Oh Goody!! this is so gret Chocolate!! Finally we get to read Celia and Jonathan story. Wow, so many emotions going on in this story. I really can't root againstt Joseph because he was there for Celia and Joshua, but we all know the Celia's true love is for Jonathan. Oh, Jonathan wife is a trip. I believe she is not in love with Jonathan, I believe she is al about making a name for herself. Joanthan and Celia in the same house together and Celia's husband is out to sea..... Oh this is going to be very interesting. :D Thanks for writing this Chocolate and great cast too.
Author's Response:
Hey Megumi,
I intentionally made Joseph's character in this manner because it would have been easy casting him as a mahogany camp worker...those men were only fathers in name since - because they were away for so many months they never really got the opportunity to connect to their wives or children.
Come on M...Amy must have been in love with Jonathan at some point in their marriage...why wouldn't you think so...;)
You have quoted some scenarios but there are others to think about...stay tuned to my updates...LOL!!!
I'm glad you liked the cast. Of course Kimberly Elise, Johnny Depp and Christina Ricci were perfect because they did period pieces but my concept of Celia's family was hard to put together...probably using the wrong search engines...LOL
Thanks for the great review!!!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/02/09 04:21 am
THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!
I can't wait to see what the future holds for these two!!!
Author's Response:
Sweet,
Thanks for the enthusiam! I always say that its readers like you guys that give authors the will to write their next story! Thanks once again for the great review!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/09 04:10 am
Great Start
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review! Reviewer: Ashauna77 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 04:07 am
Choc.. I usually don't go for historical, but I like your writing and decided to give it a try and I'm glad I did. I really like this story. It has a good voice and a good pace. You have my attention.
Looking forward to the next update! Good Job!
Author's Response:
Thanks Z,
I'm glad you read my fic because I know I lot of people don't go for historical writings for a variety of reasons. Once I have your attention I will do my best to see this fic through! Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/09 03:49 am
Very interesting cast... off to read
Author's Response:
Hey Z,
I had to search for pics that made me think a bit about that era so more corn rows/braids and then that head scarf and the manner of dress...also persons that would be a part of Celia's family..
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/09 03:46 am
Wow so i'm guessing the wife doens't know about him and celia? This is going to be very intersting to see how they going to act around each other and when he founds out he the father of her son. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hey wwe,
Amy sure doesn't know about these two of that I am sure...LOL!!! The dynamics of their lives as it is now makes it very interesting indeed to see their behavior around each other but just wait and see what I have on my mind...;)...Thanks for the great review!!!!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/09 12:45 am
nice pic of the cast.
Author's Response: Thanks wwe...it was quite a search because I sort of want pics that make me think about the era so I try to find those kind of pics... Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 12:37 am