I'm loving this, absolutely loving it. You're re-writing the story the way it was ment to be. I love that everyone's staying in character and that you're an emotional writer cuz that's what makes a good story to me, not plotdriven pieces all about explosions and accidents with gratuitous sex with random pairings. I can't wait to read the next installment!

I love a Tangeline story and this one is goooood!

Okay I didn't see that coming. You must continue. You can't leave things hanging like that!

Just with that last statement, you so have me waiting at the edge of my seat. 

Wow.. you have me hooked in the first chapter.  I love how you  had them both acknowledge their mistakes and continued love for each other.  I also love/hate how it is not enough. 

I eagerly await to where you will go with this.  Thank you for sharing your vision.

Sometimes I feel like I have totally blocked John from my memory banks and have never contemplated writing a side where they actually talked to each other and got it all out. You did a good job in giving me the sense of the words that might be spoken if it were to happen and I love authors that allow me to feel the moment. I am definitely interested in seeing where you take this story and can't wait for the update! Great Job!

Oh I'm enjoying the setting in this story. Can you moved on Mcpain,so we can get to the real story which has always been about Todd and Evangeline!! I can't wait to see what happens to these two in this story.

Great start. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please post soon.

That was so sad, but i loved how she and Todd were before john came out. I hope that todd will be there to pick up the pieces