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Title: Chapter Fourteen

I love you. I laughed, got angry and actually cried at the end. This is just BRILLIANT! Thank you for writing this xxx

Reviewer: Inès Giramata Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/13 05:47 pm

Title: Character Summaries

Okay, so I know I'm about four years late, but this story was phenomenal. Doctor Who and Supernatural are two of my favorite shows of all time, and I've watched and rewatched faithfully. You've captured every character just perfectly. I could easily hear their voices in my head and see the expressions they were making. Your characters were just as loud as the characters on televsion, so thank you for really paying attention to that detail. Martha Jones is an incredible companion, and I wish she could've gotten another season on the show. A crossover with Martha and Dean is like...one of my ficship dreams, you have no idea! I would love to read another story by you with this pairing, but I'm happy I at least have this to reread!

You should totally write for the show because the plot read so much like an actual episode. You surprised me at the end when Time Lord Martha shows up just where the other Martha leaves. The way she says 500 years kills me, but I love that they have this time together. I totally understand it when The Doctor apologizes because she has watch him grow old and die without her. Ugh, this was PERFECTION!

Reviewer: knox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/07/12 10:59 pm

Title: Character Summaries

How late am I? VERY. But My love of all things WHO had me to read it. I loved every bit of this story and if crossovers could become canon....I'd just die to see this played out as several episodes. A mini series...whatever. You know that feeling you get after reading something so deliciously wonderful that you clap and screech and all other fashions of nonsense? I did that. Beautifully written... P.S Marry Me? Just kidding, don't call the folks on me.

Reviewer: outlawstar615 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/07/12 02:13 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

I've never seen a single episode of Supernatural (and not really about to start watching now), but I still enjoyed this story a lot.

Reviewer: persiflage_1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/10 05:20 pm

Title: Chapter Fourteen

Aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!  I'm sitting here smiling like a crazy person, COMPLETELY IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY.  Perfect, perfect, perfect.  :-D

Reviewer: foxmonkey Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/10 08:09 am

Title: Chapter Nine

I'm absolutely blown away at how perfectly you've nailed *everyone's* voice in this...it's pretty freakin' impressive. I haven't even finished the chapter (nine) yet, but when Ellen said, "Boy, don't make me cut you," I knew it was time to leave a comment.  That absolutely *killed* me.  ;-)

I'm loving the story so far, and as a firm Martha/Ten shipper and an avowed Dean girl, I'm also loving the dynamic you've set up with Martha and Dean, and Ten very much missing his companion.  I can't wait to see how it all plays out in the end!

Fox

Reviewer: foxmonkey Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/10 06:47 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

I KNOW THIS IS A OLD STORY, AND I'VE READ THIS OVER 5 TIMES, BUT COULD YOU THINK OF DOING A PART TWO TO THIS, PLEASEEEEEEEE. YES IM A DIE HARD MARTHA, DOCTOR DEAN FAN. THANKS AGAIN FOR THIS AWESOME STORY.

Reviewer: NEKI Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/01/10 01:40 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

That was awesome! I read it all in on go, ignoring hunger to get to the end. That was all very well done. I like Martha as a Time Lord. But, I wonder about her traveling alone.

Reviewer: Candace Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 09:31 pm

Title: Chapter Fourteen

Amazing! I've never read a crossover story before and this just blows my mind... You are a remarkable talent



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I'm so happy this was your first cross over, and that you enjoyed it so much! :D

Reviewer: Miele Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 04:20 am

Title: Chapter Twelve

can i tell you how much i love you for writing this story. read it in 2 days, that's just how good it was, if you have anymore stories of martha, please let me know. this is my e-mail address anitramathis@aol.com. thanks so much for this awesome story!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading my story, I'm really glad you liked it! I don't have many other Martha fics at the moment, just a few drabbles I've posted on my live journal page. I do plan to write a longer fic though, hopefully you'll enjoy that one as well.

Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: NEKI Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 12:38 am

Title: Chapter Two

I KNOW I SHOULD BE IN THE BED BY KNOW(2:55am)BUT I CAN'T STOP READING THIS STORY!!!!

Reviewer: NEKI Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/09 08:55 am

Title: Chapter One

WOW! THAT'S REALLY ALL I CAN SAY:)

Author's Response: thanks so much!

Reviewer: NEKI Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/09 08:36 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

I feel in love with this story so much that I couldn't really see Dean with anyone but Martha for a long time but alas it has inspired me to write my own Supernatural fan fiction. I really got addicted to reading this and am really sad and happy that it's over since they ended up together.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm so glad you liked it. :D

Reviewer: LoveisPudding Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/01/09 04:13 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

That was brilliant. I've not seen Supernatural but I enoyed this fic anyway. Martha would be a fantastic Time Lord.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, and I so agree that Martha was meant to be a Time Lord. She just hasn't got around to it yet. :)

Reviewer: Jade Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/08 08:59 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

BLOODY BRILLANT!!!!

I loved every word.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/11/08 01:48 am

Title: Chapter One

Absolutely freaking awesome!  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank so much! Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Charlotte Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/11/08 07:51 pm

Title: Chapter Fourteen

BG. You should have seen me when I finished this. I sat back on the sofa and finished my coffee with a smile on my face, just a little contented smile.

You did it. You managed to find a way for Martha to have the best of both worlds. Just....bloody brilliant.

There's no need for me to say anything more.



Author's Response: Thanks so much HP! I loved writing this and had a smile on my face too by the time it was finshed. Glad I could do the shows justice, I'm glad you liked the fic!

Reviewer: Honeypeach Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/11/08 08:16 pm

Title: Chapter Fourteen

I think that was the best story i have read on valent, and that's saying something. the way that you intertwined my two favorite shows with my favorite characters, bloody brilliant!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, that really means a lot, especially because of all the awesome fics on the site. I'm glad you enjoyed the crossover madness, it was really fun to write, and I'm going to miss these characters a lot. Thanks for reading the story and for the review!

Reviewer: miriam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 09:38 pm

Title: Chapter Fourteen

Love Dean on Supernature and enjoyed Martha on Dr. Who, this was wonderful how the two shows were combined and loved the Dean/Martha relationship.  These two are hot together.

Author's Response:

Thanks Robin! I loved those characters too, and this was so fun to write. I'm really glad you liked htem together, I kind of fell for them too when I was writing this. I can't see Dean with anyone else at this point. :)

Thanks for reading and the review!

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 05:09 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

TBG, you completed another gem to add to your treasure of awesome fan fics. I hated to see it end but love how future Martha came back just as present Martha left.

Loved Jack and Ellen. The more I think about it, the more I feel that Sam deserves some hotness of the female variety in his life too. Feel free to write another fic in the not too distant future. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much lovembooth! I'm glad you liked the wrap up and the story, I really hated to see it go, but was glad to reach the end. :)  You're right about Sam needed a bit more female loving in his life. I did write a one-shot for him with another Supernatual character recently and really like it, so I think Sammy might be getting a few more fics in the future. :)

Thanks so much for reading lovemboth!

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/11/08 09:08 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

*Throws roses and confetti*

Brilliant, brilliant, great, stupdendous. LOVED IT.  The lonely life of a Time Lord. Filled with broken promises and forever to think about everything you've lost. Martha Jones is The Hunter.  Can you write BBC and force them to make this into a spinoff.

I ain't gonna lie--the Doctor being hopeful and thinking he didn't have to be alone anymore broke my heart. Because future Martha is a alone. I love how you left that out there. 

Dean had admittedly started to...ahem, tire me out, but I love their goodbye. Perfect conclusion to what looked hopeless.  Excellent job - very touching.

Oh and Jack had me LMAO. 

“Can’t resist a victory kiss, especially one like that. The things that woman can do with her tongue. And that was just in my mouth

Awesome. Love him and Ellen.

Loved Sam's defeat of Lilith and how you incorporated some of the current season dynamics in that. 

Overall, just a great, great story. I can't wait to see more Supernatural from you, but I REALLY want to see more Dr. Who. More Martha Jones please *cough*Martha/Master*cough*

You get stars. :-)



Author's Response:

I can't stop writing The Doctor like that, he's just so...sad to me. But in a good, intersting way I think. And you're right, something did happen in those 500 years and I know what. But I'm not telling. *smiles*

I love Jack Harkness and his dirty hotness. And I did want to throw in a little S4, it's too damn good to ignore at this point.

Master/Martha? Hmmmmm....excellent.....but the teddy bear fic comes first right?

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/08 07:54 pm

Title: Chapter Fourteen

i love this story so mcuch. Martha and Dean on eof my favourite couples they're so perfect together, well apart sort of. YOU  KNOW WHAT I MEAN! I just got to say that this story was well written the plot was amazing but you also captured the true essence of the characters, and I just want to thank you for putting that across so beautifully.

AMAZING



Author's Response:

Thanks so much jwhispers, I'm really glad you liked this. And I agree, I think Martha and Dean would make an awsome couple, he needs a woman like her in his life. Thank you so much for the compliment, I really wanted to try to write those characters as close to the real thing as possible, so that coments really means a lot.

Thank you for reading and for the review!

Reviewer: j_whispers Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/08 08:27 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

Oh Wow! ok......This ending was really sad to me....her being a timelord is F*cking Awesome....but it was really.....sad: ( You made me cry TBG, you made me cry....oh so very bittersweet of you *sigh* Fantastic conclusion, but WHY!!? I Want them to be together damnit!!!

I'm obviously not ready for this fabulous writing to be over, only to add to my many issues!! WHY!!!?(always gonna slip that in there)

I want to Thank you TBG for giving me the opportunity to read your Awesome stories, that I know you work so hard on to update so quickly, and I hope to read many more!

TBG ROCKS!!!



Author's Response:

I know, I know...I have a hard time with straightfoward endings, but they did sorta end up together. At least for a while, right? I'm really glad you liked the wrap up, it was kind fun writing Time Lord Martha Jones. :) And I really want to thank you for the awesome reviews you've left, they're always so encouraging and make writing these stories so worth it. So thanks for that, and you're a kick ass reader if you didn't know that already. :)

 

Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/08 07:57 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

I can't believe this is over. It was a damn brilliant story. Martha becoming a Timelord was different (imho) and a nice ending. Martha showed she was a capable heroine throughout the stoy and I appreciate that.

I'll take a moment to squee about Time travelling, space hunting Martha!

The ending was really nice. not overly romantic or too angsty. Yes, Dean will die and she'll have to continue on wihtout him but at least they were probably happy together for a while.

 

“Men and their toys. You think this was his bloody cock, the way he rubs that panel all day long.” 

This is why I will always love your Donna. So blunt and to the point.

“Can’t resist a victory kiss, especially one like that. The things that woman can do with her tongue. And that was just in my mouth…”

And this is why I love your Jack. Him and Ellen are hot even if she finds him annoying. The sex between them would be terrific.



Author's Response:

I can't believe it either, it's gonna feel strange not updating this story any more. But I'm so glad you enjoyed the wrap up and Martha becoming a bad assed demon hunting Time Lord. As she should be. :)

Glad you liked the ending, I felt like so much had happened toward the end that that last part should just kind of fade out. And you're right, we pretty much knows what happens after that. Martha's alone.

Jack and Ellen sex would be aweome, and painful I think. But in a good way. :)

Thank you so much for your reviews lucky, they really meant a lot when I was writing this fic!

Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/08 05:27 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I LOVED every bit of this story Token! Excellent job! I'm so gonna miss Martha and Dean! My favorite part was that future Martha stayed with Dean... wonderful! I also liked how you brought back why they called her the Dark One and how that all tied the story up. Martha kicked major butt (as expected) through the entire story! Loved that the Doctor asked Sam if he wanted to travel with him.  Sam would make a kick ass companion for the Doctor.  This story was excellent and an absolute joy to read.  Kept me on the edge of my seat and wanting more! Awesome Token! :)

Author's Response:

*hugs* Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked this story and I'm going to miss it too. I was just praying I'd gotten to everything I did in the story, I didn't want to leave anything unexplained. And I had to give Sam the chance to fly in the blue box, but of course he'd say no. Because he's Sam. :)

Thank you so much for hanging in with this one, I'm really grateful for the reveiws, which were awesome. And thanks for the stars too!

Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/08 04:54 am

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