i really enjoyed this story thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you too sweetrst1 for reading and I'm so happy that you enjoyed it very much!
Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/04/13 02:44 am
(tears up) Omg I literally have tears coming out of my eyes. This probably one of the best interracial love stories ever . It was interesting from beginning to end and I am so glad at the outcome of the story. I was expecting one of the lovers to die but im ecstatic that it didn't happen. I definitely want a part II . :( Bravo, well written.
Author's Response:
Wow Terraaay...just WOW!
In my time writing this fanfics I've had a few reviews that I left me feeling humbled but yours truly rises above all these others. I've never had someone told me that one of my stories brought tears to their eyes or considered it amongst one of the best interracial stories ever...Amazing! You've really left me speechless, feeling awesome and inspired once again. At the moment life and work have gotten in the way of me writing again for this site bc I know I have to really bring it. Hey maybe I will write another period piece for this site once again and dedicate it to you for giving me such an inspirational review. BRAVO TO YOU! It's reviewers like yourself that keep authors going!
Reviewer: Terraaay Signed [Report This]Date: 10/08/12 03:44 am
I diffinately love this read, the only thing i would have loved was to see how his friends felt about Celia.
Author's Response:
Hey kimyso,
I'm glad you loved my little fanfic. I understand your concern about his friends but I also felt that their age plus the times they were living in, made them think more about Johnathan and themselves instead of offering up heartfelt opinions but I may have been wrong. Still I'm grateful that you considered it a good read...Thanks!
Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/01/12 07:05 am
i loved this story...a great read.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much SarahLuff,
I was actually surprised that after all this time that someone would post a review about this story. Maybe its a sign for me to start writing that sequel...LOL!
I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading my little story from my little corner of the world. Again thank you very much!
Reviewer: SarahLuff Signed [Report This]Date: 26/10/09 06:42 pm
This was a great story. I was expecting Joseph to go that way. I am happy that they are together and raising their son. I do feel bad for Joe, but it's so hard to not cheer for Jonathan because he and Celia were lovers, first.
Thanks so much for sharing!
Author's Response:
Hey Spark,
It was a no win situation for Joseph because like you said these two were lovers in the past. First love never dies as they say. What if I had made him an evil bastard like his father would you be so cheerful? LOL!!! Thanks for reading, sharing your awesome reviews and supporting my story!
Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]Date: 08/06/09 06:22 am
Thanks for writing such a wonderful story. It just comes to show that love knows no boundaries or color!!!!!
It was good to see Amy get what she deserved and Andrew too. I love how Celia and Jonathan stood up to him. And even though Celia didn't wait until her marriage was over to be with Jonathan, Joseph wasn't a saint either. Plus, I still think that he and Lydia had something going on....and that gossip about one of her kids being Joseph's just peaked my curiosity. Not to mention, that woman on the boat; they may make a genuinely good couple; he might can change her way of living.
Surely, this isn't over.?.? I mean, Celia's pregnant (yay her); kudos for that BTW. That hussy that caused their relationship to end in the first place knows about them now and knows that Joshua is Jonathan's (well has a gut feeling); she can possibly try to ruin his career and I am dying to know what her husband wants to talk to her about and why he is soooo angry; could it be that he knows what kind of games she had been playing?
Again, THANKS for letting us (more so, ME) travel down this road with you. Can't wait to do it again!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Vie,
Gosh Vie you have laid out most of the loose ends...LOL!!! I am impressed about you pin pointing a whole lot of them. My brain is really occupied at the moment. It's fairly easy to think up a Tangie fic but this story has a lot going on...my fault but it is a story that is dedicated to the readers and deserves good writing. Hopefully I can write this sequel some time down the road. Thanks so much for the great reviews and the support that you have given me!
Reviewer: Vie Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/06/09 05:50 am
It is over...nooooo!!! Though a happy ending I am happy about I didn't want it to be over so quickly!! I love this story and I am so grateful they todk Jonathan's stinking ddaddy off...and booted him!! I am sad Joseph was hurt but He didnt love Celia really..it was a pride thing!! I am so happy their family is finally complete and hopefully they will have a girl to make it even more wonderful!!
Great job sweetie..I really loved this story!!
Author's Response:
Hey nene,
Yes it's over for now at least! LOL!! I have some things out there that can be resolved or not...it all depends but I couldn't give it the justice that it needed right now. Maybe I can write that dreaded sequel. There's always this fear that it won't measure up to the first but maybe this one time...who knows...like I said before it all depends. Happy that you loved the story! Thanks for your support and leaving those fantastic reviews!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/09 12:19 am
thank you so much for this wonderful story, i have totally enjoyed it, i didn`t know it was ending, i am going to miss it so much, so glad they got that happy ending, joseph gone, daddy gone, and she is pregnant, joshua calling him papa, they have a beautiful life ahead, thanks again for the great ride
Author's Response:
Hey mslelee,
Thanks so much for reading and leaving your reviews! My readers deserve a happy ending but I'll bet you noticed that I left a few loose ends dangling...;)
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/06/09 07:20 am
Bravo!!! I loved this story and am sad to see it come to an end.
Author's Response:
Hey Sweet Pea,
Where are the tears? LOL!!! I hope I have enough stories in my brain to impress you guys. As always thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/09 06:09 am
wow that was a nice sweet end to this great story. you have to do a sqeual girl to this couple. finaly gald that he told his father where to go and that the sister are making up. thanks for the story and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hey wwe,
Yeah the ending does suggest a sequel even though I hate writing it...LOL! There are still some underlying issues in their lives some can get resolved others may never but I have to think about it carefully. I'm happy that you enjoyed my story and went on this little journey with me!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/06/09 11:19 pm
Bravo Chocolate, Bravo!! Oh it's the end? But it was such a great ending too. I had thought that the storm of Joseph and Andrew was going to be longer, but I'm glad it wasn't. Now for Joseph to give all his love away for Joshua because he couldn't have Celia tells me that he only love the boy as long as he had Celia. I'm sad to read that, but it was best for them to end things and I'm sure he is with lady love at the sea anyway. As for the old fool Andrew. Good riddance. LOL @ Sara not getting Jonathan and her husband setting her straight. Oh I'm so happy for Jonathan and Celia. This was a great story Chocolate. Thanks for writing it. :)
Author's Response:
Hey Megumi,
You must see all the loose ends involved. Sara and her husband. Andrew walking away maybe recruiting..hmmm...Don't you get that it has sequel written all over it. Hope I have the guts to write it...:) The scope of the story is in my brain but I haven't put pen to paper therefore it won't be written as yet. Working more on that Tangie ;) I'm always grateful for all your support M!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/06/09 10:52 pm