This is my first review on this board and i have to say i am digging this story so far i really am
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I really appreciate your review!
Date: 30/07/09 07:34 am
Damn Craven has really changed Desire into a sex fiend without much control and hungry too...LOL!!! I'm still thinking poor Perri because she is blind to what is going on around her and yet I'm looking forward to the next update regarding what Craven has in store for her..
Author's Response: Perri is indeed clueless. Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/07/09 04:42 pm
I hate how Craven is toying with Perri...and Desire...I know for his vert survival he does this...but it still doesn't make it any more palatable to me...
Poor Desire is now his very willing disciple...but something tells me that jealousy and envy will soon rear its ugly head...a deadly combination for a ruthless new vamp...unschooled to way of life of the undead...
Looking forward to more...thanks for the update...
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. ;-) Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/07/09 04:49 am
Great update it's getting down to the wire. I wonder if Han will be able to stop Craven. I also wonder what type of offer Craven has for Bradley and if it has anything to do with Desire. Waiting for next update.
Thanks
Author's Response: It will all be forthcoming. It will be Han's intention--save Perri. But Craven is no fool he's expecting some issues to take place. Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/07/09 06:07 pm
So I see Craven wasn't at the top of his game like he thought he was. I know how these men work with a back up plan of sorts...:) Curious as to what he wants Bradley to do. Poor Perri will be taken up into this deceit. Who will rescue her?
Author's Response: It's going to get complicated...stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: 08/07/09 04:54 pm
What a wonderful comment at the top that I inspired this sequence...ahhhh...you made my heart feel good.
Yesterday I read it far too quickly so this morning I decided to sit down and read it again more carefully...I loved this part...felt the emotion behind his words and the love...
"No. Wait. I just. I was. I love it. It's that I've never lived with anyone before. Not a woman. And of course we love...we make beautiful love." He smiled touching her face. But, I want more. I just have been hoping that you'd want to be more..."
Thanks for making my week with this chapter. Trish could bring out the other side of Han and he was open to accept her which is so beautiful. So sad that their happiness was taken away from him but you could see that he cherished the precious moments they spent together. Wonderful read...again Thanks :)
Author's Response: Thanks chocolate for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed. It was a great idea and it would have been such a loss to not have a bridge. :-) Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/07/09 04:40 pm
Oh that was simply...beautiful...oh, how I felt Han's loss...it was so tragic...so very cruel...I think the flashbacks are very much needed in this story and I'm so glad you complied...I have been reading all along...just never replied...this is a very intriguing story indeed...Aaliyah and Trish was always the beacon of light in this tale...glad you so beautifully honored that...I look forward to the next chapter...and thank you so much for it...
Author's Response: Thank you...yes Han, such a tortured soul. Ah...Aaliyah was a special brand. So sad.
[Report This]Date: 07/07/09 07:23 pm
idk who to hate in this story... i'm confused.. who's the bad guy?
Author's Response:
I know...interesting dilemma. It may never really be clear. It's all in the mind of the reader! Thans for reading! :-)
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/09 05:46 pm
I LOVED IT! Imagining that moment so far is the highlight of my morning. Too short Spark...LOL!!! I want the more to come...a little more of them please...then you can get back...Thanks!
Author's Response: Ok...another part for you is posted. And then I got to get back to the story...k!
[Report This]Date: 25/06/09 04:09 pm
great story!!
Author's Response: Thanks vmck! Glad you liked it! ;-)
Date: 13/06/09 06:10 am
Ohhh Craven is a sick bastard and poor Perri is getting caught up in his web.
As for the last scene now you got me hungering for more especially the banter with Trish. I remember that line. I miss her so much. Very, very talented. She could have gone so far with her great abilities :( Back to the present I am waiting to see where you take me Spark!
Author's Response: Yeah, the closer he's getting to the 'event' the more sadistic he will become, good intents but the carnal in him flucks with his human side. It's going to be some interesting turns, so try not to blink! Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/06/09 12:05 am
What is going on? Let me understand is like she is in a trance and he's gradually changing her into his chosen bride. What a bomber that she's getting ill at the same time. So she's not remembering those hot encounters. Is she supposed to be saved? hmmmm...
Author's Response: Perri is the chosen, Desire the concubine.Thanks for reading and the wonderful review!
[Report This]Date: 05/06/09 09:59 pm
That Mr. Frazier cracks me up and your description of Desire's symptoms was too good because it made me remember myself dealing with the flu...not good...:)
But I'm guessing that her illness came sudden and I bet I know who has something to do with it...humph! Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: I love John Witherspoon. "Bang Bang Bang" He's such a fool. Desire has a role to play in all this. She's not going to just speak and back away into the shadows while the main gal struts her stuff. It's a way of shifting the mic from one to the other. It's going to play well. Thanks so much for continuing to read. And for the wonderful review! Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/05/09 09:14 pm
So Han plays a pivotal role in this after all. At first I was unclear of his part in your story so you got me there. If he is going to rescue Perri does that mean what I think it means
So looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: The story has so much to tell. A lot of unfinished from the original, plus the main plot. Han is my baby too, so he definitely gets some love. But Kai...love love!
[Report This]Date: 19/05/09 09:56 pm
I hate it sometimes when a vampire has that type of power over your senses and your very being...it's so chilling. I'm trying to figure out whether Craven is both good and bad. What role does Han play in all of this?
My favorite part is Han's conversation with his teacher because I sense that he is missing Trish very much. I wish you could give us a flashback into their relationship. But I give you major points for that eventhough I want more
Author's Response: Vamps are sneaky, they truly can't be trusted. They are so goal oriented. It's hard to tell good from bad. Ok...chocolate470, I've got you covered. Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/05/09 11:02 pm
Oh now I feel real sorry for him, he doesn't like to eat the humans. A vampire with a conscience. Who'd have thunk.
So now she is in his trance, and.... you stopped.
Well, you kind of write him as a good guy. So I'm confused. And Han? Yes I'm confused. But that is nothing unusual.
Till the next update!
Author's Response: I wrote Craven in the ways of Blade/Julian (Embrace). I think a concious vamp is so effing sexy. Thanks for taking the time to read. I recall you mentioning a confusing startup. It was reworked. I hope you enjoyed. I am looking forward to moving the story along.
Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/05/09 01:49 am
Okay, the scrawny kid. She's freaking out. Oh yeah, things are bad.
Sorry, goto read the next one...
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for reading. Funny how they always take the form of someone who they least likely resemble! Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/05/09 01:37 am
Oh no! Not Desire, not Sundiata! Oh, well, I feel bad, he just wants to be human again. Poor tortured soul. But um...he is still creeeeepy.
We of course have skipped to Rule #5 in my book -- Never work the closing or night shift alone. Poor clerk guy. but why was he moaning? That could be gross.
Okay forward HOOOOOOO!....
Author's Response: And of course the birds that flock together rule...lol! Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/05/09 01:30 am
See that's the part I hate...the ripping. Why does that have to be? I mean, can't they just stick a straw in or something. Its so...animalistic.
Thank you Perri, she has obviously read rule #2 in by book - beware of men who wear sunglasses at night. but that is a no brainer.
Okay, what's next...
Author's Response: I know...the carnal thing. I'm insanely in lust with vamps. They do things to me. The immortal thing and ripping, I could do without. But gawd it's a sexy life! Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/05/09 01:22 am
Tried and true friendship is often measured in the length of compromise.
I like this line. So she is disciplined at all, but if she doesn't like Bradley because he thinks he's the 'shit' why would she be interested in the Asian stranger. She can't possibly believe he doesn't think he's the 'shit.'
Do I need to show her my line pick for the last chapter?
okay, here we go....
Author's Response: LOL Niclapy! You know that the stand offish men get the girl...and that having what is not in reach. Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/05/09 01:13 am
"Excuse me. I don't remember telling you to speak."
He got jacked didn't he? LOL poor guy. One should never take loans from men one can only meet at night.
Rule #1 from How to Avoid Getting Your Blood Drank
He really should have bought it before.
Moving on...
Author's Response:
One evidence of shiesty...doing business after dark. LOL!
Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/05/09 01:07 am
OOOO that was him, in the bookstore, int he suit! Creeeeepy! Yey!
Next!...
Author's Response: LOL. I can't believe I missed these reviews. They're so funny. Thanks for reading! Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/05/09 01:01 am
Okay so the guy upstairs is the Chang-shai? And the twins are his little vixens. And he likes the 'ugly' one. Interesting.
On to the next one...
Author's Response: LOL...Niclapy, you know vamps are strange! Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/05/09 12:56 am
No way that Craven choose a host body that had an awful ride 
I have a confession my mind did think that something was missing from that last chapter I read but why I forgot to mention it is beyond me. I guess someone pointed it out to you...
Better watch out Perri because dude is planning your wedding...
Awaiting the next update!
Author's Response: LOL. Gotta do what you gotta do! LOL. Thanks for the review. A new chapter is in the workings! Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/05/09 11:44 pm
Now we get to his focus on Perri. I do not know how I feel about these innocents dying but I will wait as more of the story is revealed.
Author's Response: Oh Robin...I don't know what to say. I'm glad you are anticipating a new direction, because there will be! Thanks for reading and for the good review!
[Report This]Date: 03/05/09 04:48 pm