thanks for the update, i can say i hate lydia, and i believe what sonia said, she is way to deep in celia business, i am so glad jonathan and celia are finally together, and joshua, i knew he wanted his family, the loving was so good, oh now i see double trouble is coming, jonathan and joseph, my could better stand together and fight them off
Author's Response:
Hey mslelee,
So why oh why is Lydia all up in Celia's business...is she playing the older sister role, just defending Joseph or is there more to this story than meets the eye
Yeah their biggest obstacles are coming and I believe in some ways this will judge their relationship more than Amy and Sara ever did. Thanks for the review!
Date: 20/05/09 07:52 am
I really would not not be surprised if her sister's baby is Joseph's cause she is really over the top defending him and I wanted to slap her darn face!1
I want Celia and Jonathan to be happy they deserve it after all they have been through and all they will face being together..they some happiness!
I am glad she left with him and glad they finally got to get it on...Jonathan has been waiting a long time and put it on Ms. Celia rotfl!! But it made my heart happy to see them finally able to share their love for each other w/o snicking around...now let's hope Jonathan can stand up to his eveil daddy!
I lurvs this story,,,so sweet and complex..I never thought I would because of the slavery aspect but I adore it!!
Author's Response:
Hey nene,
Thanks for the awesome review! I have really given the readers women that I want to slap around
Technically speaking isn't Celia sort of sneeking around... Have to correct you a little the Bay is an English colony so the black community has been emancipated since 1832 but you know how emancipation goes....
[Report This]Date: 20/05/09 02:49 am
Yay!! Jonathan and Celia finally got together and it was sweet and hot Chocolate. But damn it was a fight to get there. Lydia is a trip and now I wondering if she did have an affair with Joseph. Hmm, this goes to show that you should always be true to your feelings or people will get hurt in the end. So Joseph and Andrew Campbell are coming home huh? Oh this should be good. Keep it coming Chocolate.
Author's Response:
Hey Thanks Megumi,
You are so right Megumi in saying that you must stay true to your feelings because you begin to bring in a lot of other factors that complicate your situation. Of course Jonathan and Celia were put into the situation because of the times. Yeah the giants are coming home so watch out...
[Report This]Date: 19/05/09 08:08 pm
Wow!!!! That was an intense and great chapter Chocolate. Finally Jonathan got rid of that wife of his. But I'm still wondering about Sara crazy ass too. OhI love that Jonathan is talking action and claming his love and their son, but it seems thjat he is going to have to face Celia's mother now. Ohh, I can't wait ti see that will happen next. Great update dear!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the awesome review Megumi!
I knew I had one intense chapter inside of me...
Jonathan has a bit of his father inside of him. They are never ones to rest on their laurels. I think he has to face Lydia more than Abigail lucky for him he's an English gentleman...
I'm sort of behind because of internet issues and work so maybe Wednesday...
[Report This]Date: 16/05/09 08:37 pm
Oh dear...this story just keeps getting better! I love how much of a grasp of the language you have. Amy has truly descended to pathetic and spiraled out to just plain loco. I haven't taken my eye off her as yet.
And then Jonathan...returns and is sure to put up a fight for his Celia.
This is too good~
Can't wait for the next!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the awesome review Spark!
Those victorian morays contributed to her spiral. She was due to go crazy after Jonathan's confession of love for the housemaid!
[Report This]Date: 15/05/09 03:27 pm
excellent chapter, thanks, i am so happy amy and sofie are gone , especially amy, i loved him carrying her to jail, oh i love those passionate kisses, i want jonathan and celia together so badly, and little josh, jonathan is doing everything to get his family together, and you gave a cliff hanger, is that joseph, sorry joseph but i want celia with jonathan, and you haven`t been pure on that boat,
Author's Response:
Thank you mslelee,
Nah its not a cliffhanger just Lydia putting in her 2 cents as usual. I don't mean to bash Joseph but he's a man on a ship for so many days and he hasn't gotten any...
Date: 14/05/09 06:21 am
Oh hot dam the hubby is back and dr.campbell is not letting his love of his life and son go away. let the show down begin. glad that crazy chick was arrested. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: wwe, me throughing a cliffhanger at you guys like that...no way...sorry... A bit of conflict before that appearance. Thanks for the awesome review!
[Report This]Date: 14/05/09 05:45 am
Is Joseph finally home? Just when I finally think Jonathan and Celia are going to be togther, something crazy happens. At least Amy got what she deserved.
Author's Response: Sweet Pea, I wouldnt put a cliffhanger in this story and make Joseph magically appear... So its not going to be all that crazy. Amy deserved all of it... Thanks for the awesome review!
[Report This]Date: 14/05/09 04:19 am
OK you wrong for that cliffie..lol!!
Ok he had that kook locked up yeahhhh!!! I could not be happier..but now the poop is going to hit the fan..I want them to be together so badly but there is stll that little matter of Celia's husband..ok!! I know that is Celia's bossy but sister all up in their conversation ,,she needs to chill..he has done all he could to be with the woman he loves and I pray nothing stands in their way!!
Girl it is getting goood!! Love it..you are writing the heck out of this story!!
Author's Response:
Hey nene...having a lot of internet issues
No I wouldn't do a cliffhanger to my readers... Yeah its Lydia butting in where she doesnt belong. I'm happy that you are still enjoying the story. Thanks for the awesome review!
[Report This]Date: 14/05/09 02:05 am
Oh keep it coming Chocolate. I knew I wanted to drop kick Amy and Sara before this story was finish. Crazy group of women. Oh Jonathan and Celia can't contain the passion for each other too much longer. Awe, the father and son scene was too cute. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Megumi for the review!
So like wwe you are going to put a wrestling move on the two heffas!
So tell me what would you do M...give into that passion. Jonathan knows about Amy but Celia has no idea what Joseph is doing out on the sea. I'm not saying that she is naive because being gone that long you never know what might happen.
[Report This]Date: 07/05/09 06:04 am
wow ok first wanted to say love love love this story lol. second the father son moment so sweet eating candy buying a toy playing laughing it was sweet. Wow his wife is real y crazy going to the enemy for help lol but guess you do what every to have your way. love the story the time line the love every thing thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much wwe for the review!
Very happy that you are enjoying the story. Its dedicated to the readers of my stories and you all deserve to have a good story.
Jonathan is trying to play catch up so he's playing Santa Claus for his son. In the future Celia will have to put her foot down
Sometimes you have to deal with the devil but all of us knows once that happens you usually get burned
[Report This]Date: 05/05/09 07:14 am
thanks for the update, love the story, love jonathan and celia, i am so glad amy and clara`s plan is backfiring, i hope the guy doesn`t marry clara either, that would be great pay back for butting in, amy better not try and mess with celia, i love the flashback of jonathan and celia, more please they are so beautiful, i just love jonathan and joshua, they are great together, he loves his son so much and celia, she loves him too, i can`t wait until jonathan throw amy out,
Author's Response:
Thank you mslelee,
Amy and Clara are both young and eventhough Sara is too she is been in this game longer than any of them ever have. Clara's idea sounded perfect at the time but she didn't understand what sort of enemy Amy had created.
When you say more please do you mean more conversation...or more you know
Date: 05/05/09 06:45 am
Sarah is one cold-hearted something, but I dislike Amy more at this point. Something tells me that in the end, Sarah will be my new target of extreme dislike.
Looks like Celia will not need to make a decision. Joseph's desires seem to be shifting elsewhere.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Sweet,
Amy got the prize when she thought Celia was permanently dealt with. Usually these emotional battles were between the women because the men had all the power in those days.
Well Celia doesn't know what's going on at sea and you know some men...
[Report This]Date: 05/05/09 02:48 am
OK I despise Amy and Sara but the only good thing about Sara is she is going to help us get rid of amy..yeah!!
I love how naturally Joshua has taken to his daddy and vice versa..they belong together and if mommy would just stop fighting it and go with her heart she would see that too..
I think Joseph will make a good match with the sea whore..he is a seaman and belongs on te sea with someone he cares about and that cares about him...nor Celie!!
Thus story keeps getting betterlllI am wwayy ti impatient for another update....great job sweetie!!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the review neneburge,
You could always find a good spar partner back in those Victorian times.
Sometimes I believe that children have an idea when someone is going to treat them well and as you say its all natural. Its her duty as a married woman to fight it
Sorry about the update today forgot to copy the darn thing off my computer
[Report This]Date: 05/05/09 02:37 am
I really liked their concious thoughts...so funny!
Amy is a twisted knot of nuts and fury. I loved the father-son moment with Jonathan/Joshua. So cute.
I knew it...I knew it! that Sara wouldn't publicly yield to her gripe with Celia. Great story...as always...fabulous chapter. It keeps getting better. You have an awesome handle on the time...no frill in this story at all! Keep it coming!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Spark
Its good to peek into your leads consciousness because you never know what thoughts are running through their minds whether it be good, bad or ridiculous! Jonathan wants to create that connection with his son because Joseph has had more time to build that relationship. You see that he's playing to good parent for right now.
Yeah Sara would never yield to that squabble. Thanks for enjoying the story.
Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/09 10:54 pm
thanks for the wonderful update, i love jonothan and celia, and i really like hortense, lydia get on my nerves, oh i hope beatrice tell on amy and clara, amy needs to be stopped, if she messes with celia , she is as good as gone, which i won`t mind, jonothan is so in love with celia, and that was a smoking kiss, i am waiting on a flashback of thier love scenes,
Author's Response:
Hey mslelee,
Promise you next update I'll give a little glimpse into that flashback With Beatrice it all depends because she fears for her job...understandable back in those days. During this time Celia is not going to initiate any of those kisses so you know...
[Report This]Date: 28/04/09 07:33 am
I am soooo loving this!
Author's Response:
Hey Vie,
Thanks for the awesome review and I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story!
Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]Date: 28/04/09 05:47 am
Oh how I love this story. So Amy has the vapors about Jonathan and Celia...huh?
Oh and the cute play between them...sexy!
Well, best strap myself in. Something tells me Amy is about sink to the lowest of lows...and then his dad with that impending visit gives me hives.
Another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Spark,
Jonathan was just goading her...another side of this otherwise wonderful gentleman. Amy thinks she knows what she's doing...hmmm...thats all I'm going to say on that one Thanks for the great review!
[Report This]Date: 28/04/09 04:21 am
That Amy is a beast!!!! Beatrice better do the right thing and tell Jonathan, but I seriously doubt that she will.
Author's Response:
Hey Sweet,
Thanks for the great review! Like I told another reviewer its very hard for Beatrice to do this because doing so has so many consequences like her not being able to work at another employer for speaking out things that were said in confidence....especially if Amy finds out that she was the one that did it.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 28/04/09 12:18 am
I love this story but I really want to hit that darn Amy in the head and drag her behind off to some desolate island away from Celia and the doctor!!
I do believe that cow Amy will get found out sooner rather than later and I hope he dump her behind off in some cave somewhere after he divorces her!!
Poor Celia is caught in between love and obligation, my heart aches for her but I so want her to wind up with the doctor..I sorry but he loves her so much and she does him too!
I do love me some Hortense though...I hate she had to leave cause she called Lydia straight out...sickening sibling that she is...
I am love this sweet story with all it's complexities...you are doing such a wonderful job sweetie..I can hardly wait for more!
Author's Response:
Hey nene,
Remember she is still the wife.. Amy may also think that she knows what she is doing but really she doesn't... It took a lot to leave your husband in those days...it had a lot of consequences (mainly for white society) but Celia is finding it hard to give up on a man who was there for her and Joshua. I hope that I can continue to make you enjoy this story. I'll try my best
[Report This]Date: 27/04/09 10:14 pm
Wow each chapter get better and better and better. They love grows so does the wife hate for celia. I hope she tell celia was going on but that is a hard choice let a friend go to jail or get a worst punshment by not saying a word. love the bonding moment btween celia and her son. love the story girl and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hey wwe,
Thanks for the awesome review! With two couples involved there will be love and hate...although technically Joseph is not there. Back in those days you kept a good record of yourself if you didn't talk your employer's business. The decision for Beatrice isn't an easy one. If Amy were to find out she would make it very difficult for her to get a next job. I'm happy that you are enjoying my story.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 27/04/09 08:03 pm
Well it's about time they did something naughty - even though I'm still on pins and needles waiting for a love scene. I know, I'm a perv.
This story is so good. I don't know what happened to my last couple of reviews (they were anon), they seem to have disappeared so I'll combine them in this one.
I want to smack the poop out of Amy, dude. Evil whench, and dragging her friend into the mess is even worse! I think my Spidey sense is tingling, and I think there will be some big drama coming up: Jonathan finally having the big showdown with Pops over Celia and their child, possibly Sarah being involved, especially if Amy is digging up the past...and once Joseph's wandering-eye-having-ass gets back maybe finally Celia can dump him LOL that was evil but whatevs.
Really, really looking forward to your next update!!!
Author's Response:
Hey kendrawriter,
Yes you are a perv... In the next update I'll give a taste...remember just a taste... Your spidey senses may be correct...LOL! Amy always evil and she only considers Clara her friend when it suits her position. Think about the situation with Joseph...alone at sea for so many weeks doing, all that work. He would need to expend some of those energizes somewhere...someone...
Thanks for the review I know I would have enjoyed reading the others if they showed....HEY ADMINISTRATORS!
Date: 27/04/09 07:31 pm
Oh boy, things are heating up now. We have Lydia being awful to Celia, Amy starting to sense something is between Jonathan and Celia, and Jonathan taking more and more steps of making Celia his. I just love the last part of this chapter. So Hot!! Keep it coming Chocolate.
Author's Response:
Hey Megumi,
Yeah Celia is finding the very hard to fight against her emotions although she is willing to try...LOL! In some ways she has Jonathan right where she wants him...she just hasn't thought about it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 27/04/09 05:56 pm
Oooh, so many things are move along in this chapter. Poor Celia, she is fooling herself if she thinks that things are just going to go back to normal if she betweens that things are okay. Now I shouldn't be surprise to see that Joseph doesn't see his marriage as a real marriage also and he has his sight to Miriam. Maybe when he gets back, he and Celia can talk and get everything in the open. The truth will set you free. Oh goodness, I see Amy is sensing something between Jonathan and Celia. I just know the grease is going to hit the fan when she founds out everything. Jonathan and Celia better be prepared of a mimi war with all their foes too. Great Update!!
Author's Response:
Hey Megumi,
Isn't it good to thing about brighter days and the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow...LOL! As I told one reviewer...being at sea has allowed Joseph to think about many things maybe if Celia was more dedicated or loved him he wouldnt be considering this career at sea. Do you believe that the talking between them will be that easy? One thing for sure is that Jonathan is going to be there for her no matter what this time around. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Megumi Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/04/09 06:30 pm
On no, I knew Amy would sooner of later start to piece together the bond between Jonathan and Celia! Hope she does not try to harm Celia in any way. It'll be interesting to see what Amy does next; she does seem to have a pretty vindictive side!
Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
Hey Amie,
The changes in Jonathan has brought her to this observation...she is about to lose her home and status of being a physician's wife. Indeed she is very vindictive. Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/09 05:49 pm