to sure about that damn Rihanna. She seems like trouble! Trouble!
I really liked this chapter. Shit! I really like this story. This is the first story I've read on this site and it's a nice welcome. You're doing really well for you first story.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU. I'M REAL NERVOUS ABOUT POSTING ON THIS SITE. I WASN'T SURE IF ANYONE WOULD LIKE THIS KIND OF STORY BUT AS LONG AS I HAVE READERS LIKE YOU I'LL KEEP POSTING.
Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/12/08 04:52 am
I love me some Chris Brown. So you sold me right there. I would have never thought about putting Christina Aguilera and him in a story together. It's a very differrent conbonation but I really like it. The way you write them forces the reader to see their chemisty.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/12/08 04:46 am
Who was on the phone? Is Tina gonna get her sneakers and vasaline, you know just incase?
Don't leave me hanging.
Author's Response: YOU NEVER KNOW SHE JUST MIGHT. Reviewer: ML Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/12/08 03:56 am
Well you did call the chapter foreplay - LOL Love the introductions of all the new characters. Nice Update.
Author's Response: THANK YOU
[Report This]Date: 20/12/08 03:11 am