ITS GREAT, I LOVE THE STORY LINE SO FAR, HOPEFULLY I CAN READ SOME MORE!
Reviewer: LaceTurkeyExpress Signed [Report This]Date: 12/05/11 01:05 am
Wow! This is really a unique story, though quite sad! Its seems to be unrequited love . . . great writing style though. I was totally drawn in.
Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/09 04:45 pm
I’m really enjoying your stories. The plots are simple yet very poignant. This one was one of the most intriguing so far. I think it could be turned into a bigger story. I was so intrigued by the characters. I really wanted to know more.
I enjoy how you write the love stories that we experience more and more often in reality. There’s no big drama or necessary any happy endings, which is just like real life! Well done!
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/04/09 02:47 am
What a sad story. Who is Aaron, her boyfriend and what happened to him? Thanks
Reviewer: Divisionred Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/02/09 04:36 pm
Wow! I would love to read more about these characters (great character pics, btw). I'm hooked!
Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]Date: 23/01/09 05:11 am
I wish there was more to this story. I prefer happy endings.
Author's Response: Strong possibility it will be continued. Watch out for it!
Date: 20/01/09 07:12 pm
sounds like its going to a sad one but a goodie. update soon please
dani
Reviewer: classicbeauty Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/09 07:11 am
Oh wow!!! This seems VERY promising. Update soon. I really want to know what happened to her and who Aaron.
Author's Response: Ahh I was going to just leave it there but we'll see what happens. Thank you for reading =]
[Report This]Date: 19/01/09 05:06 am
Intresting first chapter, I can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: Glad I perked your interest! =]
[Report This]Date: 18/01/09 06:39 pm