Sorry it tooke me so love to review. Amy gets on my nerves. I knew she was going to try something, You could just tell about her. What is it going to take for Jonathan and Celia to break from their outer selves and give into their love for each other. YEt, I'm loving this slow build-up Chocolate. It just wonderful. Great updated Chocolate.
Author's Response:
Hey Megumi,
No problemo Megumi...Got to love Amy and her plans...LOL!!! A birdie told me that slow pace is good..;) Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/03/09 09:33 pm
Nice update.. Still loveing the pace and flow of the story, just one question.. WTF Amy... Nice Job!
Author's Response:
Hey Z...
Pace what a riot...LOL!!! As for Amy...HAhahahaha!!! Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 20/03/09 12:17 am
another great chapter and amy is very wicked hopefully he does not fall for her bs
Author's Response:
Hey ellen,
He is a man after all and once you can play it..hey...lol!!! Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed [Report This]Date: 17/03/09 11:12 pm
thanks for the update, i detest amy, i can`t wait for jonathan and celia to get more time together, i want them to get closer, and him to find out about his son
Author's Response:
Hey mslelee,
Thanks for the great review. Amy is the spicey mix to all of this...LOL!!! Updates will tell much...;)
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/03/09 06:18 am
Wow that amy is a very tricky woman but she better watch out because husband is going to find out the truth. I hope celic leaves when the father come or it going to be world war 2 in the house. Love that he a good doctor and listen to people can't find doctors like that any more. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Thanks wwe,
You are so right...doctors like him don't exist anymore. Amy has a lot of tricks in her bag to get what she wants at the time..lol! I don't think Celia wants to runaway from his father at least not this time. Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 17/03/09 06:08 am
Ms. Amy is a trecherous cow. Why does she want him in bed so much? Is she annoyed that he's ignoring her or is she pregnant and needs to pass the kid off as his.
Author's Response:
Hey g,
Yeah she is treacherous. She is pretty much annoyed that she is being ignored. Her body used to have children...not so...LOL!!! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/03/09 06:46 pm
I really dislkike his wife more than anything..I just hope he finds out before she takes him for everything he has and ruins his relationship with his servants.
I am not sure how I feel about Celia actually still being in love with Dr, Campbell..I know that there was not much he could have done to protect her from his father but He should have done more especially when she was having his baby..I don't know...
Plus her husband is away at sea and very much in love with her and that baby...there can be no real future for celia and the dr in this time period so ..I just don't know what to feel about them..
This story however is very thought provoking and emotional...I have a hard time with period pieces durring slavery times but this is so well done and the servants are very real people not stereotypes..I am really enjoying this story sweetie...good job!
Author's Response:
Hey neneburg,
"The Bay" is loosely based on my own country's own history with emancipation and the creation of our own "Creole" population. Marriages they didn't allow but you could pretty much live with one another (not being seen in public) The children and grandchildren of these unions went on to government positions once the Legislature was established.
Jonathan is Celia's first love and she didn't tell him about the baby. He wishes the child that she has was his but he actually doesn't know. After she was thrown out of the Campbell's estate Jonathan went away to England to study. First loves are the hardest things to leave in the past especially if you were torn away from that person.
Thanks for the great review nene!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 16/03/09 06:10 pm