okay i need more like fast cuz this story has grown on me and i hate cliff hangers...
Author's Response: lol sorry i had to leave you with a cliff hanger, but it'll be worth the suspense. so the drama begins haha
[Report This]Date: 04/01/09 09:40 pm
Looking good, keep going!
Author's Response: :D thank you
[Report This]Date: 04/01/09 09:27 pm
Remember the line in the movie Jerry McGuire: you had me at hello? Well that line fits the bill here. The title made me look, the synopsis drew me in, the second paragraph caught me pleasantly by surprise and by the end of the chapter…you had me…hook, line and sinker. It’s official; I’m a defunktDAME fan!
Don’t know what the subsequent chapters are like but if the first’s any indication, I’m sure I’ll love them too.
Fabulous writing.
Author's Response: aw, this is my favorite review so far :D i love when people acknowlede my work. makes me get into the writing mood. glad i have at least one fan haha <3 Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/01/09 09:06 pm
Great start! Update soon!
Author's Response: thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/09 08:17 pm
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: thanks! update coming in the next week or so. be on the lookout :D
Date: 04/01/09 07:10 pm
This is gonna make me cry I see.
Author's Response: lol i hope you go through all kinds of emotions reading this.
Date: 04/01/09 06:56 pm
Great start looking forward to reading more . Thanks
Author's Response: thanks for reading, hope to keep you interested :D
[Report This]Date: 04/01/09 12:55 pm
Very well written. You gave a lot of visual and already established Jake's character. Keep going and thanks.
Author's Response: thanks for reading. i really took my time with Jake.
Date: 04/01/09 10:50 am