This is kind of an addictive story. I really enjoy it. The dynamic between Martha and Dean is awesome, lovin' the banter, and the stuff with Sam and the Doctor... amazing. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! These are two of my favorite shows, so I'm glad you like it. I love writing those characters, it's so much fun. Hope you like what's to come as well.
Date: 24/07/08 10:57 pm
Wee one's staring at my cock... very funny! Another brilliant chapter. The Library Planet is one of my fav. episodes of Dr. Who, so I like that you added that into the story! YAY! I'm eager to find out exactly why Lilith wants to get to Dean and how Sam and The Doctor will find Martha and Dean. Great job!
Author's Response:
Hey idjunkie!
That's one of my faves too, and I couldn't wait to send those guys back to The Library. Glad you're digging the story, and I hope you like what's to come as well.
Thanks so much for reading and leaving those pretty stars!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/07/08 03:12 am
You had me scared there for a moment! "Hey, who turned out the lights."
Author's Response: LOL, I love that line. Loved that whole episode really. Thanks for reading and the reveiw!
Date: 18/07/08 04:20 am
Thanks for the bio of the characters.. Off to read!
Author's Response:
Yay! Zeta looked at my story! *Token does a little dance*
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 18/07/08 04:17 am
Oh man, I love this story. The character voices were right on target and the classic one-liners were awesome. I loving the chemistry and banter between The Doctor and Sam and Dean and Martha.
BTW, because of this story I starting to get into the Doctor Who universe and I'm loving it. I recommend it to anyone who hasn't seen, Doctor Who comes on Sci-Fi Friday nights at 9 PM.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. This one takes a while to write, because I try to get as close to the shows as possible, so you're reveiw makes me very happy.
And to know you're watching Doctor Who now makes me even happier.:) That show is awesome, and I'm so glad you found it!
Reviewer: bballangel726 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/07/08 02:02 am
Okay, so when should I set my Tivo....opps, I swear I'm watching a crossover show (the execs should sooo know about this) Dean and Martha-Hot & Hilarious!! Sam and The Doctor- umm Hot & Hilarious!! Dean and Ruby-love his loathing of her (she pisses me off) Master and Lilith- HA! loved the wee ones comment
Again love it, and will always want more!!
and somehow (even though it will never happen) I keep thinking Sam and Tish Jones, i don't know but it keeps popping up. Oh and YOUR AWESOME!!!
Author's Response:
LOL, Hey Rocky13Depp,
So that's the best thing you could have said, that this really feels like a show. Makes writing this feel even better. And the Dean/Ruby convo, well...let's just say that was probably the easiest thing to write in this chapter. :)
I have to say, I don't see Tish showing up in this fic, I'm already a little freaked about how many characters do plan on writing. But you never know, I have been known to change my mind about those things. :)
Thanks so much for such a great review. And you're awesome for reading this, so thanks for that too.
Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]Date: 18/07/08 12:01 am
Hurray, a new chapter! I love the near-hand-holding moment between the Doctor and Sam, and I really love the chemistry between Martha and Dean. Great dialogue, as always, and the pacing is perfect. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Hi KP!
Glad you liked this one. I coudn't resist the handholding thing, I've always wondered how that would go with a male companion. :) Glad you're liking Martha and Dean, I have a lot planned for them in this fic.
Thanks so much for reviewing and for the stars!
Reviewer: KP Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 17/07/08 08:30 pm
Ooo! It gets better and better! Monsters in books eating people; shadows eating people, WTH? I've got to watch some epis of Dr. Who. Looking foward to the next update.
Author's Response:
Hey Lovemboth!
Doc Who has some of the best villians and mosters, you should definately check it out. I'm glad you're liking the fic, it's starting to get into the main plot a little more now. Hope you like the next chapter too!
Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/07/08 05:38 pm
Okay. Didn't realize you have screencaps. This will help me LOL I'm printing this badboy out. Will read at lunch ;)
Author's Response: Hey MZ. Just got the screencaps and I'll probably go back and add some to previous chapters. I thougt about doing that at the begining but I got kinda lazy.....
Date: 17/07/08 04:15 pm
That was brilliant. Martha and Dean's banter is excellent. I laughed out loud when he told her how sexy he was. The Master's comment at the end was also pretty funny.
I'm excited to see what happens next. I'm happy that Martha is at the center of the story and not just the sidekick.
Author's Response:
Hey Luckybrans!
Glad you liked this, especially the banter. I wanted them to be entertaining without being obnoxious about it. :) And Dean is damn sexy, isn't he?
Martha is definately the center of this fic, I wanted this to be her story first and foremost.
Thanks so much for reading and leaving the review!
Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]Date: 17/07/08 04:01 pm
*sigh* I love this story.
The library sequence was great. Sam having the two shadows made me very, very nervous. But as the Doctor said, why did they leave him alone? This chapter was classic for Dean. His Ruby convo was funny as hell. Loved Martha's quick thinking and the addition of the pictures was a great idea. Update it soon. I demand it.
Author's Response:
I love the Library, it's so creepy.....
I thought I should add pics for those who may not have seen the shows, because I'm not the best at detailed description (I know and accept this about myself...)
Thanks for reviewing, and the stars...they are very bright.
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed [Report This]Date: 17/07/08 03:19 pm
Lilth and the Master oh dear. Dang can't even get away from Ruby in a fanfic huh? Great update, Sam and the Doctor are hilarious together. Favorite lines from this chapter:
"Fly away home wicked bitch from down under"
"That's kind of rich coming from you Mr. Doctor, no last name, just the Doctor."
Author's Response:
Heh, I love Lil and the Master. Writing villians is so much fun. And yes, I did want Ruby in this, for reasons I can't get into quite yet. And I felt okay writing her now that I know the character's gone for good. :)
Thanks for reading and the stars!
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed [Report This]Date: 17/07/08 02:13 pm
Okay, I've never watched an episode of Supernatural, but Dean is a real pice of work.
The writing for Martha and The Doctor is very in-character. Like I can hear them in my head.
I always had a soft spot for this Master, he's funny and such a cutie.
And this passage just had me laughing out loud...
“Did you just turn off my damn radio?” Dean repeated. Martha blew out a frustrated breath.“Yes, Dean. I touched your penis—I mean stereo.”
Author's Response:
Hey Shocol!
Glad you liked this even though you're not into Supernatural, Dean's an awesome character, and he got even better as the show progressed. Writing Martha and the Doctor is awesome, but also kinda stressful, I always want to make sure I get those characters right.
And I'm a big fan of the Master (you could probably tell that), so I had to pu him in this.
Thanks so much for reading and leaving the review!
Reviewer: shocol Signed [Report This]Date: 17/07/08 09:57 am
Squee! Looking forward to more! I've actually begun watching Supernatural. On the second disc to season 1. ;)
Author's Response:
Yay, a Supernatural convert. The seasons get better as time goes on, this last one is awesome. I hope I don't spoil too much for you with my fic, but it's fun to watch regardless.
Thanks for reading MZ!
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 14/07/08 04:54 pm
I ma loving it!!!! Dean and Martha together is so interesting. Sam and the Doctor are a humorous pair. Update, please!!!
Author's Response: Hee, thanks so much, glad you like it. I love mixing up the shows, though I'm staring to realize how complicated that can be.:) Working on the next one, hope to post it soon.
Date: 14/07/08 02:51 am
Good story Token, but I'd expect nothing less, especially when it comes to our boy Jensen(dean). It's just I'm not very good when it comes to waiting for updates, you owe us two stories now, Lincoln and Dean...You got some work to do kiddo...lol
Author's Response:
Hey VAL1,
First off, you're awesome for registering, so glad you see you on The Chamber!
And I'm so glad you liked this, being as big a Jensen fan as I. I do try to update as fast as possible, but also rotate my stories, so it takes about a week for each one I think. Kinda like the show actually. LOL.
As for Linc, I'm working on that right now, fleshing out the first chapter. It should be posted sometime this week, I promise.
Thanks so much for reading and for the great reveiw!
Reviewer: VAL1 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/07/08 07:14 pm
Loved this demon packed chapter! Can't wait to see what Lilith has up her sleeve. I really love the dialogue between the Doc and Sam. Dean is even hot through words on a screen... LOVE HIM and the bantering between him and Martha, while fighting off demons, is great! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
There were a lot of demons, now that I think of it..:) I loved the idea of Sam and Ten just as much as Dean and Martha. Sam's so gloomy, and companions have so much fun, I think he needs that. And writing Dean and Martha, well...that's just icing on the cake.
Thanks for reading idjunkie and leaving the review!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/07/08 06:18 am
loving it!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. And thanks for reading too!
Reviewer: cvgirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/07/08 05:10 am
This story is awesome. Martha and Dean are two of my favourite characters. After seeing a few Martha/Dean short fics here and there I've longed for something longer and plottier and here it is!
The thought of Lilith and the Master pulling strings and maybe working together is cool. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks luckybrans,
Martha and Dean are favorites of mine as well, along with the Doc and Sam. I'm not even sure how I came up with this idea, I hadn't read any fics on the shows then. I think I just wanted Freema to guest star on the show, maybe play Bella instead of the chick they actually cast. (who is now fired ).
Anyway, thanks so much for reading this, and leaving your review!
Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]Date: 10/07/08 09:10 pm
Love the new chapter! This keeps getting better. Your characterizations are great, and I adore the dialgue. My favorite lines:
“Sam isn’t on a spaceship because there’s no way in hell that he could end up somewhere that awesome, without me."
“Oh, I can do complicated. It’s where I live, actually.”
But there were lots more. Can't wait to see the next chapter. In addition to being a hell of a fun read, this is very suspenseful!
Author's Response:
Hi KP!
Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked this. I kinda get lost in writing conversations with the characters, sometimes I make myself pull back a bit. It's just really fun though.
Thank you for reading, I hope you like what's to come too.
Reviewer: KP Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/07/08 03:43 pm
Ohhh! Love the snappy dialogue. Great update. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks lovemboth, glad you liked this. I love writing dialogue, especially with these characters. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10/07/08 07:41 am
Great update.
Loved the Doctor and Sam. That was classic, the Doctor sending him out on his own in one of his infamous tests. And the Library bit was inspired. But uh--I've seen that episode.
Sam...drop the books.
Martha and Dean were hilarious. Her "welcome to American Martha" had me rollin.
More please?
Author's Response:
The Library *swoon*. I luv the library. And I plan to put a bit more detail in the next chapter, for those who haven't seen the episode. Hmmm..maybe I should put spoiler warnings in my summary. Just thought of that.
Thanks for the pretty stars...oooh, shiny.....
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/07/08 07:16 am
This was worth the wait. I don't even know where to begin in terms of classic lines but I guess I'll go with:
"The dark one eh" Martha said, her eyebrow rising. "Right, welcome to America, Martha."
By the time I got to that line I was ROTFLMAO. The Doctor and Sam interacting his hilarious, but it has just dawned on me how same is like a submissive in constant need of a dominate, this is my random midnight rambling.
Anyways, well done!
Author's Response:
Hey GreatO!
Glad you liked this chapter, it did take a bit to put up. I'm so slow with this story, I usually can get out a chapter on most my fics in a few hours, but this story takes more time then the others. Want to make sure the characters are right I think.
Thanks so much for reading and for the stars!
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed [Report This]Date: 09/07/08 07:04 am
I've been relishing the prospect of this one, and you didn't dissappoint! Great opening chapter! My gosh you have The Doctor down to a tee, mannerisms and all!!
Author's Response:
Yay! You like it. I'm so pleased. I know you really like DocWho and I didn't want to dissapoint. Thanks so much, glad I could do the Doctor justice.
Reviewer: Honeypeach Signed [Report This]Date: 09/07/08 06:47 am
Awesome update, I loved the interaction between the doctor and sam, you wrote them as if I were watching them. and with Dean and martha, I can feel the chemistry, and it only makes me long to see this really happen onscreen
I believe I've become addicted, and I hope you update soon
and no worries your doing both show absolute justice!
Author's Response:
Thanks Rocky13, very happy you liked this one as well. I did like writing Sam and The Doctor a lot, just as much as Dean and Martha, so I'm glad you liked their scenes. And yes, it would be so great to see Martha and Dean team up, or at the very least, get Freema to guest star on some episodes. I think I would go into a fangirl frenzy if that ever happened. :)
Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]Date: 09/07/08 06:36 am