Lea has a mouth on her. I'm wondering about her relationship with Isla. Does Lea resent her for taking her away from her neighborhood as well as other issues or is she just being the the normal teenager who likes to push buttons just because they can?
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 10:07 pm
OH MY GOODNESS!. Yeah!. Similarities are totally awesome. That's where one's tried. You're spinning this awesomely. More soon please. WOW!
Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 09:55 pm
Oh yeah. I've just finished chpt 2 and lemme tell ya, I like your speed!. It's so tedious and in my opinion (ie, for someone who couldn't even pen a simple poem) lacking originality when a story's premise is prolonged by the drawn out wait to discover, whatever. OOOOOOhhhhh, hope you don't disappoint.
Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 09:42 pm
I wish it had been longer! lol
Keep them coming, I really like where you're going with this story.
[Report This]Date: 20/02/09 09:07 pm
Well, here is some more feel good. I enjoyed chapter 2 and I'm looking forward to the story unfolding. I seem to be a sucker for the finding the child you never knew existed story, if that is where you are going! :)
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/02/09 06:50 pm
I like it. I have a feeling that everything is going to explode soon though. I can't wait to see it.
Reviewer: Jaynie Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 01:39 pm
I love it, but it's so short though. I'm eager for more.
Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 08:02 am
Well that's one way to find out you have a kid. If his fist slamming is any indication, he is going to track her down and try to do some danger.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 07:53 am
Next Chapter please :P This is turning out to be very interesting and to think....playa Lance is still got the feenin for Isla.
Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 12:43 am
Oooh!!! Love the new chapter.
Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]Date: 19/02/09 11:05 pm
~Bing~ Recognition has dawned on him! I'm glad that its not going to take a year to figure it out.
I like it.
Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/02/09 10:33 pm
Poor tired Lance just found out he has a kid. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/02/09 08:31 pm
I just know I'm really going to enjoy reading this! The beginning really has me hooked and I just can't wait for the next update!
I can't wait until Lance figres out Lea is his daughter and the backstory that gets us to this point is laid out...this is going to be good!
Update soon, please!!!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/02/09 07:54 pm
is it wrong of me that my reaction to his realization that he has a daughter was haha? I'm not feeling his ho-ish ways especially since Isla's life seems so full of stress. I really want to find out what went down all those years ago.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 19/02/09 07:36 pm
This is really good, ready forr more.
Reviewer: avis11611 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/02/09 05:11 pm
Oh NO chica!!! It is an absolutely must that you provide another update, pronto!!! I'm already hooked!!!! PLEASE
Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/02/09 04:44 pm
This story has so much potential!!! I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]Date: 19/02/09 04:05 pm
A new home, a new school, and a daddy you never knew, Lea is in for a time.
Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/02/09 12:58 pm
Interesting so far. I like Lea's attitude and how she interacts with her mom. Its kinda like the Gilmore Girls in a way.
So I guess the father never knew about her then.
Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/02/09 06:38 am
Hmm interesting. So Isabelle had Lea at 16 and she is soon about to meet her father. I can't wait to hear about the circumstances that led up to this moment. Please update soon.
Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/02/09 12:05 am
I absolutely love the start to this story!
Update soon please!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/02/09 09:05 pm
me like! I want to see how Lea's mouth goes off when she realizes Lance is her father.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 18/02/09 05:47 pm
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/02/09 05:18 pm
Oops, read the synopsis again and think I misunderstood. Thought Lance will be a student of Isabelle's. Sorry. Love the premise still. UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/02/09 04:48 pm
Ooooooooooooh, yeah. Lovely premise. If I must read about a single parent, then by gosh I want her to have gotten herself together at some point in order to provide those things she can for her child that only money can buy, eg, good housing/environment. It's a bummer when a single parent's down on her luck, minimum wage with two jobs AND on top of that hardly having enough time to raise, be there, for her kid(s). So thanks for this great start. Will this be an older woman/younger man story as well?. Boy can I relate. Love/prefer younger men. They're ways less bitter.
Can I also say that if you don't do a banner, I won't be too unhappy, unless the pics are of regular people, am quite tired of the celebrities. They all look alike after a while.....
Ok, let me shut up. Update soon.
Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/02/09 10:14 am