I loved it!!!!
Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/02/11 07:24 am
Loved that story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/05/10 08:34 am
That was a sweet story!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/09 05:55 am
this was a seriously cute story. i loved it.
Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/10/09 05:27 am
My favorite part of this story was the beat down, it was poetic in how it was served!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 22/10/09 05:20 am
Hey, interesting song fic. Liked the quotes and how it was accompanied into dialogue as well.
Physically, Justin and Jazelle make a pretty awesome couple. And they get along great too.
Wasn’t sure whether to frown upon the fact that Justin would so blatantly hit onto a girl that was already taken or to respect his determination. Love his outfit and slang too, lol someone has jungle fever!
As for Jazelle, I didn’t buy her excuse of the fact that she was a bit intimidated by Darius or that she stayed with him out of habit. I think she stayed with him cause of the reasons most women stay with jerks, not for who they are but for what they represent. The guy is attractive and successful and confident.
Men like Darius make women doubt themselves and their sense of worth which is why many of them put up with their crap.
She’s still a strong character. I’m glad she dumped him and I even enjoyed the way she did it. Go girl!
Darius was a dumb jerk. What else can I say? The guy’s a lawyer. He goes out and gets people to physically attack the couple in a public place.
What a ridiculous thing to do. Forget the fact that his ass was handed back to him, shouldn’t he have been worried that Justin was a well known business man and could just hire someone to do his dirty work? He could get revenge without having to be there in the first place.
Or even just the fact that both could press charges with the police and he could have his license removed and be thrown in jail for physical assault?
Or maybe the plan was to be so obvious and ludicrous that no one would believe the two…who knows. I’m glad he got dealt with and am glad both were together in the end. It was a fun read, great work!
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]Date: 28/07/09 03:34 am
awwwwwwwwwwwww shuccccckkks
Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed [Report This]Date: 20/03/09 02:59 pm
Aww this was a sweet story
Reviewer: ValentinesBaby Signed [Report This]Date: 17/02/09 08:35 pm
this was really good! I felt myself throwing a kick at stupid Darius and his low life thugs as well!
I really don't get why guys feel they own someone after they move on. Life is weird.
Reviewer: rosie rolle Signed [Report This]Date: 17/02/09 02:23 am
No you didn't just end it like that! I thought there would be more. Now I'm really sad. But you know what I'm glad to have read your story and looking for more of your stories in the near future. I really enjoyed Jazelle and Justin especially hope they beat up Darius and his friends. It was hilarious.
Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/02/09 06:13 pm
Thanks for a great story
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/02/09 01:58 am
Awww.....I cant believe its over. I know it wasn't meant to be a long story, but still.
Sweet story. Well done.
Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/02/09 01:17 am
Thanks for a great read. I am glad that she found some happiness after dealing with the stoopid one. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 14/02/09 12:46 pm