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Title: Chapter 7

thanks for the chapter, i love jonathan and celia, they are in love, amy making her walk backfired, it gave celia and jonathan some alone time, i hate amy, i am so glad he is sending her off and he found out she drugged him, i can`t wait for him to find out about his son, he and celia are growing closer, i love it,

Author's Response:

Hey mslelee,

Amy got taught a valuable lesson but that doesn't mean it will change her anytime soon...LOL!!! Circumstances in those days usually kept love on the backburner but we'll see won't we...;) Thanks for giving the awesome review!

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/03/09 06:24 am

Title: Chapter 7

Okay, why is every word I am reading from Jonathan and Celia is making me say "Damn"?  I'm sorry but they'd had to chop my head off, cut a leg or hang me because I would have been with this man.  Plus, Jonathan is not dumb, he knew something was wrong with that unexpected fake night of bliss with Amyho.  Ahh, and Celia and Jonathan are just openly flirting with each other, well not openly but they are flirting.  You know, Chocolate, you're not helping me out here by having Johnny Depp be Jonathan....((sighs)) LOL. Johnny Depp has always been fine and sexy. I love this story, I REALLY do. 

Author's Response:

Hey Vie,

Remember Vie this was the 19th century when you had to deal with victorian etiquette and sensibilities. Plus Celia does have the added burden of being married and the biggest two reasons black and below his station. Jonathan does not want to take her down that road again because of what happened the last time. Celia is fearful and she has a right to be...she has to think about Jonathan being married and Joshua as well...

Yeah Johnny Depp is ahhhhhh....ahem but I must stick to the plot line...LOL! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/03/09 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad he put that bitch in her place but knowing her she going to have more tricks in her bag. I love the talked the way he hold her and was drawing the love of his life. I hope she tells him about their son before he finds out another way. thanks for posting and thanks for  the updated.

Author's Response:

Hey wwe,

Yeah you know Amy very well she is not going to leave necessarily...LOL!!! Stay tuned to the next update..;) Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/03/09 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 7

Yes she still loves and it is obvious he cares for her. I wonder is he sending that cow off so he can try and get back in Celia's good graces. I wonder when I know she will) tell him about his son. I really don't think he will be angry but I do think he needs to know about his son.This story gets better and better each chapter. I got my fingers crossed for a happy ending for our kids but it will not be easy and w/o some heartache!!

I really love this story...the relationship between Celia and the Dr. pulls you and captures your heart!! Great job sweetie!!



Author's Response:

Hey nene,

The feelings have always remained because circumstances beyond their control tore them apart. Its hard not to think about that love that was lost. So they went on with life married people whom society said that they should marry but Joshua is the child that binds them together forever regardless of what anyone wants to believe. You are correct in saying that someone will get hurt.

I'm so glad that you love this story and thanks for your awesome review!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/03/09 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 7

I know this is supposed to be a romance btwn Celia and Jonathan but I swear I don't like the thought of her stepping out on her husband. Amy I could care less about, but Celia's husband doesn't deserve that, especially after all he's done for her.

Author's Response:

Ah g,

I understand your feeling but you must look at this story through the eyes of the 19th century. You usually never ended up with the person you loved the most because of circumstances and especially your station in life. Even if you did have the money was it because of hard work or because of a legacy and we know victorians didn't consider this a great mixture either. Celia can never do away with that feeling she has always had for Jonathan. If you think about it Joshua becomes another complication in their marriage especially when he returns from the sea.

Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/03/09 05:48 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I can not wait to for Jonathan's dad to make a appearance. I want to see if Jonathan will make a stand this time.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet Pea,

Yeah Jonathan's father will definitely make an appearance. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/03/09 08:58 am

Title: Chapter 6

Now I know why I haven't like Amy since she was first introduced in this story. That is a sad way to try to keep a man by drugging him and making him believe he made love to her willingly. Even if she and Jonathan did the deed or not. Oh Celia and Jonathan have my heart with their meetings. You can just see how much the want to be together, but due to times they just can't give into their feelings just yet. Plus that fact that they are both married put a hold on some things too. *lol* I can't wait to see what happens next Choclate. :D



Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

Amy wants to have control and this is her way of still having it. In the past he has turned a blind eye to her defiant behavior but because of Celia he is starting to change his approach towards her. Amy hasn't figured it out as yet ;) Yes they are considering the period and the fact that they are married BUT if you are that close all the time what eventually happens...:) It can never be denied even in the face of opposition. Thanks for the great review! 

Reviewer: Megumi Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/03/09 07:01 am

Title: Chapter 6

I liked this chapter.  I see that Amy has some devious seeds in her.  Just as sure as I am black, that heffa spiked Jonathan's wine.  I hope he is smart enough to know what she is up to.  PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't let that heffa be preggers!@#$!! I wonder when will Jonathan see his son, Joshua?  I can't wait for that to happen; it may change the dynamics of things.  But, in those times....I just don't know.

Author's Response:

Hi Vie,

Yeah Amy is devious personified...LOL! Like I told another reader Amy is not remotely interested in getting pregnant. Women on a whole had few ways to get some control back then. As you mentioned one is getting pregnant but another is getting control my any means necessary. Every interracial relationship was difficult back there were ways to...people always say when there is a will...;)

Thanks so much for the awesome review!

Reviewer: Vie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/03/09 04:24 am

Title: Chapter 6

wow i'm glad that she was there for him when he need her the most. that wife is a huge BITCH sending her a long way to give him lunch. I had a feeling that she was going to drug him and love how she going to stand up to his jackass of a father. love the story girl thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Hey wwe,

You end up making stupid decisions when you cannot be with the person you love and that goes for Jonathan. If Jonathan is by her side then Celia feels that she can stand up to Mr. Campbell. She needs him to be a safety net for her this time around. I'm happy you love the story and thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/03/09 06:05 am

Title: Chapter 6

i detest amy, and i hope he realizes what she did, that he was drugged and did not sleep with her, her sending celia where he was turned out good for celia, she got to spend time with him, i want him to find out about his son, they still love each other so much

Author's Response:

Hiyah mslelee,

It did turn about to be a great idea after all...;) Yes they do still love each other but some situations need to be worked out so stay tuned...

Thanks for the great review and supporting this story!

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/03/09 05:50 am

Title: Chapter 6

This is such a sweet sad story! I feel for the doctor and Celia. He has a witch for a wife BTW I DO NOT think he hd sex with her and I think she drugged him. I sure hope he finds out and gets rid of her behind once and for all. I want him to know about his son, I think Joshua deserves to have a better life that his father may be able to help him have financially.

I still am not sure about how I feel about the two of them together but I do realize that he really does love her and vice versa..I just hope this ends good for both of them!! 

Love this story sweetie..cannot wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Hey neneburge...

Amy is a witch that wants what she wants but we all know why he ended up with someone like her...I know its hard to imagine them being together because of the time period but when there is a will there is a way and believe in in "Crufy" land we always know how to make a way...LOL!!!

Thanks for all the support and of course the fabulous review!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/03/09 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 6

I hope he figures out soon what Amy is up to, wow is she evil.

Author's Response:

Yeah g,

Let me just say that her mother taught her well...LOL!!! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/03/09 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Sorry it tooke me so love to review. Amy gets on my nerves. I knew she was going to try something,  You could just tell about her. What is it going to take for Jonathan and Celia to break from their outer selves and give into their love for each other. YEt, I'm loving this slow build-up Chocolate. It just wonderful. Great updated Chocolate.

Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

No problemo Megumi...Got to love Amy and her plans...LOL!!! A birdie told me that slow pace is good..;) Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/03/09 09:33 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Nice update.. Still loveing the pace and flow of the story, just one question.. WTF Amy... Nice Job!

Author's Response:

Hey Z...

Pace what a riot...LOL!!! As for Amy...HAhahahaha!!! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/03/09 12:17 am

Title: Chapter 5

another great chapter and amy is very wicked hopefully he does not fall for her bs

Author's Response:

Hey ellen,

He is a man after all and once you can play it..hey...lol!!! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/09 11:12 pm

Title: Chapter 5

thanks for the update, i detest amy, i can`t wait for jonathan and celia to get more time together, i want them to get closer, and him to find out about his son

Author's Response:

Hey mslelee,

Thanks for the great review. Amy is the spicey mix to all of this...LOL!!! Updates will tell much...;)

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/09 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow that amy is a very tricky woman but she better watch out because husband is going to find out the truth. I hope celic leaves when the father come or it going to be world war 2 in the house. Love that he a good doctor and listen to people can't find doctors like that any more. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Thanks wwe,

You are so right...doctors like him don't exist anymore. Amy has a lot of tricks in her bag to get what she wants at the time..lol! I don't think Celia wants to runaway from his father at least not this time. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/09 06:08 am

Title: Chapter 5

Ms. Amy is a trecherous cow. Why does she want him in bed so much? Is she annoyed that he's ignoring her or is she pregnant and needs to pass the kid off as his.

Author's Response:

Hey g,

Yeah she is treacherous. She is pretty much annoyed that she is being ignored. Her body used to have children...not so...LOL!!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/03/09 06:46 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I really dislkike his wife more than anything..I just hope he finds out before she takes him for everything he has and ruins his relationship with his servants.

I am not sure how I feel about Celia actually still being in love with Dr, Campbell..I know that there was not much he could have done to protect her from his father but He should have done more especially when she was having his baby..I don't know...

Plus her husband is away at sea and very much in love with her and that baby...there can be no real future for celia and the dr in this time period so ..I just don't know what to feel about them..

This story however is very thought provoking and emotional...I have a hard time with period pieces durring slavery times but this is so well done and the servants are very real people not stereotypes..I am really enjoying this story sweetie...good job!



Author's Response:

Hey neneburg,

"The Bay" is loosely based on my own country's own history with emancipation and the creation of our own "Creole" population. Marriages they didn't allow but you could pretty much live with one another (not being seen in public) The children and grandchildren of these unions went on to government positions once the Legislature was established.

Jonathan is Celia's first love and she didn't tell him about the baby. He wishes the child that she has was his but he actually doesn't know. After she was thrown out of the Campbell's estate Jonathan went away to England to study. First loves are the hardest things to leave in the past especially if you were torn away from that person.

Thanks for the great review nene! 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/09 06:10 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I sat on my iPhone last night and read every single chapter with glee. It is very rich in detail, which I LOVE above all else. Your ability to totally bring an environment as unfamiliar to me as "The Bay" realistically and dynamically is awesome.

While at times the dialogue confuses me (I guess that you were writing the Bay accent) you got to the meat of the story quickly and the emotional tension and tenderness between Celia and Joshua is palpable. Great work, can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

My heart almost skipped a beat when I saw your review!

Kendrawriter how are you doing?

Thanks for the observation because I'm trying my best to allow the readers to see part of the environment. The dialogue is an English clean up of the real Creole version. The real language is much more complicated...sorry for the confusion...:)

Thank you for the compliment and I can't wait to read your stories again! especially the Tangie...hint...hint...LOL!!!

Reviewer: kendrawriter Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 09:15 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Great Update.. Really like what you are doing with Celia and Jonathan.

Author's Response:

Z...glad you are enjoying the story but you better hold be back cause I'm about to burst...LOL!!!

Pace chocolate...pace...hahaha!!!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter 4

You go Dr.cambell love how he put his wife in her place and stood up to the woman he loves. I hope her husband be alright and what does the caption realy wanteds with him? mmm loving the story girl and thanks for the updated.



Author's Response:

Hey wwefan,

I would want Johnny Depp to stand up for me anytime...the women he loves...LOL!!! Her husband will be alright on the sea but I don't know about the land...hmmmm.

Glad you are loving the story and thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 07:19 am

Title: Chapter 4

I love how Celia politely told Amy she wasn't doing anything for her. It was a breaking you down in a nice way type of thing.

I can't wait for these two to admit their feelings, but I hope the news of  Joshua doesn't hurt them.



Author's Response:

Sweet Pea...I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story.

A polite way of saying...go to hell...your husband is on my side and there is nothing you can do about it...:)

The feelings they have for each other has always been there. It's just that their lives...so different. If you were married wouldn't you be afraid to complicate your life any further? Thats the question Celia asks herself. As for Joshua again hmmm...

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 06:26 am

Title: The Cast

Great Update. I really enjoyed this chapter..But my heart is breaking for Jonathan. I guess we have to see how this one plays out.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 06:19 am

Title: Chapter 4

thanks for the chapter, i can`t stand amy, i am so glad jonathan doesn`t want celia working for her, he really will protect celia from everyone, including his father i think, loved the embrace, the sparks are so there, can`t wait for more of this tale, i can`t wait for him to find out about joshua

Author's Response:

Mslelee thanks for the great review!

Psstt... I can't stand her either...

Jonathan will try his best to protect her and eventually he will have to stand up to the terrible Mr. Campbell. I loved writing the embrace. As for Joshua that is a whole other side...hmmmm...

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 05:51 am

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