Continue this story... Please!
Reviewer: Bella Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/05/10 02:02 am
Definitely would like to know more about Devon.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/10/09 02:59 am
You definetly should contiune with this story, I can't wait for Devon to meet the man to help her Blow out those candles.
Author's Response:
I know, he's gotta be something special, or aleast she hopes he is. thank you for the review, and please stay tune for more. :) - dani
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/01/09 10:36 pm
I think that you should continue...encorporate that new book, where the author swears that she can help you find a man in 30 days. This story could be fun in that she trys online dating, read books, but the love that is hers is right in her face, sheseems him every day bit because she has been so obsessed she pays no attention to him until one evening when she is devastaed bt meeting another fool, they connect...good luck.
Author's Response:
what book is this? i may look into for quotes. lol, anyway thank you so much for the ideas. part of me wonders have you been reading my notes or something lol. thanks for the review, please stay tune for more and keep giving me feedback, its well appricated. - dani
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 28/01/09 01:36 pm
Nice start. Think you should continue.
Author's Response: yay! thank you, more should be coming soon. so stay tune and thanks again - dani
Date: 28/01/09 01:27 pm
Oh yes, please continue this.
Author's Response:
yay thank you! more coming soon, so stay tune, thanks again for reading and reviewing. -Dani
Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/01/09 07:34 am
OMG! Are you following me around and getting story ideas! LOL!!! I'm 3 years from the big 3-0 and I can't get it off my mind. It doesn't help that most of my friends are married, married with kids, or just have kids.
Author's Response:
Lmao, I love your reveiws, im not going to lie i start to look for them when i post here. because they make me smile. thank you so much for that. but i promise im not a stocker. its just my brother said something that made me think, what if? ya know. so why not create someone whos got the guts to shut it down. so please stay tune, keep telling me what you think. thanks again for the reveiw. and when i write im gonna be thinkin of you also. ;o) - dani
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 28/01/09 04:03 am
loving this, more please.
Author's Response: yay, thank you, im glad you are! please stay tune more soon. thanks again - dani
Date: 28/01/09 03:44 am
I like it. Please continue. You can have a lot of fun with this premise. GO for it!!!
Author's Response:
lol thank for the reveiw. and i gotta agree i think im going to like this one too. thats a lie, i already do and im excited to share. so please stay tune for some more and keep giving me the feedback. its always welcome. thanks again. -dani
Reviewer: rosie rolle Signed [Report This]Date: 28/01/09 01:41 am
Umm is Ava one of those sisters that like things to be focussed on them? It may have been an accident but showing off her ring when it's supposed to be about your sister? Well at least Robert seems to have some sense. So who is the lucky man going to be that sweeps Devon off her feet, or will she do the sweeping?
Author's Response:
First off thank you for reveiwing. Second, "So who is the lucky man going to be that sweeps Devon off her feet, or will she do the sweeping?" I loved the way you worded that, all of that. i know im writing the story, but it even got me thinkin. lol but you guys are going to be meeting him soon. Ava wasnt ment to be that way at first but than i could see this sassy chacater talking back and Robert had to be her calmer half. but their is more to her. so you gotta stay tune to see whats next. thanks again - dani
Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/01/09 12:33 am
This sounds so interesting. I can't wait to see how she does finding love.
Author's Response: yay! thank you, im excited about the reponds from everyone. more coming soon, so please stay tune. thanks again - dani
Date: 28/01/09 12:16 am