Very nice. Started with a dash of Dartha lovin' which is a good thing. Loved the scene with Poppa Winchester. Adrianna huh? Hmmmm....
Jack appearance was awesome. Voice of a Nightingale indeed. And that comment about Dean was funny as hell.
Loved Sam callin the Daleks trashcans. Too funny. But his eyes turning white like a little scary ass demon we know and love was very interesting indeed. The plot thickens.
I want some more.
Author's Response:
Papa Winchester is miss by all I think. And I loved getting to look for pics of John, I missed JDM's lovely face. :)
Everybody would call the Daleks trashcans. At least right before they started shooting anyway. :)
Thanks for reading Black!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/09/08 05:52 am
AHHH!! an update!! YAY!!
I'm lovin this chapter, it started off hot (just like I like it lol) and then with sam and the doctor with them sexy selves, and then you throw Jack in the mix....again I can't stay away from this story for long....Damn it you get me everytime
As always you are awesome and this story is awesome!
oh and I like the papa john part, I've been missing him, and I love martha's middle name, nice touch,and sam my baby sam, he's so hot as a demon, but it's so bad for him "stay away!" again the beginning HOT!!! Can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Rocky :)
Doc and Sam are sexy aren't they. Bring a lot of sandwhich imagery to mind. But I digress...
Jack is back and Matha's got him, I always loved their relationship. And Dean's jealous, becuase he dosen't like to share, especially Martha. I've always adored Papa Winchester and had to throw him in this, just a little. Sam is hot as a demon (did you see the premiere? Lord, I swooned, can't wait to write a fanfic about shady Sam. )
Thanks for reading Rocky. :)
Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]Date: 18/09/08 10:09 pm
Fantastic update! More action than I could shake a stick at. What a ride.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks lovemboth! Glad you liked it. :) Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/09/08 08:03 pm
I had a big grin on my face while I was reading this. The mystery is deepening around Martha and I love it.
“Boy, don’t make me cut you.”
I love Bobby, just love him. I love how much of a good father figure he is. Ellen is a great mother figure too. I think she is who Mary might have been had she survived and had to deal with the supernatural.
Adding Jack to the mix made me grin too. I'm imagining Ellen/Jack now because that would be awesome. I can also imagining him hitting on Bobby because he'd just have to.
So basically Sam has the same powers as Lilith. Interesting. I wonder what her connection to the YED is then.
I can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response:
Heh, I think the easiest people for me to write are Bobby and Ellen, have no idea why. I always liked Ellen's role on the show, I seriously hope they bring her back this season. Jack always makes me smile, and yes, he'd probably sex up that entire house. But I always loved his relationship with Martha on the show.
Glad you picked up on the Sam/Lilth thing, wasn't sure how clear that was. It's so odd writing that part now that the seaon's started, Sam is mighty different now then he is in my fic. And that's such a good thing...:)
Thanks for reading lucky!
Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]Date: 18/09/08 07:02 pm
Awesome! Dean is so EFFING HOT!!! Martha is by far the luckiest girl in the world! Loved the kitchen scene with Martha and John. I wonder why he called her by her middle name? That'll be interesting to find out. Donna is love. I can't believe she slapped Sam! You got the Daleks down! I hate those cheesy robots but you wrote them soooo well! EXTERMINATE! And Jack finally made it to Martha. I wonder what Dean's gonna do about his jealousy! Wonderful as usual Token! :)
Author's Response:
Dean is just...*sigh* there are no words really. I could tons of those kind of scenes with him really. Easy as hell with that man.
Daleks make me cringe and laugh everytime they show up. They can be so draining to a story, but they're also classic Who, I coudn't write this story without them really. Jack is back and Dean..well, he's Dean. :)
Thanks for reviewing idjunkie!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/09/08 07:46 am
Damn...that was hot! Loved it, loved it, floved it. I honestly don't know the Doctor Who series, but I'm liking the Martha charcter. I hope you update soon! Oh ummh yeah, I was also kinda wishing I was Martha...;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks shanesgirl!
Thanks for reading this, even without previous Who knowledge. Martha is a awesome character and I love writing this for her. And I'm right there with you on wishing I was her, Supernatural can't come back fast enough in my opinion. :)
Reviewer: shanesgirl Signed [Report This]Date: 09/09/08 10:02 am
The TARDIS! Manic Time Lord smiles! A Dean/Gordon Smackdown! Martha taking on RuBarbie! The return of Papa John! SEX!! Could this get any more fun? Maybe if it had a little more sex... Great work, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Hee! It is fun isn't it? At least I'm having fun writing it. Glad you liked the sexing, and yes, there's a bit more to come. It is Dean...:)
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: KP Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/09/08 03:36 am
LOVED IT!!!
soo steamy
loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks j_whispers! Glad you liked it and thanks for the review! Reviewer: j_whispers Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/09/08 06:41 am
Excellent! Loved it! That Lilith is one scary looking kid/demon/whateva.
Author's Response: Yep, she's creepy as hell. I loved using that pic too. :) Thanks for reading lovembooth!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/08 05:41 am
I was never a bit Ruby fan and can't say I'll miss her. It was good to see Dean knock her around.
Is it wrong that I imagined it was me Dean asked to say yes, I hope not. LMAO!
It seems that the Doctor's feelings for Martha run deeper than he's willing to admit. I wonder what will happen when they find each other again and he finds out about her and Dean.
Author's Response:
Oh, I coudn't stand Ruby, but she's so useful in my story. Someone has to get knocked around a bit. And hell no it's not wrong, so was doing that myself when I was writing this. I WAS Dr. Jones. :)
And your right about the Doctor, there's a bit of Martha/Ten shipping mixed in with this, I couldn't help myself. And the cofrontation should be interesting, I hope anyway.
Thanks for reading Sweet Pea!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 08/09/08 05:32 am
Yay for Martha/Dean sexing, but that wasn't the most important part for me. I'm still enjoying the non-romantic/erotic portion of the story. Take out the sexing and I'd still be reading.
Forgive me if I'm a little dense but basically what's happening is that the TARDIS is going backwards to places where he and Martha have already been. If so, then it's point back to the Master because ultimately that's what the journey with Martha led up to. The doctor's missing the obvious clues, well they're not that obvious if you're him.
Great job! Looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response:
Hey luckybrans!
I'm glad you're enjoying the fick especially all the small bits as well as the bigger ones. And your right about the Tardis traveling through his and Martha's history. And yes, the Master is a pretty big part of that, though the Doctor still hasn't accepted Sam's world yet, which is handicaping him. Only getting half the picture right now.
Thanks for the review, glad you liked this!
Reviewer: luckybrans Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 11:09 pm
Wow!
Martha and Dean...my screen just about melted from the heat. And Bobby...my dear, sexy Bobby. I just love the way you write him.
Author's Response:
LOL, glad you you liked the Darth action. And yes, Bobby is pretty damn cool, I love that character on the show, so I just want to throw every cool line at him I can think of. So glad he's coming back.
Thanks so much for the review mskel!
Reviewer: mskel Signed [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 08:07 pm
YAY!!!! Violence and Sex!!, you sooo did not disappoint (like you ever) the Dean and Martha part was....ummm.....HOT and Sexy (and I love that pic of his back, so hot)
The thing with John, and his ghost or....whatever his is, very nice turn, and I have a feeling if Dean finds out Martha saw him, he is going to be mad, and hurt
Loved the Donna and Sam moment, and the comment with the shirt, had me rollin, gotta love Donna
And the TARDIS going back to where they met, *sigh* brings back memories, so sweet
And yet again TBG, you make my day that much better, I work a long double shift and I thought nothing would cheer me up....Wrong! I saw this and immediately did a happy dance, love this story, and love your writing! Keep up the good work and update soon, this story is plaguing my mind!!
Author's Response:
Hey Rocky!
Glad you liked the Dartha sex, I know I put it off for a while. And I couldn't wait to post that pic, I had it saved for just this occasion.:)
I'm a big Papa Winchester fan, so I loved writing him in this and John's so important to the Dean character that I felt I had to really. And Donna and Sam are so fun to play with, I could write them all day.
I'm so glad to hear the story cheered you up, I've been hoping that it wasn't going on a bit long. This was actually a pretty long chapter, so I'm so glad you still enjoyed it. Trust me, this fic stays on my mind as well, I really don't know how I'm gonna watch the show and Martha not be there.
Thanks so much for leaving such a great reveiw. ;)
Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 07:30 am
I was having a downer day and I saw that you updated this and it literally brought a smile to my face, so thanks! :)
Dartha is pure hotness! WOWZERS! I can't picture the two of them with anyone else but each other. Loved Dean kicking the shit out of Gordon's ass. Was thrilled when Martha kicked Ruby in the knee and knocked her on her ass. Bobby was wonderful as usual and I just love the potty mouth on Ellen. Donna is love. I was dying when she asked Sam to pull his shirt down further because "she couldn't see."
Wonderful update TBG! :)
Author's Response:
Hey idjunkie!
Sorry about your day, I'm glad this could cheer you up. It kicks my ass on occasion when I write it, but I do smile when it's up again, becuase I really love this story. Glad you liked the Dartha action and Dean's ass kick abilities. Bobby is such a great character, I love grumpy older men for some reason. And I could write Donna all day, she's by far my favorite Who charcter after Martha.
Thanks for reading idjukie!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 06:56 am
Yay! Okay so great, great update. Loved the Papa Winchester moment. Very creepy indeed. And Dean kickng Gordon's ass was like music to me. And BOBBY FREAKIN' ROCKS. I was sick of that shit too Bobby. That's my boy.
Hot, hot Dartha action. Loved how intimate it was. Dr. Jones got her some lovin' and the church said amen.
Starting to think the Dark One might be Sam. Loved the moment where they landed on the moon. And this...
She was afraid, I could see it her eyes, but she did it anyway. And we stood there, staring at that planet. And then I knew..."
"You knew what?" Sam said, and The Doctor met his gaze.
"That I wanted her with me." He replied, then looked out the doors once more.
"I still do."
Totally screwed with my Dartha lovin' head. What the hell are you trying to do to me. Shit, I'm shipping Martha/Ten again.
Great update as usual.
Author's Response:
Dartha action is fun, may get a bit more before the fic's over. And yes, while I'm writing the Dartha loving, can't resist a little Ten shipping now and again, I just can't help myself. Everyone should be in love with Martha Jones. :)
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 05:51 am
This is good. I love Supernatural, and especially, the Dean character, so this is a treat. I like Martha on Dr Who, too. So glad they got together.
Author's Response:
Hey Robin!
I love Supernatural too, I'm counting the days until the new season. And I heart Dean too, though Sam is growing on me a little more as well. I'm a huge Martha fan, so every time I write this, I'm in fangirl heaven. :) Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 05:46 am
This just keeps getting better and better. Love the pace, the suspense, the dialogue, the characterization and, of course, the romance. Can't wait to see what happens when Martha and Dean get more than 2 minutes uninterrupted. More, please!
Author's Response:
Hi KP!
Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I'm trying to keep all that going, and keep the pace moving forward as well, don't want it to drag too much. And Dartha love will happen very soon. Uniterrupted. For the most part. :)
Reviewer: KP Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/08 05:49 am
I wanted to slap Ellen so bad!!! She knows how Dean feels about his brother and Father, and then to throw it in his face like that was just mean. SKANK! (In case you couldn't tell, I can't stand anyone trying to go off on my Dean!!!!!!!)
So now the Doctor knows Dean's secret. Maybe now they can figure out how the switch occurred.
I WAS FINALLY READY FOR SOME DEAN/MARTHA ACTION AND THAT PUNK COMES AND INTERRUPTS THEM!!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL, she is a bitch, isn't she. I loved writing her though. And the stuff about Dean's dad, I had to get into that too, because it's so important to Dean's character. And yes, the Doctor knows about Sam which is good. Should move things along a little more.
I promise the Dean/Martha action will come very soon, but not before a bit off ass kicking. :)
Thanks for reading Sweet Pea!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 06:08 pm
Okay, as usual this was awesomely fantastic. Loved the Supernatural stuff. Dean and Martha are just too damn hot. Loved his line about her ex-being a fool. And this line...
“You didn’t see the girl.” Martha said, and his grip on her hand tightened once more.
“I see this one.” Dean replied. “That’s all I need to know.”
Swoon worthy.
And okay, I knew they would get interrupted but by Gordon? Is it me? You hate me right? That's it isn't it :-(
The Doctor stuff was just bad ass. You captured that dark side of him perfectly and I loved his dialogue about that thing seeking vengence. Great you brought out the demon stuff with Sam, and loved Donna and Sam arguing about the key.
A hello, welcome to the TARDIS, go on, have a key
Freaking LOVE Donna Noble.
Doctor/Donna. *sigh*
Great update. Great, great update.
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm glad you liked that line. Cause Dean is pretty damn swoon worthy. LOL, I knew you'd hate the Gordon stuff, I think I am picking on you just a little. Gordon's so damn useful too.
And yay! on you liking the Docwho stuff, I always get worried about that part. And Sam and Donna are my new favorite couple, I'm so shippping them right now. :)
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 04:55 am
I have to say that I hate you just a little bit for not giving me my Martha/Dean sexing, but it's all good. It'll come in time and so will they. ;)
I can't wait to see how this all fits together. The planet being afraid of Sam means that the demon world trumphs the scientific. You can have planets that are alive but that at the end of the day there's some serious mystical stuff out there to be afraid of.
I'm loving your Donna and Dean voice. They're spot on. I could hear Catherine Tate in my head as I readand visualize her doing this little gestures.
Can't wait till the next update.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the sexing..I know it's been seven chapters...I didn't want it to happen quite yet. But soon I promise, very soon. And thanks for commenting on the mythology stuff, I think that's been the hardest for me to write in this fic. And you hearing Catherine Tate is awesome, I love her and Donna, and I picutre her everytime I write this. :)
Thanks so much for the reveiw!
Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 03:32 am
WONDERFUL as usual! I'm glad Sam told the Doctor about his hybridness! And this is so classic Donna:
“He gives all of us a key, he must have hundreds of them stashed away somewhere. Don’t mean anything, it’s like a party favor. A hello, welcome to the TARDIS, go on, have a key!”
The thing possessing (I guess that was like a possesion, right?) the Doctor was really creepy! You described that part very well, I got goosebumps!
Really digging the tender moments between Dean and Martha! Damn Gordon had to show up and ruin the hotness!! I hope Dean kicks his ass!
Author's Response:
LOL, that was one of my favorites too, I love writing for Donna. I never want her to leave actually. Glad you liked the creepiness and I guess it was a possesion, at least that's what it felt like when I watched the show. So I'll just go with that. Glad you liked the Dartha moment, and Gordon and Dean will fight. And I like Dean better then Gordon, so...
Thanks so much for reading idjunkie!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 02:15 am
TBG, you gave us a lot in this chapter...thank you! Sam is part demon?! WTH! Damn, can Dean and Martha catch a break? Demons always interrupting the loving! AARRGH!
Martha has more restraint than me 'cause I would have had to go off on Ellen! Why is Martha still wearing her engagement ring anyway?
Hurry up and update...'kay?
Author's Response:
Hey lovemboth!
Sam is part Demon, it's a big part of his character on the show, so I wanted to bring it up here as well, cause I thought it was kinda cool. And they are having problems with the whole demon thing, aren't they? :)
Martha's a Brit, so I had her basically just be uncomfortable by the whole situation. She is getting use to the whole Supernatual world though. And she's wearing her ring honestly because she's been avoiding the situation. And she's use to wearing it...well, that all with come up in the next update.
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 02:03 am
Dammit! Right when it was getting hot and heavy, you gotta pull the bad guy out, that sh*t ain't funny...actually I always love a good fight:)
God, I am so confused with what the sun said....and at this moment I like being confused, keeps me oh so intrigued, not that I need a reason, one sentence keeps me glued..
I saw that you updated and jumped with joy (literally) and now I will be waiting for that next one, you seriously got me hooked TBG. Keep it comin!
Author's Response:
LOL, I know, I know....I couldn't resist. Gotta up the tension just a bit more, but soon I promise. Heck, maybe in the next few chapters.
I love a good fight too, especially with Dean. I love watching Jensen do those scenes. :) And don't worry about the confusion, it's all a bit jumbled right now, but hopefully will start making more sense very soon. a
I'm so glad you liked this chapter, I thought I went on a bit in this one, so I was a little worried. I seriously get into this a bit too much sometimes, but I just really love writing it. ;)
Thanks so much for that great review and for the stars!
Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 01:40 am
GREAT, AWESOME update.
"Martha knew better than to fall for an oversexed alien hunter with a nice smile," that is unless he is the hot, sexy Dean.
I love the interaction between Dean and Bobby, they have a great relationship.
Author's Response:
Thanks Sweet Pea!
And you so rock for getting that little reference there, I didn't know if anyone would noticed that part. LOL.
And I love Dean and Bobby too, Bobby is by far my favorite guest star on the show. Love him.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/08 06:09 am
Alright......Badass....that was Badass, you get kickass points with that one
keep it comin with the Dean and Martha, I seem to can't stop thinking about them, they're just that hot
Jack and Donna fabulous (Doctor was jealous of Capt. and Martha's relationship...perfect:) )
Loving the reveal of the Doctors feelings for Martha (bout time...bitter still for how 3rd season) hate to say this but.....yeah, I want him to hurt alittle when he sees Dean with Martha
But as always brilliant job....and I gotta tell ya, I got alittle shaky without an update...should I be worried lol
Author's Response:
I can't stop thinking about them either, its strange. One of the other writers suggested that someone write a Dean/Cassie fic, and I was all....I just cant'. Because he belongs with Martha. It was weird..:)
Glad you liked Jack and Donna, love them to pieces. And The Doctor is so complicated, and his feelings for Martha should be as well I think.
I get antsy too when I go too long without writing this. Hopefully I'll finish up some ohter stories soon, and be able to write this more often. Thanks so much for reivewing, you're comments are always so awesome!
Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]Date: 16/08/08 01:41 am