Oh keep it coming Chocolate. I knew I wanted to drop kick Amy and Sara before this story was finish. Crazy group of women. Oh Jonathan and Celia can't contain the passion for each other too much longer. Awe, the father and son scene was too cute. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Megumi for the review!
So like wwe you are going to put a wrestling move on the two heffas!
So tell me what would you do M...give into that passion. Jonathan knows about Amy but Celia has no idea what Joseph is doing out on the sea. I'm not saying that she is naive because being gone that long you never know what might happen.
[Report This]Date: 07/05/09 06:04 am
wow ok first wanted to say love love love this story lol. second the father son moment so sweet eating candy buying a toy playing laughing it was sweet. Wow his wife is real y crazy going to the enemy for help lol but guess you do what every to have your way. love the story the time line the love every thing thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much wwe for the review!
Very happy that you are enjoying the story. Its dedicated to the readers of my stories and you all deserve to have a good story.
Jonathan is trying to play catch up so he's playing Santa Claus for his son. In the future Celia will have to put her foot down
Sometimes you have to deal with the devil but all of us knows once that happens you usually get burned
[Report This]Date: 05/05/09 07:14 am
thanks for the update, love the story, love jonathan and celia, i am so glad amy and clara`s plan is backfiring, i hope the guy doesn`t marry clara either, that would be great pay back for butting in, amy better not try and mess with celia, i love the flashback of jonathan and celia, more please they are so beautiful, i just love jonathan and joshua, they are great together, he loves his son so much and celia, she loves him too, i can`t wait until jonathan throw amy out,
Author's Response:
Thank you mslelee,
Amy and Clara are both young and eventhough Sara is too she is been in this game longer than any of them ever have. Clara's idea sounded perfect at the time but she didn't understand what sort of enemy Amy had created.
When you say more please do you mean more conversation...or more you know
Date: 05/05/09 06:45 am
Sarah is one cold-hearted something, but I dislike Amy more at this point. Something tells me that in the end, Sarah will be my new target of extreme dislike.
Looks like Celia will not need to make a decision. Joseph's desires seem to be shifting elsewhere.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Sweet,
Amy got the prize when she thought Celia was permanently dealt with. Usually these emotional battles were between the women because the men had all the power in those days.
Well Celia doesn't know what's going on at sea and you know some men...
[Report This]Date: 05/05/09 02:48 am
OK I despise Amy and Sara but the only good thing about Sara is she is going to help us get rid of amy..yeah!!
I love how naturally Joshua has taken to his daddy and vice versa..they belong together and if mommy would just stop fighting it and go with her heart she would see that too..
I think Joseph will make a good match with the sea whore..he is a seaman and belongs on te sea with someone he cares about and that cares about him...nor Celie!!
Thus story keeps getting betterlllI am wwayy ti impatient for another update....great job sweetie!!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the review neneburge,
You could always find a good spar partner back in those Victorian times.
Sometimes I believe that children have an idea when someone is going to treat them well and as you say its all natural. Its her duty as a married woman to fight it
Sorry about the update today forgot to copy the darn thing off my computer
[Report This]Date: 05/05/09 02:37 am
I really liked their concious thoughts...so funny!
Amy is a twisted knot of nuts and fury. I loved the father-son moment with Jonathan/Joshua. So cute.
I knew it...I knew it! that Sara wouldn't publicly yield to her gripe with Celia. Great story...as always...fabulous chapter. It keeps getting better. You have an awesome handle on the time...no frill in this story at all! Keep it coming! 
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Spark
Its good to peek into your leads consciousness because you never know what thoughts are running through their minds whether it be good, bad or ridiculous! Jonathan wants to create that connection with his son because Joseph has had more time to build that relationship. You see that he's playing to good parent for right now.
Yeah Sara would never yield to that squabble. Thanks for enjoying the story.
Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/09 10:54 pm