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Title: That Other Woman

That was so good. Just...perfect!

"Dean Winchester made her feel things. Beautiful. Wanted." One of the best lines, so good. Perfect at capturing this. That person that makes you fele the way you've always wanted to feel, never thought you could feel...
Love your fic!

Reviewer: ss Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/14 03:29 am

Title: That Other Woman

That was an awesome one shot! I’ve always wanted to find out more between Cassie and Dean. Granted, I am not going to lie, I really didn’t like Cassie when I saw this episode. I mean, it’s been a few years now, and I can’t really remember the specifics, but I do remember watching this episode with my sister and both of us were rolling our eyes. A lot. I just thought she irked me a bit. That’s the word! She irked me.

So I found this story a great read, cause it was an inside look on who she was and why she did the things she did.  Her insecurities obviously makes her put on this tough woman front. I thought she should have given Dean a chance, I mean, yeah he told her this stuff but when he kept calling her on and on, she just blew him off. Interesting prequel to the episode, I think. Great job, TBG!

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 10:09 am

Title: That Other Woman

TBG..that was nice. I like the Cassie/Dean storyline..but agree they could have written her better. I was hoping for her to show up again.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Pash! I'm glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: Pashmina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/03/09 01:47 am

Title: That Other Woman

Dammit! I need some more Dean fics, like asap!

I hand it to you, you have a great way of writing Dean which you already proven with "Through The Looking Glass". 

I must say that I didn't really care for Cassie in the "Route 666" episode, but I think that it was due to crappy character writing. I think the Cassie character has potential, so please tell me you are at least thinking about writing another Dean and Cassie story *wink, wink*.It would be worth exploring their story after they meet again, maybe Dean quit or is on the run from his brother or whatever scenario you come up with ;-)



Author's Response:

Hey Shanesgirl!

I do have a few more stories for Dean, as well as Sam and John too, so I'm not done with the Winchesters quite yet. I agree that the writers didn't develop Cassie much at all, which is good for me, because I get to develop her for scratch now. LOL. Thank you for reading and I will post another fic as soon as possible. I hope you enjoy that one too!

Reviewer: shanesgirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 10:39 pm

Title: That Other Woman

 Okay, I must first say, TBG, you made me watch Youtube for that episode and I watched it before I read this story. I hate to say this but I have been trying to just take the time to really sit down and watch Supernatural but I would make excuses.  I knew it was good because I have always been a fan of Jensen Ackles back when he was Eric Brady on DAYS.  So, that in itself had me interested.  Truthfully, I would watch the episodes that interested me or when I thought people of color was on the show (pathetic, I know)...so I missed out a lot.  It really is a good show.  Plus, when did Jensen's voice get all deep and Sexy like..have mercy!!!!!  Now, I just read your story and I really liked it

 

!!!! It seems that Dean really cared about her he had to because if he didn't he wouldn't have told her about what he really does for a living.  It was sad that she thought he was lying to her and it seemed that from the beginning of your story and throughout the episode, Cassie didn't think that Dean could like someone like her and he wanted to just get out of their relationship...well, just comes to show that beauty is in the eye of the beholder.  Plus, Cassie was beautiful, I'm happy her mom tried to embed that into her head. Girl, I owe you a Thank You, because I just recently started watching (like I should) and I am trying to be an avid (like I should) watcher of the show.  So big-ups to you. I only have this to say...Can I PLEASE have some more stories of DEAN WINCHESTER, Hell of Jensen Ackles, LOL!!!!!

 GREAT JOB!!!!

PS, why didn't you let me know about the steaming hot love scene so that I could have at least braced myself.....(((sighs)))) LMAO!!!



Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad I could guide you back to Supernatural, it really is a great show. And I'm so happy you enjoyed this story, I've been meaning to write a Cassie fic for a while now and just got chance to recently. I do have a few more fics with them in my head, so Dean will definately pop up again. soon. Thanks so much for reading Vie, I'm really happy you liked it and thanks for leavng such nice comments. :)

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/02/09 05:12 am

Title: That Other Woman

Lovely! I like the introspective aspect of the opening.  It's nice to know how someone views themself.  We don't often get that in stories.  I love that he did confide in her about who he was and what he does.  He cared about her enough to try to explain his insane, creepy way of life and yet she thought he was lying to her; thought it was he way of not comitting but in actuality he was releasing a bit of himself to her. Awesome job! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much idjunkie! This one was really fun to write, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/02/09 05:15 am

Title: That Other Woman

Very nice story..

Lots of cute/aww moments in the story

every pseudo James Dean wanabee inch of him - too funny

They’d seen each other for five nights straight and he never touched her, not in that way at least. And she never asked him to, though she wanted it more everyday. But it wasn’t until he showed up at her room one night, smelling of rotten eggs and smoke that she finally gave in

It took her three days to realize he was calling at the same time they’d kissed for the first time. It weakened her resolve.

Because she’d never be the woman who says no to Dean Winchester.  - Damn!

Pretty damn awesome TBG - Great answer to the Challenge!



Author's Response: Thanks so much zeta, I'm so glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/02/09 05:36 am

Title: That Other Woman

I'm glad you wrote this. I hope it was cathartic for you. LOL

I don't watch SN but I have watched clips of this epi on YouTube. Thanks for sharing your version--it was better.



Author's Response: LOLOL, It was in a lot of ways, it made me feel a little better to write this. Thanks so much for reading lovemboth, very happy you enjoyed the ficlet (yeah, it was short. I know..LOLOLOL).

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/02/09 04:09 pm

Title: That Other Woman

Excellent! I wanted her to believe him. To take him back. I don't know the story so I don't know if it was a lie or not but the how romantic to call her every evening at the time of their first kiss..heck I wanted to take him back! 

Wonderfully writen sweetie..sad but pignant!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! What he told her was actually the truth, Dean hunts supernatural creatures with his brother Sam on the show. But because of the kind of guy he was, Cassie assumed he was lying to her and wanted to have a reason to leave. She eventually believed him on the show though, so this was a pre-series fic in a lot of ways. Thanks again for checking this out, so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: neneburge Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/02/09 03:35 am

Title: That Other Woman

So sad and excellent. There's a dearth of Cassie fics so I must thank you for this. Cassie's a great character to play with since she's the lone woman Dean got close to.

I love the portryal of Dean and Cassie's relationship. Dean comes to her after a hunt, when he wants to be rejuvenated and feel like a human being. Cassie responds to him becase she likes being desired, and that's not a bad thing.

Now I'm going to be yearning for Dean/Cassie with a happy ending.



Author's Response:

Thanks lucky! There is such a lack of Cassie fic which is just too bad, she has so much story potential. I wasn't on the bandwagon with her, but that alone makes me want to explore her a bit more, just because no one else really has.

Happy ending Dean and Cassie? *ponders* I'll try, but i love tourturing the SPN boys so much..I like it when they're mopey and breaking stuff. *g*

Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/02/09 02:22 am

Title: That Other Woman

Great response to the challenge Token.  You write Dean so well and that pick up line was classic.  Loved how you gave charactization to Cassie in this.  I agree that it would have been nice if they'd have put their back into it, but honestly they don't do that very often with any female on that show.

Really liked how aware she was of who she was dealing with.  It's sad, but that awareness is what pretty much sealed the deal on their non-relationship.  She understood him so well that it never entered her mind that the confession was anything other than some out for him. Which is so sad.  The calling at midnight was romantic as sad. But in the end, I think she made the right choice. 

It is Dean after all.

Great story Token. Really enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Black! I think writing Dean has become second nature at this point, he was with me so long in through a glass...I loved giving life to Cassie, it was fun. And there was so much there left unexplored. You're right though, being a female on that show makes you doomed from the start. :(

Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/09 07:12 pm

Title: That Other Woman

I liked this.  I agree that Cassie was written half-ass, as if they didn't really know yet if they wanted to go there with Dean's character, you know all emo.  And the reaction to her was off the chain.  I like how you flushed out her character more.  It was very believable.

Author's Response: Thanks! The reaction was extreme with Cassie, I think she got the worst of it because she came first. That Jo character was pretty hated too. I'm really glad you enjoyed this one, thanks so much for reading. :)

Reviewer: nycjoc Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/02/09 04:33 pm

Title: That Other Woman

Read it.  Loved it.  And hopes that one day I grow up and write like you :)

It was amazing how much hate the Cassie character generated.  I mean is it so wrong for a man like Dean to be attracted to a woman who has melanin?

Dean and Cassie were a great couple for me. Thank you for your take on them.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Sebine, glad you liked it. I think some of the Cassie hate stemmed from the fans not liking the boys with women at all, plus the writers never seem that interested either. But of course, her skin color was a factor too, I think that character was just doomed from the start. But yeah, I've yet to see a woman accepted for either boys, I think most fans just want them to ride off into the sunset alone. *shrugs*

Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/02/09 04:22 pm

Title: That Other Woman

Great story, thanks

Author's Response: Thanks so much Divison!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/09 01:10 pm

Title: That Other Woman

I liked it

Author's Response:

Thanks! :D

Reviewer: mt_gurl Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/02/09 06:23 am

Title: That Other Woman

that’s just what she became. One in a long list of women left behind, destined to watch him drive away in cloud of dust and headlights. He’d taken so much. He had so much of her already, she just couldn’t give him that. So she left him. Refused to look back as she walked away, hoping there was something left herself she could salvage.

Loved this :) Love the banner! forgot to mention it in my 'first' review LOL She wouldn't be one of his zillions of women; strong woman, she is STRONG in the ways of the woman-Force LOL This was absolutely lovely, the flow beautiful and just an all around perfect one-shot. But guess what? I'm salivating for more. I always thought (particularly with how the episode played) that Dean was REALLY into Cassie, like damn near his first love almost. I mean, that was one of the times we first saw Dean 'vunerable' LOL There's just something about Jensen, the cute little boy aspect to his image that makes you crave to see him hurt and sad just so you can coddle him and make it all better.  Loved the James Dean reference and how he mentioned Sam was more like their mom and he more like his dad and how Sam was the smart one. Dean knows what he's talking about there LOL But morever, you have me craving for Supernatural again. When does the current season come to dvd? I shall have to look and put it in my queue. This was great, Token. I love these one-shots you do. Please, feel free to do more. :) You have one for Sam and now one for Dean...can we get a John-one-shot??? PWEEZE?

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! This was interesting to write because I wasn't really that fond of the way the character was written (or not written in this case). And she was his first love, which made it stand out even more to me. I'm glad you liked it and happy I could do the character justice. I am thinking about a John story, working that over in my mind a little. And Bobby too *gasp* LOLOL. I love that show. And yes, you must watch the new season and see the hotness that is Misha Collins. *sighs* He's getting a  fic too. :)

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/09 05:48 am

Title: That Other Woman

Beautiful! What crazed woman would say no to Dean?! Not me!

Author's Response:

*shrugs* Got me. LOLOLOL

Thanks so much for reading Sweet Pea!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/09 05:41 am

Title: That Other Woman

*screams* YES! I love it already! Had no idea you were doing this! Okay, will reply with real comments in a moment. And don't care that this is rave, gonna give you stars in this one anyway!

Author's Response: LOL, it was a last minute thing for the challenge. but I missed writing SPN, wanted to give Cassie a go. Thanks for reading MZ!

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/09 05:37 am

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