dang, everyone here needs therapy. Lourdes for the abuse she suffered, her mother...needs to be put in jail, and...just. sigh...great update!
Author's Response:
This story was wrote from a very real place on how money wields power, control, and the need for lots of therapy. It's a real deal, large scale and small. Thanks for the wonderful review. I appreciate your support. 
[Report This]Date: 04/05/09 08:43 pm
what the hell she do that for
Author's Response: Vonniiiboo, it's kind of hard to really describe exactly which action you are referring to because there's no chapter, title, and I'm still not sure who the 'she' is you are referring. Please elaborate. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/09 07:42 pm
Well i see why that daughter doesn't get along with her mother. she pick the son as the favor and treat the daughter like crap. loving the story can't wait to next chapter. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading wwefanforlife... another's coming soon! ;)
[Report This]Date: 28/04/09 06:24 am
What a chapter. It seems this family has alot of skeletons in their closet. Katrina is almost like a bomb that wants to explode. She is very intense. I would like to know why she is the way she is. Also how did Lars Jr. die.
Author's Response:
Back in 6 it's mentioned (Lars death)...but the details will be more clear including the source of Kat's issues, so hang in there. Thanks for reading and your insights keep me writing
...so thanks! ;-)
Reviewer: karen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/04/09 04:31 am
She'd really rather not admit that her husband sexually abused her daught and let the child suffer mentally, as well as physically. What is wrong with this woman?!?
Author's Response: Katrina is a piece of work. She has some major issues. TY for continuing your support of this very complex tale. :)
[Report This]Date: 28/04/09 12:35 am
wow, I already thought Katrina couldn't sink any lower but she most certaintly has. What a selfish cow.
Author's Response:
I agree.
Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/04/09 11:46 pm
Well, I'm not home so I cant really throw cool water on myself but I'm all strapped up and ready for this ride baby. Nice one.
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 26/04/09 08:41 pm
This was definitely hot and explosive. Now I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I can't wait to share it all with you! :D
[Report This]Date: 22/04/09 06:10 am
wowza...that made me feel uncomfortable in a good way.
Author's Response: So glad you found it 'enticing'. I like Dean, he has a swagger that brings it. I hoped by the end of writing it that I gave him his stage performance...more to come. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 20/04/09 11:49 pm
You weren't lie that was hot hot hot hot. No wonder she acts the way she do because of her ex boyfriend and the crazy mom she has. Dean seen right thu her that she real and not what people think of her . love it thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Yes...lil Lourdes is carrying a lot. She's a fruit from the vine of her 'mama' but she has been through a lot. You will see. If you saw the movie good deal...but there is so much more to tell with Lourdes, and I think the movie left a lot of details out. I intend to bring Lourdes to life. She's going to take you for a ride, but it comes from a real place.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 20/04/09 08:12 pm
Wow her ex is in deep. Is his friend talking to the mother lover or husband mmm. This is getting intersting and can't wait to read more thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for continuing to support this fic. Can't spoil. But keep reading you will get to see it all come to pass! :D Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/04/09 04:32 am
I love Sommore!
Frank is the weakest link. They can't get mad at Lourdes because he's whipped.
Author's Response: She's a very funny gurl! Frank is losing stripes over Lourdes. LOL Lourdes kool-aid fierce!! Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/04/09 01:05 am
Dean better be careful with this one. She seems to be sneaky and always planning ahead.
Author's Response:
That's some really good advice...hang on to see if he follows it! : -)
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/09 03:07 am
Nice pic it looks like a good place to relax. So he like to play the mind games he doesn't wanted to see easy but wanted her bad. He better watch out woman can play the same game even better lol. I like this story thanks for posting and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Cozumel is beautiful...hot, but beautiful! They are feeling each other! Not spoiling...but if you saw the movie...good deal. But I am giving the 'b' cast of the movie a little more umph!
....so glad you are following! :D
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 01/04/09 01:17 am
Loving the mother/daughter hate/love relationship. Mama Wheeler is one sneaky lady.
Author's Response: I wouldn't trust her if I were Gus...she is all about herself.
[Report This]Date: 31/03/09 12:19 am
Whoa is this story full of surprises. Katrina is stepping out on her hubby and with her business partner or whatever it is he is. This story is getting more interesting. And who knows maybe the husband is doing the same. Then again it seems as if they are just married in name only. At least that's my thoughts. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Katrina is a 'cat' indeed...all nobility but no loyalty...none. But she loves her daughter in her own twisted messed up controlling "bass ackwards" sort of way. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/03/09 04:14 pm
Damn Katrina's a greedy biatch. ugh
Author's Response: Kat's all about the benji's!
[Report This]Date: 26/03/09 03:36 am
Wow mommy is a shady shady woman. No wonder why the daughter left lol but i kinda like how she playing the game. this story is getting intersting thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: TY for viewing...yeah old girl is a sickle!
[Report This]Date: 25/03/09 11:12 pm
I read the first three chapters on TST and thought it was good. Can't wait to read the rest ... and what a great song to use as inspiration!
Author's Response: thanks for reading...so glad you like it
[Report This]Date: 25/03/09 08:53 pm
I just saw the cast and WOW!!!! This is a must read.
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it. Billy Miller was such an inspiration. I just had to find him the right girl.
[Report This]Date: 25/03/09 04:26 am
nice cast!
Author's Response: TY...for me it's the glue!
Date: 24/03/09 07:56 pm
Great follow up to the previous chapter. And he found her soon only to lose her. Can't wait to see how the rest of their interraction will play out. Please hurry with another update. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you for following my version of the movie. Check weekly for updates~
[Report This]Date: 24/03/09 07:15 am
So dean has the fever now he liking her but doesn't know to tell her mother he found her or the ex. I wonder what dean next move is going to be thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: He's torn literally and physically...poor babe!
[Report This]Date: 24/03/09 07:06 am
Wow girl got some guts to up and leave with 250,000 dollars. It sad what going on with dean have amazing skills and then throw out like yesterday trash. I'm liking the story the myster and passion behind it. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Dean has some major ish going on...he's your average rising star unbridled for the ride to fame. Poor guy! Let's keep our good vibes going his way!
[Report This]Date: 24/03/09 07:00 am
Like the cast girl and the men are hot hot hot hot hot ok.
Author's Response: I am totally visual...the cast sets the tone. I hope you enjoy it. Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/03/09 06:54 am