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Title: Chapter 1: The Middle

That chapter is all about love makng! That was beautiful, well described. Just beautiful.

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/08/14 02:48 am

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

Beautiful!

Reviewer: alexp696 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/12 02:40 am

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

adorable!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 10:01 pm

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

well done, chica. a wonderful read.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/07/10 07:33 pm

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

This was an awesome story! I need to know what became of Josh and George. I am now going back to writing my paper. Thank you for the wonderful distraction.  

Reviewer: Libri Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/05/10 07:43 am

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

OMG OMG OMG - I just loved this story, a perfect lovestory, so sweet and HOT - they way one wants a relastionship to be - love the couple, they so complete each other, and I love the cast, especially Ewan, he's one of my all time crush! *DROOL* Your writing skills are just excellent, I love the richness of it, how they notice each others sides, smll things, personality. Any way, justa wonderful read!! ( *sigh*, I wish I was the girl in this story..!)



Author's Response: Thanks. (I wish I was her, too. Lol.)

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/03/10 08:14 pm

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

Hot and sexy scenes, I loved it!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/09/09 06:26 pm

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

I really enjoyed reading this story.  I would love to read more about them in short snippets.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/09 01:26 pm

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

This story was [fucking] amazing.... you should continue it or make them get pregnant or something. I loved how original it was!!

Author's Response: Thanks! You are making me want to get off my lazy bum and come up with some fresh material. ;D

Reviewer: JB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 1: The Middle

THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Please continue writing more stories!!!!!!!

 

THANKS

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/04/09 07:38 pm

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

What a great sensuous read...my goodness, these two were so hot together and she was so shy in admitting her love for him.  Thank goodness he wasn't to shy to tell her that he loved her.  So what happens next for this dynamic couple?  Thanks for a great read and as far as the first chapter goes, I love how bold that she was to walk into his apartment and into his shower....she claimed her man.  Thanks again.

Author's Response: Thanks! There are so many (wonderful) stories out there where the man is all alpha and "claims his woman." I wanted to have a story where the girl is able to do the same without being intimidating.

Reviewer: Divisionred Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/02/09 05:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1: The Middle

This story was hot and sweet. I loved it. George and Josh made a cute couple and I liked how the intensity between them and how it all led up to them coming together. Great job.

Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 03:09 am

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

I loved this and it was sweet , sexy and darn hot!! I just wanted more...:)

Author's Response: Thank you! I haven't been writing much lately, but your response, as well as others, are encouraging.

Reviewer: neneburge Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/09 04:21 am

Title: Chapter 1: The Middle

I just realized that the chapters were backwards, but it didn't really mess with the flow of the story to me.

Talk about daring, she knew what they both wanted and took charge!



Author's Response:

Yeah...
It was originally just going to be the first chapter, but I got such encouraging responses that I decided to continue with it. I'm not very good with plot development, so I thought just explaining their background would be a good idea. And yes, she is the take charge type: I wanted to have a female character who was nice, but not completely submissive.
Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to respond! :) 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/01/09 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

This was totally awesome. Thank you for sharing. Tender tender tender and very sexy.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. 

Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/01/09 02:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1: The Middle

This story was told with an odd timeline and I think that made it a little more enjoyable. Good work

Author's Response:

Thanks!
I think one of the benefits of writing a story all at once as opposed to in several installments is that you get a greater control over the timing of events. As it turns out, it is because I wrote this story in two installments that it has a non-linear arch. But it actually came out kind of interesting, and now I wan to try and play around with time in all of the things I (am going to) write.
Glad it worked out, and that you liked it.

Reviewer: Brit Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/01/09 12:15 pm

Title: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

OH MY GOSH I JUST LOVE IT PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oops! I deleted your other esponse by mistake. Sorry. Thanks for reading and reviewing, though. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/01/09 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 1: The Middle

Please say you are going to continue this story! i loved it!

Author's Response: Unfortunately, that was the entire story. :( I may add an epilogue in the future, but I think chapter 2 ended on a good note, no? Thanks for reading, and thank you for the review. 

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/01/09 05:55 am

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