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Title: The Cast and the Music

oh man you need to write for OLTL! Rene would have never left the show! :D I loved reading this story. They are crazy together!

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/05/09 02:14 am

Title: Oh Wait! What Came After the Sexing.

That was too damn cute! 

Nobody writes Tangeline comedly like you do, BM!  Gawd I just miss our couple so much.

Reviewer: pru Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/05/09 02:04 am

Title: Six

LOL... Great story and Todd is a lunatic but I like him.

Reviewer: indycoolchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/04/09 02:29 am

Title: Six

Girl, this story got me twisted in knots as I have hardly been able to keep up because my computer was jacked up, I have been catching up bit by bit in the Library.

As always, you are doing a great job, update soon.

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/09 02:30 am

Title: Six

*Sigh*

 

Damn I love the way you write them. Just...DEAD ON perfect. Every love scene I read of yours with them just gives me chills. And I believe I once told you that when another writer induces envy in my I consider that a damned good thing - well you do - every time.

 

This has inspired me. Please update soon, unless this is complete, in which case please keep writing Todd/Evangeline because NO ONE can like you can.

 

If only they had you on OLTL - Evangeline and Todd would be THE COUPLE and the ratings would be through the roof. It would be a hell of a lot better than the tripe they're churning out now-a-days.... 

Reviewer: Kendra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/09 04:31 am

Title: Six

Finally! I was wondering how long these two were going to do the denial dance, well I guess it was just Van.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/03/09 07:39 am

Title: Six

I missed them so much and now you are telling me only one more update!

Evangeline does protest too much but one touch from Todd and she's like butter melting in his hands. I know the last update will be excellent! so I'm waiting!

Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/09 12:16 am

Title: Six

Loved it! Kerri and Neil are the best! Oh, and David too!

Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/03/09 05:22 am

Title: Six

Dayum, BM, you never disappoint.

That was hot and humorous all at the same time.  So Todd, so Evangeline.  Damn, I miss our couple.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  LOL! Baby!

~Jeanine~

Reviewer: pru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/09 09:06 pm

Title: Six

Really loe this story. Very excited to se an update. You had me laughing so hard when she ran. That's very Van light.. I love the way you write this couple. Glad to see Todd pushing he buttons and making them talk about their feelings. The Neil/Keri stuff was priceless. Good update.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/03/09 04:50 pm

Title: Six

Aww, every nice! I loved that they realized how silly they were, fighting what now seems so obvious to them. I loved that they called Neil and Kerri (whom I love) and David got in the act (whom I also love). This a just a nice, simple way for them to find each other, and funny as hell too. Loved the chapter Black, can't wait to read the wrap up of the story. :D

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/09 09:42 am

Title: Six

LOL! She ran! That just cracked me up.

Ooooh, those two are hot! Anxious to see how they handle this umm development.

Reviewer: Hetairai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/09 01:29 am

Title: Six

I've been so buy lately that I compltely forgot about this story. I'm so glad you updated so I could jump back in.

This continues to make me grin like an idiot. If I were Evangeline I would run too after Todd kissed me. He is too much and I totally get why Evangeline would be scared.

David and Keri give me the most laughs. I would ask too if Todd was armed.

This is great stuff, BM. You definetely have a gift for writing romantic comedy.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/03/09 11:44 pm

Title: Six

That was Funny and Hot at the sametime... Love the banter with Kerri/Vange and Todd/Neil at the door, that was a hoot.

I'm going to be sorry when this story comes to a close.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/09 10:46 pm

Title: Six

I knew all that built-up tension was going to lead to an explosive love making between Todd and Evangeline. Now that was so hot and lovely too. Yeah, Todd was right. it sure was X-rated in what he had planned for Evangeline. I'm so glad that they finally 'work it out' :lol: Kerri, Neil, and David rock in this chapter so much. I need friends like them. I kind of figure that this lovely story was coming to a close, but a great close I must say. I can't wait to see how it ends. Great as always Black.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/09 03:55 pm

Title: Six

I"m glad she decided to quit too.  Excellent chapter.

Todd better not find out that Kevin has quick hands.

 

Reviewer: yhh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/03/09 12:15 pm

Title: Six

That was a great update.  I loved Todd and Van's phone conversations with David, Neil, and Kerri.  Todd and Evangeline were hot as hell, I loved when Van stepped back he stepped forward, then Todd touching her before she kissed him.  The sex scene was hot too, I just wish it was a little longer lol.  One more chapter? *cries* I hope another Tangie story is in the works or how about the Jack and Lily story?  I miss the "Kiss" series badly.  Great update.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/03/09 03:07 am

Title: Six

This is how they should have been on the damn soap! :D Lord I love this story! :P Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/03/09 12:56 am

Title: Six

well, Neil and Kerri helped even a little in this chapter.  And David as always cracked me up.  I didn't think Todd would let her get away and I am glad he didn't.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/03/09 12:42 am

Title: Six

About dam time lol these two finaly got it own lol but it was sweet loving and like todd said rated x lol. It good thing that todd and van has friends to make the see the bigger picture. thanks for the updated and love the chapter girl.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/09 12:30 am

Title: Five

Starr giving Todd advice about Evangeline...now thats a Manning. He sure wouldn't except from anyonelse.

That Manning just has a way about him that makes you want to hit him at one moment but fall into his arms in the next breath. Love is strange especially for a straight laced lawyer like Evangeline Williamson.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/09 10:14 pm

Title: The Cast and the Music

Right after my beloved Anna's Boys, this is my 2nd favorie story!

I already loved the movie, so this is the icing on the cake for me, to have Todd and Evangeline in this story. The banter isjust hilarious and I wish these two idiots would do the naughty already ;-)

David is just priceless, but that's a given, right?

Keep'em coming!



Author's Response: Hey shanesgirl. I"m so glad you like this one.  I love Tangeline, so writing this is like a treat for me :)

Reviewer: shanesgirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 11:11 pm

Title: Five

Oo la la! You had me dying with these lines: smoked an old joint Blair left at the bottom of their closet and "I couldn't give your mother away."

I've got to re-watch this movie!

Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 05:59 pm

Title: Five

I am loving this story.  You are perfectly capturing the chemistry between Todd and Evangeline

 

 

 

Reviewer: geniakay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 05:59 am

Title: Five

Great chapter... I can't wait to see if that kiss leads to more.... I can just picture Tood's face when he saw Vange in that outfit, I know he was in the men's room most of the day LOL.

Kerri is a riot as usual, and I wonder if Lily will become an issue between Todd/Vange.

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/03/09 12:23 am

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