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Title: Chapter 12

The emotions from all the characters show through.  You totally stay true to the characters from Y&R.

Reviewer: ocw Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/08/09 01:23 am

Title: Chapter 12

Ok it is official. You are one of the most awesome writers that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I have read many of your other stories and enjoyed them all. But you have even made me enjoy a soap opera fanfic, something I never do. You are truly gifted. Loved this story thanks so much for

Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/07/09 04:47 am

Title: Chapter 8

This story is back, I'm just catching up, I love Dru, she should have slapped.

Reviewer: BlueMountain Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/04/09 08:21 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Beautifully written. Wonderful story.Thank you for the effort you put into this work.

Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/03/09 02:09 pm

Title: Chapter 12

I read Loving Dru first and I have to say that both stories were so... engrossing. I am sitting on the floor at almost 2 am smiling and saying "wow, that was so good", lol. Thank you for a great story duo!

Reviewer: Fantasque Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/12/08 08:48 am

Title: Chapter 12

Haaaaa yes, yes, yes. this is an ending with a bang, loved it to bits.

Author's Response: Hey dyhanna! Thanks for reading! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story as much as I enjoyed writing it. Many thanks for the review.

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/08 01:18 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow you have to do a sequal to this story. I just love jack and dru and glad they found their way back to each other. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Hey wwefan.  So glad you liked the story.  As for doing a sequel, right now this is it for the couple.  But you never know.  Thanks so much for reviewing. Much appreciated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 05:28 am

Title: Chapter 12

*Sniff, sniff*  I am sorry to see it end.  Dru and Jack are so hot together.  Love this love story that took 20 years for them to truly be together.

Author's Response:

Hey Robin! Yes it ha to end but I'm glad you liked the story.  And the twenty years thing is what made the fic I think.  Such a long time to wait for the person you're meant for.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 12

Alright, I admit it, I didn't hate Neil at the end.  When Dru needed someone, he did what no one else was willing to do.

However, Ashley was a straight bitch.

Glad everyone got their happy ending.  Well, except for Neil, LOL.   



Author's Response:

Hey shocol. Awww, so you softened towards Neil huh?  That was a goal of mind to show that there were no clear cut bad guys or good guys in this.  Just a bunch of people with good intentions that screwed up royally when it came to their lives somehow.

Except for Ashley. She's a parasite.  

Thanks for reading and reviewing! So glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 08:51 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Love this chapter.  Love the utter hotness that is Jack and Drucilla, and l absolutely love the way Jack and Dru love each other.

In the flashback Mamie made my ass hurt, I cannot believe she treated Dru so cruelly and calling her a liar.

Can't wait to see what happens at the hospital and I'm glad that Jack is going with her, it should be all kinds of good.  LOL! Baby!

~Jeanine~

Reviewer: pru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 08:29 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Awww, I loved it BM, it was so good.  It ended differently than I thought, but it was amazing just the same.  LOL! Baby!

~Jeanine~



Author's Response: Hey Pru! Thanks for reading.  Yeah, I wanted to give a different ending to this one than you might expect.  I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the reviews!

Reviewer: pru Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 08:26 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Well Done Black, I just love happy endings, and Jack and Dru so deserved thiers.

Glad that Neil was man enough to tell what he did, he had no right to play God and neither did Ashley.

Again this was a great story.



Author's Response: Hey Shina! Thanks for reading. I dont' think I could give Jack and Dru anything but a happy ending this time.  And yes, Neil did man up at the end so that was something.  Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 07:53 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Wow...Black....that was awesome.

Really..you are getting gooder and gooder.

My bad you are getting better and better...kudos chica.



Author's Response: Hey Sonny! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I"m so glad you liked it.  Gooder and gooder is good yes?  LOL.

Reviewer: Mercy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 06:17 pm

Title: Chapter 12

You trickster! You got me again. You had me thinking that Lily was hurt and would need a blood transfusion. Neil wouldn't be a match but lo and behold Jack would be! Aargh!

Gotta give it to Neil for finally manning up and coming clean. Take your beating and call it a day!

I loved it BlackMamba. Fantastic job!



Author's Response: LOL.  Lovemboth, ya know I can't make it easy on you.  And yes, I made Neil man up like I wish he would do some times on the show.  Thanks for reading and your many awesome reviews.  Much appreciated.

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 05:24 pm

Title: Chapter 12

OH MY GOSH THE ENDING WAS BITTERSWEET.  IT WAS SO EMOTIONAL AND LOVELY ALL ROLLED IN ON.. I LOVED THIS STORY FROM THE BEGINNING AND I MUST SAY BRAVO, BRAVO YOU PUT THIS SERIES TO BED BEAUTIFULLY.  FOREVER A FAN 4 LIFE!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hey hershey! Thanks for reading. I'm so glad you enjoyed the series.  Many thanks for all the great reviews you posted along the way.  Always looked foward to seeing them. 

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 04:55 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Yeah Black...you are so correct...I think a snail flew past you the other day...LOL!!!

I cant believe it Losing Jack has finally come to an end. What did I dig about this story...the awesome love scenes...the dialogue. You really stayed true to the characters. It was a really great read!!!



Author's Response: Hey Choc! thanks for reading.  And heck yeah, it took a while with this one. LOL.  Glad you liked all the bits and pieces.  Many thanks for the reviews.  Much appreciated. 

Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 04:17 pm

Title: Chapter 12

I am sad that this fic is over! I knew it had to end but still...

It was great nonetheless! I knew there was a reason why I NEVER liked Trashly! Dru should've kicked her ass.. Are you going to have anymore Jack/Dru fics?



Author's Response:

Hey Maverick.  Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed.  And I'm forever an Ashley hater so....

More Jack/Dru fics? Hmmmm....at the moment I'd say no but you never know when an idea will hit.  I'd keep an eye out...

Thanks for the awesome reviews you left along the way.  They really made my day, so much appreciated.

Reviewer: Maverick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 08:02 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow, that was so awesome Black and had the Y&R theme to the ending also. Man, I know what Neil did was wrong as hell, but you got to feel for the man. He just did and made some stupid choices because he was in love with a women who wasn't in love with him all the way. I love how Lily's being Jack came out too. Nice touch. Gawd, this whold thing didn't just effect Jack, Dru, Neil, and Lily it effected almost of GC didn't it. I'm glad Neil was man enough to do the right thing and Liv told that witch Ashley off too. It was nice to see Lily Jack, and Dru being family too. Great  as always Black and I actually hate seeing this Series end, but it was a wonderful goodbye to it too. Thanks for writing it.

Author's Response: Hey Megumi! Thanks so much for reading.  Neil did make some stupid choices but I think in the end he was pretty much in the same position of everyone else. Doing stupid things that hurt the people they loved.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  You know I look foward to each and every one.  It's really appreciated.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 07:53 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow. I really liked the ending. I'm kinda sad that Neil had to leave, but I understand that he had to do it so they could all heal. You really sold me on the love story between Dru and Jack. When I watched Y&R, for the most part I could never stand Jack-he is such a smug, swarmy character, but I liked him in this story. The flashbacks were really helpful b/c it provided further backstory between the two, well three or four (if you count Ashley and Neil) people in that relatonship. So happy that they got their happy ending.

Author's Response: Hey anouk. So glad you liked the final chapter.  And yes, Jack is can be obnoxious but I think that's part of his charm for me.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  Much appreciated!

Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 07:39 am

Title: Chapter 12

What an awesome story we rock I just want to say Amen for Neil -

"You didn't give a damn about her," Neil yelled. "She did everything for you man-everything and you threw her out like fucking garbage. I was the one that picked her up off that street. I was the one that took care of her when she could barely get out of the fucking bed because of you - about damn time

I am such a sucker - "Let's go help our daughter Dru."  :wise:I'm glad little Dru has the love of her two fathers ..YAY! <yehWhat a happy ending -

thanx  for this awesome story!  notworthyallhail


Author's Response: Hey zeta! Thanks for the review.  And yes, Neil spoke a very big truth there.  I really wish you'd see more of that with him on the show.  Thanks for reading and reiviwing this one.  Much appreciated.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 07:28 am

Title: Chapter 12

Thanks Black that was a great story. Didn't see that one coming Lily being his kid....

Author's Response: Hey Kaci! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated.

Reviewer: Kaci Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 07:18 am

Title: Chapter 12

Okay, that was a great ending to such a great story. I loved, loved that everything ended with people acting like grown ups for once, doing the right thing for everyone involved.

You wrote the hell out of those last flashback scenes, so heartbreaking. How Dru and Neil came to be, Jack not realizing the extent of her depression. I'm happy that they've all moved on with their lives, and everyone is finally where they're supposed to be.

Excellent work Black, thanks for writng such an awesome fic. :)



Author's Response: Hey TBG. Thanks for reading and reviewing.  And yes, everyone had a big grown up day.  Jack had no idea how far Dru had gone.  It was a slow build of self loathing throughout the story (something I think started before she even moved into the Abbott house) that just became too much.  Now older wiser Dru would never get to that point but in the end, back then Dru was still very young and fragile.  And I don't think this story could have had anything but a happy ending.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Much appreciated.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 11

Damn Mamie won't cut Dru a break at all .. geez

Okay - Hot ass love scene ma'am.. Love the thought of Jack reflecting back to wanting kids with Dru - 

I hope "little dru" is okay - don't play

Love how Jack is taking charge this time -

"Neil will be there Jack," Dru said, slipping into her jacket with trembling hands. Jack reached out and covered them with his own. She looked up in surprise, her eyes filled with terrified tears. Jack kissed her forehead quickly, speaking low against her skin.

"And so will I."

Damn this will be Good! Can't wait - bring it on!

 

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 02:18 am

Title: Chapter 10

Nice flashback of her years as a dancer.. I say it again, great use of history to bring a real element to your stories. You have a keen awareness of the characters you write.

I heart this - the bluff---their bluff! Nice touch of making something special between them, about them. It made them reconnect!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 02:13 am

Title: Chapter 9

Once a dumb-ass always a dumb ass.. Brad.. anywho enough on him

Loving the flashbacks.. Convo w/Dru and Neil gives us readers some insight on how Neil feelings play an important role in this story and how he got caught up in this whole thing. Even Dru said she was wrong for fooling herself all these years about her feelings. Nice update 

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 02:10 am

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