Moving too fast, are you kidding me? I am enjoying this. Lance is aware and now Lea. Boy, this is great!!!! I can't wait for all to be known. There is going to be all kinds of hell thrown in this one, I can tell. Lance is already peeved and not to mention Lea. She seems like she got her head on her shoulder but this Carusso boy may change that, I hope not. I just want her to talk with her mother though before she starts resenting her. Good Job!! MORE!!!!
Reviewer: Vie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/03/09 05:00 am
I was not expecting their break-up to go that way. I respect that he realized that he wasn't ready for a real relationship, but he could have told her before he cheated on her.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 04/03/09 03:46 am
No you are not moving too fast. Actually I am glad that the secret is out in the open now and is not being dragged on for a longer time. I'm enjoying this story though and can't wait to see what drama ensues. One thing though. Is Isla bisexual?
Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/03/09 01:05 am
I love this story!!! This is some good stuff. Please update some more!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 11:34 pm
Is this idiot rally gonna have an tude? "Mr it'snot you it's me. I can't love you like you deserve." Oh hells to the naw.
Reviewer: monique32 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 05:20 pm
Too fast? nooooo! its great as it is!
Unless you mean "too fast" as in "posting chapters too fast" then the answer would be no! lol
I love this story and where it's going! The characters are smart and relatable!
Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 03/03/09 02:49 pm
I like the way Lance came with that
Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 02:44 pm
OMG I can't wait for more
Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 02:27 pm
Lance is putting the pictures together I love Lea already and Lance with his Playboy ways
Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 02:19 pm
Loving this chapter
Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 02:13 pm
Dang, girl....Now that's how you make a phone call.
Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 01:03 pm
Moving along too fast?. ARE YOU KIDDING?. Man, one thing I personally dislike is procrastination in a story's premise. I mean get on with it. It shows your imaginative and cunning perspective, otherwise you lose me with the overly drawn out drama. lady, you get 5 stars from me alone for "moving along too fast".
Gosh, I so love how you've written Lea. Her mum has done a wonderful job of raising a young lady who knows how to survive to her betterment. That's what I prefer to read. Anal, weak, victimised heroines or supportive cast drive me to ignore the story......reality's a (lack of) father already!!!.
Thanks a bunch and UPDATE sooner, innit!
Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 10:44 am
Great update, I'm so falling in love with this story and look forward to each update. No I don't think the story is moving to fast, although I do wonder why should Lance be angry that he didn't know about Lea, as for Lea she's one smart cookie, I had hope for more moments where she and Lance could have bonded before the revel. Is Lance mother still living? maybe you should have him go talk to her before confronting Isla with the truth, I would love to see Lea bonding with his mother too.
Sorry for butting in your story.
Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 08:29 am
I'm struggling to understand why he thinks he needs to be angry considering he was the one to break it off with no good explanation to her. Lots of balls that one has.
Reviewer: flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 08:05 am
oK so I can see why she wouldn't tell him but on the otherhand lies get you NOWHERE for long. So now what... Lea and Lance are mad at you for lying even though I think she'll be more affected by what Lea feels.
I hope Lance doesn't do anything stupid, he isn't without fault either. Lea...I don't know. I think she'll be upset that Lance cheated and lied to Isla but keeping her away from her dad....?
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/03/09 07:10 am
Great update, so why didn't he know that he had a child that is now 16 years old? Does she know who her father is? Thanks and update soon. Good luck with school.
Reviewer: divisionred Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/02/09 12:24 pm
Like the back and forth between the different characters points of view. Funny how Lance is seeing himself in Lea..wondering what happened that Isla didnt tell Lance about her.
You are keeping me interested.
Reviewer: pashmina Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/02/09 03:47 am
I see fireworks between lance and lea...can't wait till lance and isabelle meet again.
Great chapter.
Reviewer: pashmina Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/02/09 03:35 am
i like the title of the first chapter...loving isabelle and lea already.
The last two sentences have me comg back for more.
Reviewer: pashmina Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/02/09 03:29 am
Lance, stop being a baby and look up her records!!!!!
Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/02/09 02:43 pm
She is a very bright girl, and I wouldn't be surprised at all if she really has figured out that he's her dad.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 21/02/09 05:00 am
Long Chapter? not long enough in my book, this story is great I wonder who's going to accept whom first. Will the mother have to be the go between of father and daughter or vica sa versa
Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/02/09 02:24 am
So it looks like they both know about each other or at least suspicious. And Isla knows too. I hope they meet soon and we'll find out what happened all those years ago. Good job.
Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 11:49 pm
I like where this is going, and the pace it going at.
Long, drawn out parental revelations can be boring, especially when the truth is more obvious than not.
I guess I can see why Isla didn't tell him. He's really kind of emotionally immature himself still.
Good job.
Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 11:41 pm
Loves it!!!!
Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 10:43 pm