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Title: Chapter 1: Because Everyone Wears Louis V

This is promising, I like it so far

Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/06/09 07:36 am

Title: Chapter 2: Life's Assessment

I'm really liking this story so far.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/06/09 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 5: Part II

Dude, why do their names keep changing??

Good story though.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/06/09 01:48 pm

Title: Chapter 5: Part II

I am sooooooo happy you updated this.  Feels good reliving Lance and Bella's life.  I feel sorry for Lance and Lea; they have lost soo much time with each other; I hope they can get that back.  EXCELLENT UPDATE......PLEASE don't keep us in suspense for that length of time again...lol  :P

Reviewer: Vie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/06/09 07:01 am

Title: Chapter 5: Part II

YEAH Bella girl you get his behind told.  it takes two to tango and you were only 16!

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 10:11 pm

Title: Chapter 5: Part II

Thanks for the update!  I have been hooked on this story from the first chapter and am really looking forward to the next update (hint, hint).

Poor Lea; I really feel for her, and even Lance because he really didn't know.  I know he may have said a lot of things he now regrets in the heat of passion years ago, but he still deserved to know he had a child so he would have a choice when it came to being a part of her life.

It'll be interesting to see how they piece things together and get through this rough time!

Please update again soon!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 09:28 pm

Title: Chapter 5: Part II

Gurrrrrrrrrrllll, you sure took your time!
I really like where you´re going with this. It will be interesting to see how you work everything out for these characters.

Reviewer: Jenna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 05:20 am

Title: Chapter 5: Part II

And I have the next chapter ready, and ready to be read. Trust me, you'll like the next one - Review and you'll get it faster, lol

I'm sure I'l like the next chapter, but where is it?  This is too good... you've got my head swivieling back and forth like at a tennis match.

I really like this story

 

Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 01:04 am

Title: Chapter 5: Part II

So glad this story is back.Thanks for the update and will be checking for the next chapter.  I think this story has so much potential!

Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 11:39 pm

Title: Chapter 5: Part II

Good premise.  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 5: Part II

CLIFFHANGERS KILL PEOPLE!!! That's why they are called cliff hangers. This was a beautiful chapter, thanks =] NOW BRING ON THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! I love this story!! Can't wait for more updates =]

Reviewer: aquaBLUEpetals Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 09:59 pm

Title: Chapter 5: Part II

Welcome Back . I still Love this story. I almost had to re-read it . Please don't wait so long to update. Poor Lea... crazy parents.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 4: Ghost Of You

I just found this story and I like it. Please keep it coming.

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/06/09 10:14 pm

Title: Chapter 5: Part I; The Truth ABout Forever...?

Hi update...thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/04/09 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 5: Part I; The Truth ABout Forever...?

I love this story will you be updating soon?.

Thanks

Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/04/09 07:59 am

Title: Chapter 5: Part I; The Truth ABout Forever...?

Sputter what....you left it there...well where is the rest of the story?   Update, update....waiting...thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/04/09 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 5: Part I; The Truth ABout Forever...?

You've updated my favortie story, great update, now it's time to get down to the nitty gritty.

Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 08:41 am

Title: Chapter 5: Part I; The Truth ABout Forever...?

Great Update

Reviewer: Ashauna77 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 04:13 am

Title: Chapter 5: Part I; The Truth ABout Forever...?

Oh my goodness!  Please give us MORE!  It was so wrong to just end the chapter at that point.:)

Reviewer: LaTasha Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/09 03:32 am

Title: Chapter 5: Part I; The Truth ABout Forever...?

I really love this story. It's intense and good. It kept me on the edge of my seat. I want to see what happens, but it seems to me that Lea is going to somehow confront him and ask him all the questions and then maybe devise a plan to get her parents back together or at least have her father back in her life for good. Hope to see the next update =)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/09 03:30 am

Title: Chapter 4: Ghost Of You

I love this story!! Please keep updating. I am looking forward to what happens

Reviewer: blackhibiscus Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/03/09 04:36 am

Title: Chapter 4: Ghost Of You

I just finished reading all of this and have to say that I really like it.  I want to see how Lance is going to deal with Lea and how Lea is going to handle finding out why her mother lied to her all those years. Isla is not going to want to share but them coming together and is going to to be a drama especially now that Lance may  just have to grow up a bit.  Good story, hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/03/09 08:33 am

Title: Chapter 4: Ghost Of You

update soon

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/09 07:44 pm

Title: Chapter 4: Ghost Of You

Great update...so Lance decided to let her know that he knows that their daughter is at his school...ok, so what happens next.  What was that that Isla was sleeping with girls too...so because of her break up with Lance she turned to woman? Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/09 12:28 pm

Title: Chapter 4: Ghost Of You

Wow, Great Update.

Reviewer: Ashauna77 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/09 05:30 am

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