The dress was inspired, I loved that she decided to play with his hormones a bit, he so deserved it. Keri and Evangaline are love, their scenes are so fun to read. And Kevin's kind of a lech, which makes all kinds of sense. LOL. Love the kiss the end too, and Star was fantastic, telling her Dad what's up. Let's hope he takes her advice. I'm pretty sure he will, but this is Todd we're talking about. *sighs*
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/02/09 09:20 pm
ahhh! just when it was getting to the good stuff!!!
Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 08:09 pm
Great Update. Very funny. Love the banter and cat & mouse game these two play with one another..
Love that Evangeline wanted to beat Todd & his own game. Finally, a kiss. Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 27/02/09 02:48 pm
You're EVIL!! I can't believe you stopped there.
Poor Lily, all ready to work and doesn't een realize she's just a pawn.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/02/09 12:09 pm
Now that's what I'm talking about! This chapter was the freaking BOMBDIGGITY! Evangeline strutting her kcikass self into the office looking like sin walking.
Todd all discomboboluted and not knowing how to deal. I also thought it was hilarous that both Evangeline and Kerri called Lily a whore.
And Starr was amusing as well. it's about damn time Todd claimed HIS woman. Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Reviewer: pru Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 07:22 am
This chapter had me dyin!!!
Especially the David/Todd stuff. Whoville and saying Todd's voice sounded all dreamy had me LMAO!
The insults between Todd and Nora, totally classic and the hotness happening iwth Todd and Evangeline out in the parking lot. I still can't believe he left her there. Can't wait to see what Evangeline does to him next. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Reviewer: pru Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 07:06 am
OMG!
This story is HIGH-LARIOUS! I was ROLLIN at how you perfectly wrote David. Him calling Evangeline backstabber, Judas, and Santa Claus was priceless. I loves him.
And him telling Evangeline she was in love with Todd and being disgusted by it was perfect.
As for the Lily stuff that's so wrong. I can't wait to see what Todd does next and how Evangeline handles it. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Reviewer: pru Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 06:50 am
Todd should know never mess with a woman. Women can play the game better then men and she prove that. He better listen to starr before he lose her. I wonder what the next move going to be are they going to make love? or take things slow? thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 06:44 am
Whoo!
Loving Todd and Evangline and how Kerri is all up in this story, as is Neil.
The banter between Todd and Eveangline is HOT, just like it was once upon a time on the show. IF ONLY! Can't wait to read what happens next.
Oh and loved what was said about Ryan in this chapter, I knew my thinking he was an unworthy tool was justified. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Reviewer: pru Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 06:32 am
Loving the story and can't wait to read more. Todd is adorable and witty like always, but like that's someting new.
Evangeline needs better taste in men, Ryan Lavery...really? Eww. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Reviewer: pru Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/02/09 06:18 am
That was a hilarious, great chapter. I love how Eva got Todd back by wearing something hot that got him excited. Mission Boner, lol!!! I also like that he was jealous of Kevin and Eva and thought she would go to Texas. I really liked the last part, it was so sweet how Todd stopped playing games, pulled her to the side, told her he is sorry, and kissed her. Awwww, so cute and sweet. I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 06:16 am
No you didn't BM!
I'm going to love this story. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Author's Response: :) Thank you. Reviewer: pru Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/02/09 06:07 am
FINALLY!!! Todd and Vange kiss!!!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 04:57 am
Black, I love it I am a proud ass Tangie fan first. They are the best supercouple never allowed to come to fruition. The elevator kiss stills gives me tingles , what was it 3 years ago? MORE NOW!!!! RIDHT AFTER ANNA'S BOY'S!!!!!!!
Reviewer: monique32 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 04:54 am
Yay! we got an update and it was well worth the wait too. I thought it was so funny and evil of Evangeline to get Todd back with her hot suit, but it did do the trick and then some. ;) Oh, I'm so glad to see Todd was feeling bad at what he did to Evangeline the night before. You can clearly see that they are so in love, but neither have been open enough to say so. Todd looking at Evangeline over her business meeting was classic Todd and the ending was so sweet and hot. Todd saying he's sorry and then kissing Evangeline. *sighs happily* Yet, we need more! I look forward to the next chapter.
Btw, Todd treating Lily as dead weight to so great to read. :LOL:
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 04:48 am
Um, yeah so I officially stalking you. I've read your work, and I love it! I want more of this story! This is how they should have wrote it on the show, of course with MORE SEX! I can not wait for the updates on all of your stories! Thanks!
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 04:28 am
Woo hoo! Let the games begin! Thank you so much for putting David in this story--I loves him!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 14/02/09 09:22 pm
UG. I was SO convinced they were gonna get it on!! Ah well, guess I'll have to wait till the next chapter. Todd is written perfectly, as usual.
Reviewer: kendrawriter Signed [Report This]Date: 13/02/09 12:17 am
I really love this story. You should really write for daytime. I love to read romantic stories. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: nicnac Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/09 10:00 pm
This was a great update. I was LOL from the start to the end. Loved the David/Todd moments.. "You are Gay, aren't you!" so wrong, yet so funny on alll levels. LOL
Evangeline stop playing.. You have a Love Jones girl. Say uncle already and get you some.. LOL
Where did Todd go and what is he going to do next? Update soon please!
[Report This]Date: 06/02/09 09:38 pm
Black I wonder what games you are going to make these two play. I knew it wouldn't be that easy for you Toddikins...LOL!!! I just love when these two...nah let me rephrase...I love it when Evangeline tries to fight off those emotions for her honeybear...all she has to do is squeeze...LOLLLL!!!
Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/02/09 09:01 pm
Todd frowned. "But you’re gay right?"
"No!" David’s arms fell to his side. "Why the hell do people keep asking me that?"
*eyes you*
I know you didn't just write that? LOLOLOLOL
Excellent update and the banter just keeps getting better. Very nice moment at the end, I like that things are heating up between them. And that Evangline isn't going down without a fight. David is love, as are Keri and Neil. I love that she calls him adorkable, that made me smile. This entire update made me happy actually, so great. And I'm anxiously awaiting the next one.
Games indeed...
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/09 06:08 am
Todd just doesn't learn. I really think that he should have listened to David on this one. Vang has too much back up here. Kerri and Nora is really waiting for her to get so tired of Todd. And what a great glimpse into the past and the one time that she did give it back to him when she left and couldn't be found.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 06/02/09 03:22 am
My favorite couple, my favorite author, a wonderful update - have I told you lately that I love you???
Author's Response:
Thanks so much missankimba ;)
Reviewer: missannkimba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/09 02:11 am